Dreams Painted With Love Part 30 04/03/2013

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Sanj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Awsome Update...Loved it...waiting for next update...thanks for the PM...

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aquagal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

This Arnav & Khushi are surely very different!!! Love at first sight

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Bewakoof

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Keshini4u

still ddn't PM !! :D btw thanks :D much more romance coming up ;) & 1 hint .. This Arnav is a funny
Arnav :P

FUNNY?????

OMG!! that must be awesome then!

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laksh65

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

very nice update, glad to know that this arnav is fun loving, it would be interesting to see his different shade from the show.

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Keshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: laksh65
very nice update, glad to know that this arnav is fun loving, it would be interesting to see his different shade from the show.

yeahhh :) lol this is Barun :D most of the time he will be funny around khushi !! :D & he will drag her to his funny moods ;)

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

hey..tht was a great update! i loved the way thier relationship caught a pace already...they r already looking like such a beautiful couple to me...as i see them thru ur story...!

loved the way garima was surprised to see so much of close proximity between her daughter and this stranger already within an hour or two of meeeting each other... and yeah nowhere did it leave a negative impact about how she z taking Arnav...

seems like arnav and shashi knowing each other already is gonna get the potrayed leads a positivve upliftment in thier relationship...

especialy when shashi and garima are already impressed with Arnav...looking at his way of his giving respect to all...including khushi!

Arnav getting restless already in thier first meeting...hmmm! looks like u r really onto some good cracking... go on! we need it too!

and addition of the pic did wonders!

just one question- does this Arnav has ASR side too?

plz update soon... eager to know more...

Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 12 years ago

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Keshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: crazy4ArnavSR
hey..tht was a great update! i loved the way thier relationship caught a pace already...they r already looking like such a beautiful couple to me...as i see them thru ur story...!

loved the way garima was surprised to see so much of close proximity between her daughter and this stranger already within an hour or two of meeeting each other... and yeah nowhere did it leave a negative impact about how she z taking Arnav...

seems like arnav and shashi knowing each other already is gonna get the potrayed leads a positivve upliftment in thier relationship...

especialy when shashi and garima are already impressed with Arnav...looking at his way of his giving respect to all...including khushi!

Arnav getting restless already in thier first meeting...hmmm! looks like u r really onto some good cracking... go on! we need it too!

and addition of the pic did wonders!

just one question- does this Arnav has ASR side too?

plz update soon... eager to know more...

the greatest comment i hv ever got . hats off to that !! yeah he has.. but for some time it's covered !! in future it will burst out !! ;)

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crazy4ArnavSR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

it's my pleasure to have recieved the compliment for just a comment... but it's actually u who truly deserves appreciation! just loving the way u r carrying on this story! keep doing that!😃

Originally posted by: Keshini4u

the greatest comment i hv ever got . hats off to that !! yeah he has.. but for some time it's covered !! in future it will burst out !! ;)

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Keshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Part 4

It was Morning & Arnav was still a sleep.. anjali who was his siter.. came inside his room opening the door..with his cup of tea..she still found him sleeping she opened the curtains & made the sun rise come to the room ..

A; di.. let me sleep more di.. he turn the other side no wanting his sleep to be disturbed by the sun rise..

Anji; chotte get up it's 7.30 now.. want u go to office today ..

A; no ... i want to sleep .. plzzz.. go .. anji came & sat near him ..

anji; chotte last night where were u ? u had a party ? when i came at 12.30 u were not here ..at wt time did u come home.. he closed his ear with his pillow not wanting to hear anything.. she snatched the pillow from him ..." tell me chotte where were u ? " he blushed .. he coulldn't tell anything he remembered how he met khushi .. "chotte u went to meet a girl right" he got up & sat on the bed in a shock as how do u know..

A; di how do u know?

Anji; chotte i'm ur sister & from the way u blush i know wt's up to u ..he hugged her ...

A; di .. actually i ddn't go to meet her .. on the way to home.. i met her ..

Anji; what ? what r u telling i can't understand... she gave him the tea ..

A; di yes di .. even i can't understand what happen..

Anji; ohoo chotte u have lost ur sense .. so tell me what happen.. he told her the way he met her & then way she told him everything.. the way he took her back .. while he told this he got the flash backs.. " chotte.. is this a dream ..or a part of a film ? i mean how can she suicide her self like that .. & chotte u have saved a life .. OMG if u were not on time.. then she must have ..uff .."

A; di her parents r so close to me now.. they spoke to me for a long time.. they are really good.. one thing di she is really pretty di..

Anji; chotte .. on the 1st day u met her u fell in love with her ..

A; di dt's not love di .. i just told dt she z beautiful.. when i tell some one is beautiful ..pretty is it means dt i hv fallen for her ? di then that's stupid.. he got up from the bed.. moved inside the bathroom ..& anjali moved out of his room .. after few minutes he came out & stood near the dressing table..he started combing his hair looking at the mirror.. he started smiling looking at him .. he don't know why he felt smiling at his own self .. breaking the silence in the room his 4n started ringing.. he ddn't see who was calling ..he answered the call..

A; hello.. on the other side there was a lady talking..

Lady; khushi r u ok .. where were u .. where did u go last night ..r u at home.. she went on taking ..

A; what khushi ? the lady heard a male voice & stopped talking ..

lady; who r u ? sorry where is khushi i want to talk to her ..

A; khushi must be in her house .. i'm at my house.. & why did u call me?

lady ; what ? this is khushi's number .. & who r u ? where is khushi .. plz gv her the 4n ..

A; what ? OMG her sim .. ok sorry u are her friend?

Lady; yeahh i'm priya.. & wtz with the sim ?

A; dt's a long story .. i will give her the sim in 1 hours later then u call her .. he cut the 4n .. ohh god .. i hvn't changed the sim yet ? then he sw her 4n on the bed ..oh god even the 4n is with me.. he quickly got ready & took his 4n and her 4n too.. ran down ..anjali witness that he was in a hurry .. she came running to ask where he is going ..

Anji; chotte where r u going ?

A; di khushi's 4n is near me i'll go & gv it & come.. anjali smiled looking at her chotte.. he drove the car as much fast he can ..

*At Gupta house*

It was 9.00 am and still she was sleeping.. she heard a noise of a car applying break loudly.. she got up 4m the bed & looked out to see who came.. "ARNAV"

she opened her mouth in a surprising look .. she quickly got changed as much as possible & ran down making her hair .. the bell rang & she opened the door.. all she sw a sexy man with a green t-shit & black denim covered his eyes with brown shades .. he removed the shades to meet her eyes without the glass cover covering his eyes.. he could see she was dressed in a pink blouse & a denim three quarter tied her hair up with a slide .. he couldn't believe his eye.. he was gazing at her..she broke the silence between them ..

K; arnav .. wt r u doing here..

A; oh khushi .. ur 4n .. i mean i had taken ur 4n last night .. so i came to give it ..

K; thnx arnav i really forgot abt it .. until now i ddnt know dt !! ok come inside.. he followed khushi & went inside..

he sat on the sofa & looked around.. no one was to be seen ..

A; khushi where is aunty & uncle..

K; dad must hav gone to office.. she started calling her mother.. "Ma... maa .. arnav has come" from inside her mother replied." give me few minutes beta i'll come"

A; so why r u standing u also come & sit .. she once looked at him & came & sat in frnt of him.. garima came to the living room ..

Garima; oh beta .. u here.. he got up & came near him & bent towards her feet & took her blessings.. khushi was shocked to see this :O he taking blessing from ma? & then he sat on the sofa back & garima sat near khushi ..

A; aunty yday i hv taken khushi's 4n so i came here to give it back ..

garima; ohh :) ok i'll bring u some tea .. she left to the kitchen leaving arnav & khushi ..

A; khushi now r u ok ? last night u hv fainted.. &

K; yeahh i'm fine arnav. thnx :) she smiled.. he was not hving anything to ask now .. he was looking around the house .. she was following his eyes & looking wt was he searching for..

A; khushi so any plans for today ?

K; mm no not really .. but my friend will be coming here.. so the whole day i will be with her ..

A; ohh is she priya?

K; yeah ..& how do u know her ?

A; ohh in the morning she gv a call 2 the 4n & she was going on taking ..

K; ohh .. yeah after that only she gv me a call but i was sleeping .. but manged to talk with her ..

after few minutes all were silent but there was a big noise from the kitchen. a glass dropping noise .. khushi quickly turned her head towards the kitchen side.. she got up when she heard her mother screaming .. she ran & arnav followed her to see what has happen.. she stood near the kitchen entrance all shocked..

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Love Keshi

Edited by Keshini4u - 12 years ago

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crazy4ArnavSR

@crazy4ArnavSR

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

well, first of all... i would just appericiate the way u were successful in bringing out the fluidity between Arnav and Anjali...

especially this part was beautiful in the bro-sis conversation-

"A; di her parents r so close to me now.. they spoke to me for a long time.. they are really good.. one thing di she is really pretty di..

Anji; chotte .. on the 1st day u met her u fell in love with her ..

A; di dt's not love di .. i just told dt she z beautiful.. when i tell some one is beautiful ..pretty is it means dt i hv fallen for her ? di then that's stupid.."

though... its already clear he fell in love with her in first meeting... but the denial mode of his is always welcome... i just love him when it's that way!

ahh1 it was so sweet to see khushi instinctively jump up and get dressed up... when she realises it's arnav... isn't she alsoalready falling for him too? 😉😆

and offcourse the uncomfortbleness, yet both wanting to add more in their convo.. it was lovely!

wat happened to garima... seems like she jst faced another form of DAAdi here too following the actual serial... *just kidding..*..but SEriously it sounds like something leading onto unfolding of another new track...go ahead!... we r eager and ol set to welcome it!

overall a very good update!

Edited by crazy4ArnavSR - 12 years ago

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