Pyaar Kismat Mein Nahiye2 NOTE PG 130 - Page 79

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

that was halarious! I was cracking up when Josh threw the lip gloss at Angad's head scene. lol. Great part, cont. soon!

thanks im happy we cud bring a smile to ur face and ill cont tonight hopefully😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: erier101

awesome part..it was hilarious 😆 lmao!..aww im gonna miss this f-f

thanks😛and thee mite be a suprise in 4 u😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sahr_8

umummm i want a special part!!!
plzzzz
lol that sounds lyke an order...not very convincing eh!!
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nywayz awsome part !!!1
CONT SOON

shes accepted ur order and said yes i wil cont tonite and the special episode wil be on the sunday hopefully anuyways thanks😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

thanks😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Divjot_10

Hey Girls,
that was a total rocking part..... it was funny too.... I have a cousin who's just damn crazy about dino.... I especially called her and showed her the pic of him and she was just staring at him and she pleaded me to put his pic on the desktop.... heheheheh.... u should have seen her face when she did that.......... anyways i'm here to comment and appreciate ur story and I just love it man.... and i can't believe u guys are ending it... stupid guys..... hahaha they're not fit like dino heheheheh.... The girls are prolly getting on their nerves and i guess it's worth it cuz they love each other. I can't wait for the long part..... Good Luck!!
Love u all,
Divjot

thanks again for ur long comment and i need to meet ur coz laiba probabaly wont get on with her as she fancies dino laibas supposedley husband lol anyways im sad of ending it too but i told unum an idea and tommorow il announce the suprise if ure lucky it mite be tonite😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

it was awsome yaar!! rocking !!luved when shaz screamed nd josh threw the lipgloss on anagd head 😆 luved it yaar! i cant imagin e my lfie without this ff! i have a lot of good memories with this ff! 😭 btw shaz back off dino is mine 😡 but agree with u he is not only cute he is damn hot yaar 😃 😳 😆 i just luv him 😳 anywes do post the next 😃 or last 😭 part soon!!!! luv u 🤗 ! 👏 👏 👏

Mrs Laiba Laksh 😳

chil laiba i dont like dino but divijots coz loves him so looks lyke u have yet again a new sauten anyways thanks and i no MY JOSH AND MY ANGAD r so cute innit remeber the main word MINE anyways last part shud be up tonight and announcement for a suprise tommorow or tonite if ur lucky😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: memze

chil laiba i dont like dino but divijots coz loves him so looks lyke u have yet again a new sauten anyways thanks and i no MY JOSH AND MY ANGAD r so cute innit remeber the main word MINE anyways last part shud be up tonight and announcement for a suprise tommorow or tonite if ur lucky😃

oh no ek aur sautan😆nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Angad is urs JOSH IS MINE ALL THE WAY i(m not gonna share him with u this time😡😭😆yaar why do u use this LAST word it always break my heart😭cant wait still tonight 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

episode 110

In the hospital shaz and kripa are dying in pain

Josh-angad im scared

Angad-same here dude

They are waiting outside the labour room when the nurses come out

Nurse1-excuse me angad khannah would u like to be with ur wife

Angad-yes

Nurse1-u ca go in that way

Nurse-josh khannash ure wife has given u strict orders that if u don't come I shes gonna eat u alive

Josh-yes im coming

Josh and angad hug each other

Josh-god help us

Angad-good luck

Josh-same to u

They both go in and in josh cabin shaz is screaming and shouting

Shaz-josh ur dead u just wait let me get Home watch what happens to u

Josh-shaz pls calm down

Shaz-shut up this is all ur fault I h8 uuuuu

Josh-(holds her hand)shaz im here

Shaz-wow ure here wel why don't u have the baby instead ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Josh-shaz we bot wnted the baby

Shaz-u no wat asoon as they finished this crap watch wen I get home im gonna get scissors and cut ur d**k off and ull never give anyone babies again

Josh-shaz pls stop it people r looking

Shaz-to mein kya karun u stupid doctors oi u nurse im dieing cant u give me I dunnow a make up face pak which will make the pain go away

Nurse-im so sorry mam but labour is the joy ofgiving birth

Shaz-joy r u nuts u gotta kid

Nurse-yes 8

Shaz-god blimey josh I don't want the baby pls cant u have it

Josh-shaz tum kya kehrahi ho

Shaz-plsss plss ill never ask 4 make up again pls im dieing im gona die

Josh-shaz itllbe ova soon

Shaz-ive been herebloody 4 hours already why isn't thbaby cuming out

Josh-shaz u no babys can take up to 9 hours or more to cum out

Shaz-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Meanwhile in kripas cabin

Kripa-angad khannah il kill u u bloody dog u animal u tramp

Angad-wats wrong with u kripa why u abusing me

Nurse-erm sir its normal wen the wife has the child she insults the husband

Angad-man that's sad on us,poor us

Kripa grabs his collar

Kripa-poor u poor u u bloody rich brat im dieing here why cant god give boys babies,(lets go?)ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

The doctor cums in and helps kripa relax abit but kripa was abusing angad badder by the minute and poor josh was experiencing probably the worst thing of his life,the other doctor cums in 4 shaz

Shaz-omg ure so cute

Doc-excuse me

Shaz-can u pls help me I want to transfer the baby to him plzz

Doc-mam that is impossible

Shaz-well ur a doc and ur cute I thought that was impossible but it isn't so make this possible

Josh-shaz!

Shaz-u just shut up unless u want me to turn u in to a girl now

Josh shut up

Doc-im afraid mam we cant do nuthin

Shaz-god ok ill tryn relax

Josh-that's it sha zrelax

Shaz-ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

josh ears were blocked

back to kripas room

kripa-(punches angad stomach)I h8 u

angad-aww kripa that was painful

kripa-ANGAD KHANNAH IF U SAY ANYWORDS LIKE TAT AGAIN I WILL KIL U

angad-kripa I was thinking afta this id shall we try for anotha one

kripa-WAT ANGAD KHANNAH IL KILL U ILL BLIMIN KILL U

angad-kripa relax

kripa-relaz my foot ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

she screamed so loud that angad fell of his chair

after 7 hours of cursing josh shazmin finally gave birth to a baby girl.asoon as she saw the baby she hugged the baby and then she looked at josh and slapped him

josh-shaz

shaz-shut up i expect a new make up kit

josh-ok ill buy u

shaz-well go then

josh-can I hold the baby

shaz-of course

she gave te baby to him and after 55 seconds she took it off him

shaz-now go get it

josh-abhi

shaz-unless u want me to ransfer u to a gal now GO

In angad and kripas cabin after 6 and a half hours of labour pain kripa gave birth to baby boy,she hugs anga and the baby and then she tells angad

Kripa-anga this is the only child ure getting from me

Angad-no one more pls

Kripa-never

Angad-plzzzzzzzzzzz

Kripa-fine why don't we transfer u in to a girl and then u can have the babies wat say

Angad-eww no way main jaisa hoon vaise rahoonga

Kripa-what do u mean eww

Angad-well labour pain looks pretty hard

Kripa-PRETTY HARD ANGAD!!

Agad-I meant very hard and only a sita lakshmi like u can over come it

Kripa-yea(proud of herself)

5 years later

We se a massive house with the sign saying khannah and kapor mansion,the khannahs and kapors had joint businesses and became one tye lived together now,we go in to a house and see shazmin once agin beeging josh 4 make up

Josh-but

Shaz-josh pls

Josh-shaz I always buy u

Shaz-plz plz u tel him na piya

Piya-pls daddy

Josh looks down at his 5 year old daughter

Josh-u r l the same for the rest ofmy life I will be stuck with this

Shaz/piya-dad take a chil pill

Josh-shaz why r u calling me dad

Shaz-cuz u r my hubbys the fit fireman

Piya-mommy which fireman

Shaz-u no the cute one I showed u at the fire station that day

Piya-oh yeah with kripa aunty daddy he was a cute guy and hes got a nephew and neice u no

Josh-(gritting his teeth)oh so u mt din excellent verry good

Piya-prateek!!!!!!!!!!kripa aunty angad uncle

She runs to them and gives them a hug,the 6 year old boy prateek

Prateek-dad my frinds comin over

Angad-whih one buddy

Prateek-a new one I made that day me shaz maasi oops I mean shaz an dmom and piya wen tot the fire station and mom and shaz started taking to aa guy and hes nephew and me became frens theyre cumin over in 10 mins hes name jay moreo

Angad-wat dino moreos nephew

Josh-can u believe it nagad

Kripa-grow up u two why uso jealous

That's when the door bell rings shaz opens the dor and sees dino and his neice and nephew,shaz and kripa hugged dino

Shaz-hi dino

Dino-hey gals shall we go up

Kripa-yea cum

Angad-up kyun

Josh-ya I mean stay downstairs

Shaz-weve got important things to do upstairs

Angad-kripa ure having an affair

Kripa-angad!!!

Josh-shaz ure cheating me

Shaz-shut up

Dino-chill dude im going to help them fix the door

Angad-oh we knew that

Josh-ya

Piya/prateek-jealous jealous u got jealous

Angad/josh-shut uop

Shaz,kripa and dino go leaving angad and josh with the 4 kids.

Dinos nepew goes up to shaz and hugs her and then says to her

Nephew-will u go out with me

Piya-erm ya only if unpromise to buy me make up for the rest of my life

Nephew-yeah I will

Piya-ok

The nephew kisses piya on the cheek,josh sees this and loks at them angrily

Angad-aww so sweet

Josh-angad that stupid boy ill kill him

Angad-chill

Meanwhile pratek see piyas boyfriend sista and goes to her

Prateek-u wanna og out with me

The girl slaps him

Prateek goes away sadly whenthe girl comes and hugs him

Neice-itni derr kyun lagadi ye batane par

Al the kids are in love and all the parents are loving it apart from josh

I JANAM LATER

ANNOUNCEMENT-TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS 1 JANAM LATER TUNE IN TO THE SEQUEL TO THIS FANFIC IN THE SUMMER,

Hi guys me and unum loved writing this,I loved it loads im gonna miss it a lot but next sumer well al be bak writing the sequel to this and its gonna be good we promise itllbe with a new name and hopefully this will give u sumthing to look forward too till then thanks for staying with us on this long journey we luv ya and were gonna write the special on Sunday ,it will be full of funny parts of ak and js revolving around those 5 years that went past,these r some things it will include-

.angad and josh change nappies

.shaz make up gets destroyed

-kripa gives angad rat medicine

-angad josh get kicked out the house for not letting the kids watch the baby programs and many more

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Posted: 18 years ago

awesome part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS REALLY FUNNY😆, liek i said before, im gonna miss this f-f, but i am soo glad that ur gonna have a sequel to it!! next summer!!! cant wait!!!! and i have a feeling that the special on sunday is gonna make me " ROTFLMAO! 😉 I m pretty sure it'll be gr8!!!!

Edited by erier101 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 too much during nd after da dilevery.....so da 1 janam is gona b abt akz n j-s'z kids?????? 😆 😆

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