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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Sounds different n interesting.. It's gonna be a Unique one for sure.. Update fast. Excited to read the 1st chapter.. & pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
waah nice concept thnk god rey taking responsibilityyy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Totally different concept ..
Atleast no one has touched this in any of their FFs ..
Waiting to read more ..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
interesting concept
update soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
wow!!!its just awesome...
i mean ur cncpt z really new n refreshing n i loved it
plx continue n pm me all the updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Thanks for all ur Likes & Comments...:))

Chapter 1

A Guy sitting inside a plane...he wears a white shirt and blue denim jeans ,shirt's top two three button is opened and shows his buildup body but his face is covered with a photo only his eyes is visible and his black silky hairs...and his shirt sleeves is folded .and then another guy comes and sits beside him...
Guy:hey Rey...kya tu humesha ek hi photograph dekhta rehta hai aur ab tak tune bataya bhi nhi hai ki ye ladki hai kon...
(and then he puts the photo down and smiles and look outside the window and thinks)


' I Reyansh Singhania M.D of the Singhania Empires...My Dad Rajveer Singhania Founder of the Singhania Empires ,my mom Priya Singhania...housewife...but she likes kitty parties and all...and she..(look at the photo)she is my life...my jaan...my everything...my kriya '
his chain of thoughts break with voice...
Guy:oye kya hua...
Re :nothing viky...(Vikramjeet Kalsi(Vicky):Rey's friendfrom U.S.A)
Vi :toh bata ye ladki kon hai jiski tu humesha pic dekhkar muskurata rehta hai...
Re :vicky ye ladki meri jaan,mera pehla aur mera akhri pyaar...meri kriya hai...
Vi :kriya nice name...lekin ye lag toh tujhse chotti rhi hai...
Re :vicky ye 10 saal pehle ki pic hai...
Vi :ohhh...acha bata tu isse mila kahan aur kab tha..
Re :maine kriya ko pehli baar school k gate seenter karte hue dekha tha...school main uska first day tha...aur uske face par...first day ki excitement...nervousness sab nazar aa rhi thi...kitni cute lag rhi thi wo...

~~~FLASHBACK~~~
In delhi...
A black BMW stops outside the Indraprastha International School,and a girl wearing school uniform step outside the car and take her school bag and enter the school gate with excitement and nervousness on her face...her green almond shape eye have a fear of new surrounding and a cute little smile on her lips...her hairs is tied in pony tail...and her bag lifted on both shoulder...and when she enter through the school gate she saw a big school building and a huge playground...basket ball court...tennis court and so on...and students are seen in every corner (school hai toh school main students nhi honge toh animals honge lolls😆) and then her eyes goes to a boy in basket ball court who is continuously stares the girl...and when the girl stares back...they both gone to the another world...and then the another girl comes from behind the girl and tap on her shoulder and with tapping she comes to the reality and look to the another girl...
another girl : hey kriya...welcome to IIS...
kriya :thanks sharon..both smiles widely and hugs each other...
(yes the girls is kriya & sharon, sharon is kriya's cousin)
Sharon :toh bata kriya tujhe IIS aakar kaisa lagrha hai...
Kriya :shar main abhi toh aayi hu toh main kaise bata sakti hu mujhe kaisa lag rha hai...
Sharon :mooh se...
Kriya :kya...
Sharon :ha tune abhi toh pucha na kaise bata sakti hu toh maine kaha muooh se bata aur kaha se batayegi...
Kriya :haha very funny...
Sharon :I know...chal ab jaldi class k liye late ho jayenge...pehli class accounts ki hai...naye settion k pehle din hi late ho gye na toh miss jyoti bohot daat lagayegi aur ek hafte tak class main nhi ghusne nhi degi...
Kriya :tujhe kaise pata...kahi tu ek baar 11th main fail ho kar dubara 11th toh nhi kar rhi na...
Sharon:oye pagal...mujhe fail karne main tuli padi hai...yaar itne saalo se is school main hoon toh maine dekha hai ki kaise miss jyoti class main late aane par...H.W na karne par punish karti...chal ab jaldi chal...
Kriya :ha chal...(before going she looks one time towards the basket ball court but there is no boy in the court...and she leaves for the class with Sharon)
In class...
Kriya and Sharon enters the class and she founds the same boy in the class...and they again staring each other...
and she come to the reality with Sharon tapping...and they goes towards the same boy's seat...
Sharon:hey Rey... (yes the boy is rey)
Rey :hey Sharon howz u...and who's this beautiful???(Kriya blushes to listen the comment)
Sharon:I'm good Rey and she's my cousin Kriya...abse humare saath hi padegi...
Rey :oh hiii Kriya..
Kriya :hi...(they shook their hands and a unknown feeling passing through their bodies...and they take their hands back...)
Sharon: Rey sab kahan hai...
Rey : sab ya sirf swayam...
Sharon:dekh Rey tu bakwass mat kar bata na kaha hai sab...
Rey: Sharon sab aaj bunk par hai...maine bhi jaana tha lekin BB tournament aane wala hai...aur captain hone k nate main practice miss nhi kar sakta...
Sharon:kya sab bunk par hai mujhe kisi ne bataya tak nhi aur swayam ne bhi mujhe kuch nhi bataya aane do kal unhe bataungi sab ko aur us Swayam ko toh kacha chaba jaungi...
(Rey and kriya burst in laughter and they both hi fie...)
Sharon:oye ek toh mera dimag kharab ho rha hai...aur tum dono dhadake marke has rhe ho...sharam nhi aati tum dono ko...
Kriya :sorry Shar...par tu aise gusse main itni funny lag rhi thi ki apne aap ki rok nhi paayi aur(she again start laughing and armaan too)
Sharon:SHUT UP U both... Rey tu bata mujhe kyo nhi bataya...
Rey :are tujhe batanek liye phone kiya tha swayam ne lekin tu thi nhi...teri mom ne bataya ki tu apni bua k ghar gyi hai...koi teri cousin aayi hai mumbai se...aur fir teri mummy ko toh nhi bata sakte the na ki humne bunk marne ka program banaya hai...
Sharon:hmm...shi kehraha hai...aur waise wo meri koi cousin Kriya hi hai...
Rey :oh...and the after some time the teacher comes and the class starts...In recess...they trio hang out with each other...and Kriya and Sharon also gone to seen his practice... Kriya is very amazed with Rey...how he dribbling the ball...and all the girls and as well as teacher drool over Rey...and Rey likes her innocence...& eyes...and they made friends in some time...and they enjoys each others company...and the day come to over and they all left for their houses after saying goodbye...to all...
In night...
Kriya and Rey recollects the day memory and smiles...and after some time...they drifted to sleep...

hows the update guyz...
plz click like tab and leave ur comments...
and I want long comments...
ok bye
kriti
Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
res

unres

main first hun

yippie...!!!!

but hey main itni khush kyun hun...???

ye kaunsa post hai kriti di...?

bol na...!!!!

arey ye toh bata main yahan kyun hun aur apna comment kyun unres kar rahi hun...???

u noe na abse im in a new category of not unresing my comments

haha no...???

bhul gayi kya...???

tune hi daala tha

le tu toh meri baat sun hi nahi rahi

den what am i doing here...????

meri toh koi sunta hai nahi

main chali bye...!!!!




























































































































yahan kyun aayi. im in kriyaansh land

bhaag yahan se NO DISTURBING...!!!!!






































































































phir aa gayi..!!!!

kya chahiye tujhe...???

wat..????

didnt got u...

thoda tez bol na mujhe kuch sunaayi nahi de raha

u noe yahan pe full volume pe music baj raha hai

isiliye

what...???

commet????

arey commet ko aasmaan mein dekh

commet nahi?

den?

comment?

ye kya hota hai??

ye comment kya hota hai???

ye word toh maine pehli baar suna hai

ab jo mujhe pata hi nahi hota kya hai main use kise kar sakti hun?

chal i g2g back in my kriyaansh land.

NO DISTURBING this tym

bye...!!!!




































































































































































u noe is waqt tera chehra dekhne laayak hoga

rofl

aapko kya laga?

i wont comment????

na itni bhi buri nahi hun main

kkk???

chalo update pe aati hun

pehle ek baat batao

kriyaansh aren't together kya...???

if yes den mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

ye bahut gandi baat hai

flashback was superb

swayam too bunking the class 😲

ye kaise ho gaya...???

chalo aapki story aapko matlab

mujhe toh sirf kriyaansh se matlab hai

krisha cousins

gud!! 👍🏼

kriyaansh toh abhi se ek dusre pe fida 😆

mumma ek baat batao

ye kaisa school hai

jahan teachers bhi bacchon pe drool karte hain

ghar kalyug hai yaar

chalo update soon

main chali

now no disturbing

bye...!!!!!
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

res


unres

main first hun

yippie...!!!!

but hey main itni khush kyun hun...???

ye kaunsa post hai kriti di...?

bol na...!!!!

arey ye toh bata main yahan kyun hun aur apna comment kyun unres kar rahi hun...???

u noe na abse im in a new category of not unresing my comments

haha no...???

bhul gayi kya...???

tune hi daala tha

le tu toh meri baat sun hi nahi rahi

den what am i doing here...????

meri toh koi sunta hai nahi

main chali bye...!!!!




yahan kyun aayi. im in kriyaansh land

bhaag yahan se NO DISTURBING...!!!!!



phir aa gayi..!!!!

kya chahiye tujhe...???

wat..????

didnt got u...

thoda tez bol na mujhe kuch sunaayi nahi de raha

u noe yahan pe full volume pe music baj raha hai

isiliye

what...???

commet????

arey commet ko aasmaan mein dekh

commet nahi?

den?

comment?

ye kya hota hai??

ye comment kya hota hai???

ye word toh maine pehli baar suna hai

ab jo mujhe pata hi nahi hota kya hai main use kise kar sakti hun?

chal i g2g back in my kriyaansh land.

NO DISTURBING this tym

bye...!!!!







u noe is waqt tera chehra dekhne laayak hoga

rofl

aapko kya laga?

i wont comment????

na itni bhi buri nahi hun main

kkk???

chalo update pe aati hun

pehle ek baat batao

kriyaansh aren't together kya...???

if yes den mujhse bura koi nahi hoga

ye bahut gandi baat hai

flashback was superb

swayam too bunking the class 😲

ye kaise ho gaya...???

chalo aapki story aapko matlab

mujhe toh sirf kriyaansh se matlab hai

krisha cousins

gud!! 👍🏼

kriyaansh toh abhi se ek dusre pe fida 😆

mumma ek baat batao

ye kaisa school hai

jahan teachers bhi bacchon pe drool karte hain

ghar kalyug hai yaar

chalo update soon

main chali

now no disturbing

bye...!!!!!


Omg K
itna wada comment...
i'm totally FIDA on ur and aru's comment...
pehle toh meri jaan hi nikal deti hai...
chal tujhe jyada disturb nhi karungi...
reh apne Kriyansh DREAMLAND pe...

Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
hello der kya...???

i want my answers 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
kriyansh abhi alag hai wo...hm ha...mariyo mat...flashback main pata chalega reason...aur abhi story sirf flashback main chalegi...

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