New SS: Its Hard To Let You Go Part 5, Page 65 UPD - Page 43

Originally posted by: claireDD

im not making any lame excuses for commenting late this time..
its the wedding you know..but its not very nice to drag it every single time as an excuse..
ok you can get mad at me..im giving you the full authority over it since im pretty sure that being mad at me would be the last thing you'd do...😉

oh gosh i love this family...
its pretty hard for 'em to digest the fact that asmi's all grown up and shes leaving 'em...
you know what,,you always have this filmy effect in your writing..
its like im watching a movie..(it was prretty hard for me to imagine arnav with not so young looks..😆.but hes an amazing father indeed🤗)
i just love the way asmi n ashar team up to pull arnavs leg..
and i adore the lines you bring out..they feel so natural..despite of looong appreciations,metaphors and similies,, its rocking to read some easy going dialogues with so much life embedded in 'em..here goes in case you needed some examples..

"Yes but then, fortunately I grew some brains." Ashar grinned.



"You did?! I could never have guessed that on my own!" Asmara
replied with feigned shock.



"I didn't expect you to either! You see, you still haven't developed any
brains and we're all waiting impatiently for the day you would." Ashar
beamed at her while Asmara pouted
like a kid.



so alive,scintillating and heartwarming...
(need to know the truth behind my craze over your writing??its because i suck at literature..i dont want you to be some wordsworth or shakespear writing all those crappy literal valued stuff...hell i'd whack you with full speed if you do..the blissfulness in your writing is wayyy enough to fill me with your liveliness !!!)
and with ''tata daddy'' you made me a cry baby..😭
( you know ,,wordsworths ''she dwelt among the untrodden ways'' isn't the only piece that could get someone teary eyed !!!)
you never fail to awaken the drama queen inside me..i used to cry over movies only ...but you make me bawl like a baby with some ss of yours...😲ufff shame on you Dilru..its pathetic to be so childish !!!!

ummm i was thinking about this ss lately..
im not very sure about me being ready to let go of this ss after 1 or 2 more updates..so how about turning this in to a FF??you know,,i could be really genius in making suggetions..😉
think about it...hmmm..

🤗🤗 (its a bear hug..sorta trying to make it up to you..its my way of apologising..)

now dont get mislead that i hate literature..i definitely dont..but you are the only person on this forum to awaken this chilled out mood in me..seriously fari thats why you had me glued to your work in the first place..you are so special to me..i hope you've already figured it out ..😃

You know me really well don't you?? 😳 You know you can drag out that marriage excuse for decades and I still won't get mad at you cos I love you too muchhh! Mwahhh ❤️

I have a filmy touch in my stories?? Really? 😲 Wowww 😆 *Does a jig*

Ohhh everyone's having a hard time imagining a grown up Arnav 🤣 I think everyone's reading this SS with a 28 year old Arnav in mind with 2 grown up kids 🤣 I always think of the Arnav which Lavanya imagined in one of the episodes regarding the Arnav-La live in scenario 🤣 He still looked damn hot!! 😳

Ohhh! How similar are we?? I'm not good at literature either! Hence my simple writing style! 😛 I just type what comes in my mind... Never bothering to pause and think of presenting it in a better way by thinking of some better words 🤣

Ohhh, thanks for giving an example of what exactly you liked 😳 otherwise it would've kept me up all night 😉 hehehe! Kidding! But I always love it when ppl make it precise what actually they loved so that I put in more of it in the future updates 😉

Awww, you're such a sweetheart! You cry so easily! Its not pathetic, Dilru! Its damn cute 🤗

And I can easily understand what you mean! I love literature too, its just that I'm not very good at it which is apparent from my writing, I suppose 🤣

Yes, I know! Your comments never fail to make it apparent how much you love my work! And it actually always amused me that how can you like my work when there are so many talented writers out there in this forum! Thanks for clearing out that confusion 🤣

I love youuu!!! ❤️ Mwahhh mwahhh mwahhh 🤗 🤗

Originally posted by: tash10

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Fari 🤗 </font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I know you are a very busy person 😆So I no longer wonder where you have disappeared!! 😛ROFL batameez copycat 🤣</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Yep, it is!!My favourite 😳OMG should I take the fact that I am so active on the forumas a compliment?🤣🤣I just can't stay away from it!!😆But I am trying to reduce my IF time now, dunno whether I'll succeed!!😛</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Yes Yes you do write realistically!!😃I even cried 😭</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">And there is absolutely no need to thank me!!</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Love you ❤️</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">PS: I know you are busy with studies, but when you get your holidays or when you are free, I have a CC and I would love you to join it 😳This is an official invitation 😆</font>

Hahaha!! 🤣

Was that comment on me being busy supposed to be sarcastic? 🤣

Yep! I think you're like the biggest fan of IPK and this forum! You're almost always on the first page of any story you read! 🤣

Ummm... I don't exactly know what CC stands for? *blushes a deep scarlet and shifts awkwardly from one foot to another* 😆

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Hahaha!! 🤣

Was that comment on me being busy supposed to be sarcastic? 🤣

Yep! I think you're like the biggest fan of IPK and this forum! You're almost always on the first page of any story you read! 🤣

Ummm... I don't exactly know what CC stands for? *blushes a deep scarlet and shifts awkwardly from one foot to another* 😆

Originally posted by: claireDD

you dint know that you could bring up emotional stuff??or you weren't so sure about it?
you are a versatile writer fari..wonder whether i told you that before...

what a waste that this is just a fiction..
we could've shared the duo without much drama...😉

oh gosh dont ask about the wedding..im on the verge of madness...😡

and yeah you better feel loved and special..because i freaking love my first friend overseas !!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

Ohhh! It just dawned on me that you must have been done with your cousin's wedding and all 😲 How was it?? Did you have fun?? 😳 And you were the bridesmaid right? I'm sure you looked gorgeous 😳

I find it sooo very cool how you were the bridesmaid for your cousin's wedding! Its something I only get to see in movies 🤣 To me, it was something that only happens in movies and not in real life 🤣 I mean, I know they actually happen in reality but ummm... I don't have any non muslims friends as I told you before 🤣 You're my very first one 🤗 🤗 So for me, being a bridesmaid is like something of a fairytale 🤣 I know, I sound crazy 🤣

Originally posted by: tash10

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<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Not at all 🤣</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">I no longer make it to the first page now, I have become busy 😆</font>

<font color="#666666" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Haha CC stands for Chat Club 😆</font>

Ohhh! Well, that was simple 🤣

Ohhh so you have a chat club?? Where? Of course I'd love to join it 😳 Its an honor actually 😆

Ohhh and ummm Tashu... I'm reaching my 2000th posts! 🥳 I'm sooo excited! What will I become then? I'm a Goldie right now 🤣 Stupid question right? But I seriously don't know! And what colour will I be then?? 😆

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Ohhh! Well, that was simple 🤣

Ohhh so you have a chat club?? Where? Of course I'd love to join it 😳 Its an honor actually 😆

Originally posted by: claireDD

i was wondering why you were so late to reply..
never mind honey..i'll check through mine and resend my reply if i have it with me..
i wish Rowling writes some more HP stuff to get us rolling..😆

ok this is my third post in line..sorry about spamming your thread like this..
but i cant help thinking that i have every single right to do so...(makes a puppy face)

Of course you have every right to spam every thread of mine 😆 Esp since I love when ppl spam my thread! Its so much fun 😆

Yes, when I finished reading HP 7, I was so sad that the series was coming to an end and there would be no more books to look forward to 😔 JK should've written more! She's got a brilliant brain, its better she keeps using it instead of letting it rust 🤣

Originally posted by: SmileyStar

Ohhh and ummm Tashu... I'm reaching my 2000th posts! 🥳 I'm sooo excited! What will I become then? I'm a Goldie right now 🤣 Stupid question right? But I seriously don't know! And what colour will I be then?? 😆

Originally posted by: tash10

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Yep, we've already reached the 9th thread in around one and a half months 🤣Just to say how much we talk. There is me, Faiza, Shreya, Rima, Zana and Abhinaya! You know them?

No way!! 😲 thats not freaking possible 😲 😲 Wowww! You guys must talk a lot 🤣 🤣 COOL!! 😛

Well, I know Faiza, Rima, Zana... Know shreya as well, she always comments on my work 😳 but don't know Abhinaya 😉