FF: Arhi: The way IPK should've been[Ch9/Sc3 pg99]

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007
I just saw this "story" today and read all the parts. I wish you had been the writer for IPKKND!! Looking forward to the next part.

😳 that's the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me! Thanks a lot dear! I hope to live up to everyone's expectations!

cheers!

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shreyasonia

@shreyasonia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Hey, I just luv your version of ipk. I wish this was the way it had been done in the show as well.

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Excellent story and concept..read all parts together and loved the way you have written it..where is nani in all this? And how come arnav trusts dadi so much..he should have spoken to khushi or Garima to get their versions...he is actually making a mockery of marriage!

Please add me and do pm me when you update. Love Akash's decision! Super !

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Excellent story and concept..read all parts together and loved the way you have written it..where is nani in all this? And how come arnav trusts dadi so much..he should have spoken to khushi or Garima to get their versions...he is actually making a mockery of marriage!

Please add me and do pm me when you update. Love Akash's decision! Super !

You and I both know ASR isn't really noted for his skills of investigation. He didn't bother to keep track about the motives of his kidnapping, ye to uske saamne open-n-shut case hai 😃

Listening to someone and trusting someone are two different things.. I've explained this before in a comment too.. Dadi is the only source of information about his past and he feels compelled to listen to her because no one else knows what happened 14 years ago and Dadi is on a "my son is deeply misunderstood and is innocent" mission. And uhm, Nani will be there.. I can't make all the characters speak out in all the scenes. She'll have her due "screen space" 😆

Don't worry.. I'm working on making the characters stick to their true colors.

Thanks for the critique! Keep it coming 😊

cheers!

Edited by smitzy - 13 years ago

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shreyasonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Fantastic. Finally (well at least in your ff) akash develops a backbone. Urrggg I just hate dadi- she is one mean woman.

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

awesome story
please write more

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Amy

@mz.brar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

I liked the old title better- and i do consider your work to be a FF or a short story(SS) ...its ur interpretation of events, set in a future timeline, including events that havn't happened in the show.

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

I Love This Aakash :) He's Gonna Be Independent For Payal Naa ?! 😳

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smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: -Tintin.
I Love This Aakash :) He's Gonna Be Independent For Payal Naa ?! 😳

Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!! 😊

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: shreyasonia
Fantastic. Finally (well at least in your ff) akash develops a backbone. Urrggg I just hate dadi- she is one mean woman.

haha, the feeling is mutual my friend! Thanks for the comment 😊

cheers!

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