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thechaigirl

@thechaigirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

KC the only way I can describe this update is "jor ka zhatka aur zoro se laga"

She is not even ASR's daughter I am just speechless...

Though the first thought that came to mind was may be this kid was may b not khushi's own child also..

Neways coming to the update..

I can't tell u how much I felt like crying reading the hospital scene, two people who loved each other so dearly separated by cruel fate, but now seeking solace in each other arms in the face of the worst situation life can throw at someone...

Arnav not for a minute thgt khushi wud have had someone else in life after him thats how much he believes in her love...

whatever happens I hope they seek " a kinara" after the rough ride ..

P.S KC I tried not writing this as I want u to tell ur story ur way but sorry cud not resist -dear plz plz dont let khushi b a rape victim .

Edited by memyselfandrshi - 13 years ago

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wildandsweet

@wildandsweet

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

OMG - awesome update

the last line was to shocking "She's not your daughter"

what the!!!!!!!!!

i'm hoping she meant that figuratively and not literally

arnav will be broken if she's not his.

loved the way you described khushi's reaction to the news. you nailed it right on the mark. i can totally see someone reacting the same way to news.

awesome writing. you never leave me disappointed with your updates.

please update soon

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Sam

@huntinchild

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

HOLYY!!! Not his daughter? BOOOMB. Do i sense armageddon? 😲 awesome update...as usual i got sucked right into the story. You are a fantastic writer but then im sure u already know that and i sure as hell won't get tired of telling u that u are..😊 eagerly looking forward to ur next update

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3shna3nath

@3shna3nath

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

so u havnt updated yet??😭

i hav been having sleeplessnights..i told u na...yet no update...??🥱

(thts my way of trying to make u update by emotional hatyachar)

hey KC...u wanna live longer??then bttr update sooon...i am a very dangerous prsn n hav no mercy to any1 while am waiting an update frm u...no more a pleading..bt an order!u gt it??😈

(thts me threatening n blackmailing u)

swthrt..u r such a doll...n i'm ready to type in any amt of stupid comments to make u update...🤡

(thts me being sweet to u)

aare yaaarrr...update sooon...pllsss plllsss pllsss...

(thts me pleading u)

maa kasam i dnt knw ny other way to ask for an update...

so buddy i hope u vil fall for this comment n update soon...😉☺️

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ayl123

@ayl123

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

plz i hope that she literary dont mean it

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pantrossy

@pantrossy

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

That was really painful... I felt like my heart stopped .. ... I couldnot take breath...
Hope that baby will fine ... But most shocking thing was last sentence... When she said" she is not our baby" .. I thought that the baby may adopted by khushi but when she again said " she is not your daughter" i felt blank... Why KC why..? Why did u left on that point.. ? How could u do this to ur reader..? U left us on cliffhanger... Now it is ur responsibility to save us... Hope u wont let us die by waiting ur next update...i need sometime to get over from this pain but i m still strong.. I have to

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pallavi

@palo101

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

👏... i really hope she is their daughter... hey were finally building a life together.. looking fwd to ur next update...oh how i hate suspense!! ...

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vasuki

@vasuki

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

hey KC...i started reading this FF after completing Fate mate in one go...and when i started reading this ..i couldnt move here and there was just glued into it...completed all in One go again...:) just as a matter of fact..i was reading chapter 5 when it was time for the actual episode for IPK...i had just 30 min left before i had to go to university...so it was either IPK or the 5th chapter...guess wat..i decided to skip IPK and read thru chapter 5 nd 6...and i wasnt even 0.001% disappointed tht i actually missed IPK... well well..now pls do update :) u r just killing us with this wait...😆