virman FF : woh pal : PART 31 updated pg 145 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice story. Y virat behaved like this? Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it great concept :) pm me when you update, please update soon :)
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PART TWO...

virat was now a changed man who was responsible and hardworking... he joined office the very first week after their wedding and now he went regularly... he would leave for office immediately after breakfast and would return late at night... he has engaged himself in the business that manvi rarely saw him these days... he didnt had time to spend with his one and only wife... and this very fact was torturing manvi... she wanted some time with her husband as they were newly wedded and this starting time is the most important and beautiful time for any couple even though they did love marriage.. yes manvi married virat out of her love for him... they really loved each other like hell but still there were somethings that they were to discover about their spouse as they wre no longer friends, partners, or lovers but now they were huband and wife...

day by day it was becoming difficult for manvi to live in that house even though jeevika was always there with her, all the family members loved and pampered her like a kid but she no longer was a kid, now she was a grown up girl who got married a month ago... she was the daughter-in-law of the vaderas and virat's wife.. manvi had everything but she was craving for virat and his love... she wanted to sit with him and talk to him whole night about anything and everything... she wanted to laugh on his jokes, fight with him on silly topics, go out with him and last but not the least show him how much she loved him...

her daily routine was like... every morning she woke up to an empty room, she would get ready and see virat already on breakfast table... then they all have brkfst and all the men left for office... (the brkfst table was her favourite place these days bcos only that time she used to feel happy as virat sat beside her... during the brkfst her focus used to be on virat... she wanted to see him and feel his presence around her..) after the men left for office, she used to help vanshika maa and jeevika... she then spent some of her time with swamini bua and after that with kadambari chachi listening to the latest trends in bollywood and hot gossips... this was her routine till lunch.. after lunch she would go into her room and call virat... sometimes he picked her call and said he was busy and will call back or sometimes he didnt even bother to pick up her calls... but manvi was never disheartened bcos she knew that virat loves her and nowadays he is irritated may be bcos office and stuff is vry new for him... she used to sit their for hours thinkng of time she spent with him... frm the time she met him first to the time both got married as they were the moments she would cherish all her life... and thinking of that time sometimes made her felt gloomy also.. she was worried about virat and her relationship regarding where it was going... she was worried thinking whether they would live happily like her di and jiju.. as though she never expected them to be perfect like virika but still she somehow believed thet they both were meant for each other and were perfect with each other only... she would go to dinner table sharp at 8 pm to see virat but she was always dissappointed... sometimes she skipped her dinner and said that she will wait for virat and eat with him ; but sometimes vanshika and jeevika forced her to hace dinner and not compromise with her health... she used to wait for virat till the time sleep takes her into its embrace...

but it was enough and today manvi decided to talk to virat about everything that is disturbing her... now she will surely confront her husband by her sherni avatar... she was eagerly waiting for virat to return and as soon as he entered the room, manvi threw a pillow at his face... and was expecting virat to get back into his real avatar...
virat : ye kya hai..??? what are you doing..??
manvi : i should be the one asking this... what are you doing virat..??
virat : hain..??? main kya kar raha hu...???
manvi : kya kar rha ho..??? apne dil se pucho what are you doing to me from the last 3 weeks...
virat : manvi...
manvi : ohh... toh tumhe yaad hai mera naam...??? commendable mr vadera...!!!
virat : what are u saying..?? please mera dimag mat khao...
manvi : main tumhara dimag kha rahi hoon...??? look who is talking...
virat : i am not just in the mood... i am really tired
manvi : wait... where are you going..?? you jst cannot go like this... waise i thought k tum raat ko ghar wapas hi nai aate ho... aate ho kya..???
virat : listen... stop bothering me manvi... pls just stop it.. n yes i do come back home at night
manvi : stop bothering you... tum kar sakte ho par main nai bcos i love you... i dont know about u...???
virat : are u trying to say that i dont love you...??? dont tell me that...
manvi : yep... i am not trying to say it mr virat... i just actually said it...
virat : ohh god i cant believe myself.. how could i fall in love with such a dumb girl...???
manvi : there is no use of cursing yourself... as now that dumb girl is your lawfully wedded wife mr virat singh vadera...
virat : manvi yaar...
manvi : kya manvi yaar... speak up u responsible vadera...!!!



next part will give you the reason behind virat's changed behaviour...!!! stay tuned guys...!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
hey feeling soory for manvi and eager for next update...i must say you are such a flexible writer
Edited by avika26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahw, concept is
Iike Mindblowing, and
Your update was too
Good, Please PM when
You update?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the concept... Wonder what's with Virat...
Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update..excited to know about Virat's behaviour. Please don't create misunderstandings between virman. I hope they will understand eachother.
BTW thank u for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohh maanvi's angry now!!!
Poor maanvi!!
Want to know more!!
Continue soon
And thnx for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
#19
thanks fr the pm ...loved it ...:)...do pm me the next update also

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awesome update can't wait to find out about virats change continue soon and do pm me

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