SS: His Smiling Girl Part 10 updated on Pg 108

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Beautifully simple, and Simply Beautiful, Smita...as always, you never let us down!

It was a small delight, in the deep morass of despair and depression I have been in, ever since Anjali & Shyam started getting larger than life and our dear duo stopped getting even a couple of minutes of continuous happiness..,,,what was the last straw was the pathetic murder of an innocent life at the hands of a vicious man and a careless featherhead of a woman.

Sorry, will need a longer OS/SS to get over this one..Love you for giving us this gem,,

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

yeah, you've continued it.

mind blowing dear,

and popular demand, you need to convert this into a SS
pleeease dear,

And i'm on the same page of the update.

yippee, and that was due to my inevitable stalking at late night.
it is 11.40 pm here

Edited by wonderblake - 13 years ago

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divvk

@divvk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Amazing update yaar.. please continue... i am really loving this concept.. please continue more 😊

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Smita, beautiful story as always :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Yay! You are continuing with this! :D

I loved how Arnav thought about her and decided to give her a chance to break out analyzing himself and his past...and then also realized how she changed him. Good job! :)

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

loved it smitha di

it was awesome

i loved the second part more

really khushi is a kiddo😉

waiting for more di

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Wow awesome !! So nice !! Plzz plzzz a second n third part is needed plzz !! :)

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sweetnoori

@sweetnoori

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Oho wow dear its really nice,,,

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sur91

@sur91

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

I thought this was just an OS but now u wrote another part. So can I expect it to be a SS or even better a FF? Oh plz convert into a FF coz its been a while since we got a long story from u and this one has great potential to be turned into one