virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 93

naina sorry ya couldnt comment for the update...
awesome update ek dam ahem ahem ...and then the dance flirting around jiju sali scene masti dhamaal love it ...
and precap to sounds damn interesting virat gotta do it ...
update soon

hehe wht a precap...

update soon

Nainu,

I did read the story before and have commented starting on chapter 20 but I never got to comment for chapters 1-19 so here are your well deserved comments. I am so solly for the late comments. This was actually the first story I read on IF as a silent reader and I joined so I could comment on this and the other FF's I read too. Thank you so much for writing it, I can not begin to tell you how much I love this story. A big hug for you for writing it, thank you! ❤️🤗

Chapter 1: Naina, I loved it, I loved it. It is such a different concept, and the best part is Manvi doesn't have cancer so Virman are free to fall in love. Something is wrong with Virat though, it sounds interesting! I hope it is nothing serious with Virman so they are happy soon!

Chapter 2: I loved it again, such a different concept. Virat and Manvi fighting is too cute, but why is Virat ignoring her, it is scaring me. I loved the entire update it was soo interesting! I loved the virman scene at the end, they are really adorable, I can see Virat loves her but why is he ignoring her?

Chapter 3: Haww, she walked in the shower, Mannu what was on your mind! I loved the Virman ahem ahem moments, I was blushing very hard. You wrote it so well! Virat is really in love with her and I am really confused at his behavior. I loved how he gave in to her at the end and gave her his love even if it was for a little bit. Hmph, he stopped, I was hoping for more, rofl, I am joking I promise I am not that besharam!

Chapter 4: Naina, this story is just getting better and better. Beautifully written, I loved the hindi you use! So Maya is the reason for Virat's weird behavior. Aww, his description on how he fell in love with manvi was so cute, he really loves her a lot and didn't want to lose her, thank god he told her before another misunderstanding happened, can't wait for the next update since Manvi madam has the door locked, this should be interesting after how desperate Virat was in the shower scene.

Chapter 5: Aww, they are finally Virman, it was an amazing update! I loved how Manvi made Virat make those promises, they were a hilarious twist to the romantic update. The song selection was also superb, I really liked it. Their passionate ahem ahem moments, I don't think I need to say anything, it was just written so beautifully, it was subtle but still very romantic.

Chapter 6: Hehe Pyaar ki Nishani on her neck, I hope a Pyaar ki nishani comes in her stomach soon too, I am excited to see baby vadhera. Virat was tired after their long nigh and didn't want to get up, hehe poor Virat he can't say anything in front of his wife. The family is also happy for them, yay this is such a happy wala story.

Chapter 7: Haww they thought she was pregnant, hehe with how Virat is behaving I wouldn't be surprised if she becomes soon, he still wants to be close to her after that passionate night. I was laughing the whole update, it was hilarious.

Chapter 8: Hehe Virat is planning for the baby soon, aur bachi ki samne, very besharam Virat but good boy all the besharam Virmanians ask you to keep continuing your planning! Lovely update and I love Piyali, meri pyari bachi, she is so adorable, muah, a big huggie for her!

Chapter 9: Piyali, Manvi and Virat, soo cute jodi! They bond so well with her they will be wonderful with a new baby when they have one. Excited to read the next update.

Chapter 10: Haww Virat couldn't control himself and made love to her, it was very ahem ahem and wild, but I still loved it! You didn't make it too explicit which is what I like about your stoires, you add just the right amount of romance so its not too mature but it still is very hot and gives the readers a good sense of the scene!

Chapter 11: So new entry with Karan, but I wanted more Virman romance, hehe just kidding, I am excited to see how he strengthens Virman relationship because I know they love each other too much to separate each other.

Chapter 12: Loved the Virman moments once again. Jeeman in this one too, it was awesome even though it was a little bit. Hehe Virat teasing Manvi about baby, cho cute! The ending though, phir se sad sad hoga virman I am worried.

Chapter 13: I loved possessive Virat, this Karan is weird and needs to back off my Mannu, she belongs only to Virat, bechari is being trapped by Karan. Virat didn't like him hugging her and I didn't either, only Virat does that during their compensation time too, it is so much more romantic and he actually has the right to!

Chapter 14: Why is this kamini back. I don't like Maya back, the only good I see in it is Manvi will see Virat has no interest for her. Virat's jealousy increasing I loved it. Manvi made him realize that she loves him and only him though, I love their connection and how she realized something was wrong and fixed it, they are just too cute.

Chapter 15: I hate this Maya back but at least Virman are still together, I love how even though he was insecure about Maya he still showed Maya that he was married to Manvi and loved her a lot, their moments had be blushing, he is really a sweetheart. I miss Piyali though, please bring her back!

Chapter 16: My wish came true, Piyali is back. I love you for bringing her back, I missed her soo much. Haha, Virat is making her excited for small baby that was adorable. Now what will Manvi do even Piya want small baby and you can't deny a baby what she wants, I can't wait to read more now.

Chapter 17: So romantic. Once again hats off to you form making the romance so hot and steamy but still so subtle and sweet, its not too explicit yet its not sensoring everything that we would enjoy it the perfect mix, thank you so much for writing it so perfectly. Piyali ki small baby ka acha planning hai.

Chapter 18: So cute again, Manvi couldn't think about being away from Virat for even a day, that is so adorable. Yeah, raat ko machar aaya tha, that's what kept them up all night and then let them have fun instead of going to breakfast, beechara Virman they do not know how to make excuses, too funny. Meri Piya wapas aai, I was reading the update and was like meri bachi kaha gai!

Chapter 19: Haha, phir se small baby, beechari yeh bachi had to ask the entire house before her papa gave her the right answer, he chachu is planning the small baby soon so she doesn't need to worry. Ahem Ahem, Virman office ki time pe bhi romane, shame shame, well all of your readers are enjoying the virman scenes and so am I.

Plecap **Piyali ishtyle😆**** loved it now w8ing for uppu!!!!

🤣hi hi hi ... lov viraat...🤣 lol...

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

naina sorry ya couldnt comment for the update...
awesome update ek dam ahem ahem ...and then the dance flirting around jiju sali scene masti dhamaal love it ...
and precap to sounds damn interesting virat gotta do it ...
update soon

Its ok kulsum... Thnxx fr liking 😊
Nxt part coming soon

Originally posted by: abbay

Plecap **Piyali ishtyle😆**** loved it now w8ing for uppu!!!!

Exactly... 😉 plecap 😆

update and precap was awesome
update soon

Just read last 2 updts together...its awesome...piyali is do adorable n innocent...virat is becoming a naughty day by day...lolzz...waiting their baby planning...rofl...so besharam na...cont soon

Fun filled Precap..no its Teaser..!!! Eager for the next Update Naina..!!