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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Amti4u

You were late for the update and you gave us a shock throuhg the precap...

Waiting for the next update ... Update sooonn

ooo...am sorry for the delay. but loved that u enjoyed the update. thank you for the comment
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: RickyBahl

Good work


i know its the beginning and iam awaiting wen arnav or khushi will give a cold shoulder to the other. Dont know who will it be in ur story.

But the other partner will surely burst out tears leaving aside ego for sure, whoever it be khushi or arnav.

so i will be waiting to know who is going to play this .
Khushi or arnav??
who will decide to move away?khushi or arnav
so that the other partner gets helpless to confront true feelings.

awaiting...!!!

Thanks dear for the comment.
lets hope one does not have to take the tear route...come yes...but lets see if they can do it in a better way.
at times i get so blank while updating..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

ok its 2 am here in my part of the world found this about 1 hour ago and could not stop reading loved it awesome loving this feisty khushi and asr he is in so much trouble loved the updates please add me to your pm list

shall msg u...thanks for liking the work
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: devsum

hoisted by his own petard!... as per your precap...

too early to comment, never know when the table turns...but yeah the statement might just come true atleast for one...dont know which one though
Edited by mtina0207 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: horizon123

Read ur FF in one go. I must say it is one of the most beautiful FFs I have come across. Love ur writing style and the storyline is amazing. Please pm me when u update next. THANKS😃

Thanks a ton for such appreciating words. means a lot 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sadi-

Aww..poor kushi... her father had done so much of damage that had made her so insecure.. feel sad for her.. and hope that arnav will prove himself to kushi to be the man who would make her life a fairytail but in ASR way...

awesome update...loved it.. fabulous


I missed this ydy...thanks you...yes past does hamper our vision
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aamshula87

Well d precap.exactly d same hapnd 2 me.i too chocked my coffee seein it.well d update was fantastic as usual.everyone's views wer made clear.last part was much interestin.so waitin 4 how she take her bull.

Hahaha...that was nice to read. thanks for appreciating the work.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234

amazin part..add me to ur pm list plzz..sendin ya a buddy req

done and thank you
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey friends...Thank you for the lovely comments. Loved reading all the comments. sorry for delay again. too much going on at office front hence a lil less time to update.
Here is the new update. Hope i was able to do the justice and u guys like it. do let me know how was this. in the next few chapters we will see why khushi was behaving the way she was.
So read for now, enjoy and dont forget to comment how the update was.

Khushi came to AR group for the designated meeting with the shareholders to discuss takeover and legalities that would be required. She was full of life. Aman was surprised to see her so chirpy. He went to her and said "Khush u okay?"

"Of course I am fine Aman, u know I always am."

"Khush look, what's wrong, I mean what happened in this one day. is there something I shud know."

"Khushi went closer to Aman, Yes aman u shud, I have come to a conclusion and I am taking the bull by horn.' Whispered khushi with a wicked glint in her eyes.

Aman was completely confused. But more confused was the guy who was eavesdropping on their talks. She just called him bull, assuming they were talking about him, well he was intrigued. The day ahead seemed interesting.

"Wo wo wo'Hold on..Khush, baby are u seriously alrite. I mean u gotta tell me sweety what u planning' u are scaring me. " said Aman in a comical way.

"Hhahahaha" laughed khushi, Aman, u are so funny'La, hey shhh. "whispered Khushi" take ur man away'he is losing it''hhahahah'."

What??? Khushi u kayyy?...

Yes darling'I am super kayyy'well where is that boss of urs'I think we have a meeting lined up'.so is he ready?

U know Khushi ASR is always ready'

Is it????? Khushi asked with one eyebrows raised, a wicked glint in her eyes. Aman and La shared a glance, "whats wrong wid her???" and aman just shrugged? I don't know, with huge worry in his eyes

Khushi went to the conference room and sitting there was Arnav, reading a document and having a SIP of water.

"Hi Handsome"

"Mhhh mhhh uhhh uhhh'what the '.uhhh uhh uuhhh" Arnav chocked on the water and looked up at khushi. He was coughing very badly. Khushi was about to go to him when Aman got into the room with three shareholders and directors with whom they were to have a meeting. Arnav was in a fit of cough and Aman rushed to him giving a questioning glance to khushi, offering Arnav the glass of water. ASR gave Aman a very dark look

Khushi saw that and was barely able to control her laughter. She came to the duo and said, "Don't worry Aman, I haven't yet poisoned ur boss? So relax. The water went the WROOONG way dear. "that wicked glint was back." Immediately noticing that they were commanding unnecessary attention, Khushi got professional and addressed the other members. "Sorry gentlemen, Mr. Raizada will be fine in a moment. Shall we start the meeting."

ASR was sitting at the head of the rectangular table. Khushi to his right and Aman to his left. They were all discussing the plans of ASR for Jashn. Aman was giving the presentation on the strategy, but there were two people in the conf room who had absolutely no idea of what was being discussed. Arnav and Khushi. Aman noticed that and was trying again and again to get the two involved in the meeting in a subtle way. At a point in time, one of the shareholders asked a pertinent question. But ASR kept staring at the screen not noticing anything in particular and giving the impression that his concentration was 100%.

When Aman saw that ASR was lost, he acted instantly and saved the scene. "Yes Mr. Khanna, I appreciate the point. he came to Arnav and touched him on the shoulder commanding his attention back, Me and ASR had a deep discussion on the existing vendors of the company and there future with AR group. And ASR is only too happy to share the details. Arnav came back to the situation that could have been embarrassing. He decided to give khushi a piece of his mind after the meeting.

The meeting went on for two hours and a fifteen minute break was taken for the drafting of a contract that was discussed. The meeting was to convene again to discuss other aspects. The day was hell busy and Arnav wanted complete concentration. He cursed having khushi in the meeting coz she was distraction. And she was acting weird, real weird.

Just then aman approached him. " mmm ASR, is everything alright? U look a bit distracted."

DISTRACTED 'DISTRACTED,YES AMAN I AM DISTRACTED COZ THE DISTRACTEION IS SITTING NEXT TO ME DISTRACTING ,ME'."

Aman gave a disgusted look "whaat???"

"Oh god give me patience. Aman, Khushi, whats wrong with herm why is she behaving so weird?"

"I am sorry ASR, I am not able to understand what u are trying to say."

"Oh yeah, well how is for this, "UR FRIEND KHUSH, MY CURRENT LEGAL COUNCIL FOR THIS ASSIGNMENT HAS BEEN STARING AT ME ALL THROUGH THE MEETING GIVING ME HOT LOOKS. S0 NOW U KNOW WHAT I AM TALKING SO TELL ME NOWWW?? WHATS HAPPENING AMAN, WHAT IS SHE UPTO. God I don't believe, I almost embarrassed myself inside."

AMAN burst into laughter, "and staretd coughing bad?"

What the hell AMAN , now what's funny in that.

'ASR u are funny, I mean since when does a woman stare affect u?"

"Oh shut up Aman."

Oh ok and again aman started laughing. Khushi entered Aman's cabin with the legal doc and asked Aman what was wrong.

ASR completely lost it then, "WHATS WRONG, WHATS WRONG, I LL TELL U WHAT IS WRONG. ? Khushi, whatever u are thinking of doing just stop it? U aint being funny?"

"she gave a very innocent look at Arnav.

Arnav had no clue, why was he stretching the matter, he knew he had enuf control to manage the situation, but something was nagging and urging him on to pick up a fight. He was all bull, whom khushi wanted to take up by its horn. "StOP giving''" before ASR could complete his statement, ASR's secretary came and addressed Khushi, Khushi I have circulated the additional printout among the members, the meeting is ready to start whenever u guys are.

'We are on our way Siya." Said Aman. He needed to diffuse the fire in the room, the two heated glance were generating. The two were looking daggers at each other. Aman caught Khushi's hand and whispered very close to her ears, "Khushi that's not professional so behave. I know u are upto something, but this is not the time and I mean it"

Khushi looked up at Aman innocently and said, "I don't know what u are talking about Aman"

"U forget khushi I know u since u were a kid, so BEHAVE. ASR let us go the members are waiting for us."

Khushi smirked and went into the room with twinkle in her eyes.

Again in the long session of the meeting, decisions were being made and discussions held. Arnav was totally in his element at the moment. Tea was being served, when suddenly his phone beeped. He opened the message box from 'Khushi' and read. "Ok I give in. u proved that u can ignore me and I am really not able to concentrate so let me come to the point. I accept"

Arnav gave her a quizzical look at khushi, as if she has lost her mind.

Arnav tried concentrating on what one of the directors was mentioning. When again his phone beeped "Arnav opened the box having a sip of his tea and red the message, "I SAID I ACCEPT. U WANT ME , I WANT U SO LETS DO IT" Arnav chocked on his tea. It spilled on the table and he started coughing bad. Every member in the room was now sharing the glances at each other trying to figure out what was wrong with Arnav.

One member said, If MR. raizada aint well, we can reschedule the meeting.

"Nooo!!!! Said ASR, Sorry gentlemen, please give me fifteen minutes and I shall be back. I need to have a very important discussion with my legal council and I realize that I cannot postpone it any more. Aman pls continue with the presentation., I will just take 15 minutes with miss Gupta. Miss Gupta shall we?"

Khushi looked uncertain, she had not expected this, she looked from aman to arnav. Aman gave a helpless, u called it on urself look" ASr was determined. Miss Gupta please.

They went to Arnav's Cabin. When they entered the room, Arnav locked the door and said.

"I realize khushi, that this is the distraction and we need to get it over with 'so Fine as u SAY, LET'S DO IT, Come'.."

Precap: the LAMB is cornered

Hope u guys enjoy this. Please like and comment. lemme know how the update was...

waiting guys...

Edited by mtina0207 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yeah beautiful update, this chapter has got less dialogues but more of eventful
I mean seriously, now khushi has adopted reverse psychology technique, he used to give her goosebumps by trying to get physical with her and making her embarrassed, racing her heart beats and poor girl could not control her emotions and to overcome that she used to lash him with her tongue, that is what attracted the mighty the Most.

Now she has understood that it is not going to work, as in the previous chapter, he has openly expressed his interest to have her in bed, now she is challenging him indirectly that it is not always pleasant experience when you get something that you crazily desired, that is what she meant by her message which choked ASR.

But he is ASR after all, will have his own style of getting back to her, precap was interesting that the Lamb cornered, now it is a lamb or a bull fight, only will know in your next chapter.

Thanks for this wonderful update.
Edited by laksh65 - 13 years ago

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