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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh

hehehe

tum thinking ki main has kyu rhi hoo
pata hai tu pagal ho gyi hai
wo is liye ki main to bhool hi gyi update main kya tha
bhulakad
wo kya hey na gussa thi na
ha tera be matlab ka gussa
to isi liye bhool gyi
main jaldi bhool jati hoo
to again read kar rhi thi
to time lagega wait kar baad main karti hoo



bola na abhi read kar rhi hoo read karney dey mujey

arey maine kab disturb kiya






ha ho gya abhi comment kroo
rehney dey na vese b tu update to kar hi rhi hey to main whi kar doo gi
nahi
jahi chaiye
kya jabar dasti hey
thik hey karti hoo wait kya likhoo
let me think
ok karti hoo comment thora neechey cheley new idea



ok i get it
rey kha ni suna rha hey
rey look hot
i must say
main to flat o gyi
nd kya explain kiya tune
kriya k first day in school
rey looking at kriya and kriya looking at rey
but sharon b na
arey rey kha gya chla gya
hmm
nd in class
rey to jha hey
hash
main to asye hi dar rhi thi
thank god
then bichari sharon
kese dono majak ura rhey hey
kitni jaldi dost ban gye
ghor klyug hey
teacher ek student pey fida
kalyug hey bhai kalyug
bhagwaan hi bchaye in sab sey
woow
megical kriyaansh
u roke it
kya baat kya baat kya baat
i love this


me roke it naaa u roke it...
har baar mujhe
aash aash..ya ashcharya...hmm aage kya hota hai...
ya ascharya-chakit kar deti hai apne comment se
kya baat kya baat

lov u yaar...(oye sister wala luv kuch galat matlb mat nikaliyo...main bilkul straight hoon)
Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
main kon c tedhi hoo main b sidhi hoo i know sissy wala love bakio ka nahi pta mujey
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Posted: 13 years ago
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main a rhi ho
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Posted: 13 years ago
hehe main pagal hoo tuje nahi pta kya
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Posted: 13 years ago
kar liya check jaldi res kar mujey jana hey dinner ready karney mom chila rhi hey
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Posted: 13 years ago
chal ab upd8 karne de disturb mat kar...aur spamming continue rakh
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kamini res to kar mujey jana hey dinner ready karna hey mom chila rhi hey mujpey
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res kar na mujey jana hey mom mar dalegi mujey
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 2

still in Flash back...

Next morning in school...
Kriya and Sharon enters the school gate...and then after seeing kriya and Sharon enters rey come towards them and they greets each other...After some time they all goes for the class...In class Kriya also meets with other friends :Swayam,neha,nilest,simmi,rinni,vishakha,bharat,amar,shivam and karan...and they also did friendship with kriya in no time...
Time beetta gya...aur in sab ki dosti aur gehri hoti gyi...aur rey aur kriya ek dusre ko pasand karne lage kyonki dono ek hi nav par savar the...matlab dono ko hi unke parents ka pyaar nhi millta...dono ek dusre ka dukh ache se samajhte the...Rey ne kabhi apne parents ki baat kabhi kisi aur dosto ko nhi batayi sivaye kriya k...aur kriya bhi apni saari baat rey se share karti...
About their parents...
Rajveer & Priya Singhania:(parents of Rey) Rajveer is the chairman of the Singhania empires...and Priya,she's housewife only for name...bcoz she never take care of her house chorus or child...she loves kitty parties and all...Rajveer for his business deals and priya for her parties neglect their child...
Nikhil & Smriti Ghai (parents of kriya)they are sames as rey's parents...
four were college friends...& also Business rivals...
ok now come to the topic...jo pyaar care dono ko apne parents se nhi mili thi ab wahi pyaar wo care unhe ek dusre se milne lagi thi...dono ek dusre se pyaar karne lage the par shayad dono itne bade nhi the k pyaar ko samajh pate...

One day school organise a school camp to dehradun...and our all gang is very excited for the camp...
In camp:night time...
All were busy in some chit chat with each other...rey and kriya goes for the walk to the near by lake from the camp...and while returning they saw karan and shivam drink something...they goes towards them...and asked...
Kr :hey guyz ye tum kya pi rhe ho...
Sh :oh hey kriya...ye hum whiskey pe rhe hai...
Kr :wooow...whiskey maine bhi peeni hai...plz mujhe bhi dona...
Re :kriya r u nuts tum whiskey peeogi...
Kr :ha rey maine peeni hai...pata ghar main ek pura bar hai lekin jo dad ne bar attender appoint kiya hai wo mujhe bar k aas pass bhi ghumne nhi deta aur mera kitna man tha peene ka aur meri ye wish aaj puri hogi...Shivam mere liye ek glass bana do plz...
Sh :ha ha kriya ye lo...(but instead of kriya rey takes the glass and drank it in one go...and kriya screams)
Kr :REEEY...ye tumne kya kiya wo mera glass tha...agar tumne bhi peeni thi toh mang lete na meri drink kyo pee...
Re :oh sorry kriya..(and makes puppy face...)
Ka :kriya kuch nhi hota tum ye lelo...(kriya take the glass from karan and drank it in one go...)(and after some time they both felt little dizzy...and after drink they goes towards the the tent...)
Inside the tent...
Rey & Kriya sits opposite to each other and look into each other eyes without blinking...
Re : I love u...(he don't know why he said that but his heart says to sayit...)
Kr : I love u too...(and the same with riddhima)
Kr : rey I want a kiss...(rey little bends towards her face and kiss her right cheek she smile but later frowns...)
Kr : uhmm yahan nhi yahan...(point towards her lips)(and rey bend towards her lips and give a lite peck to her lips and back off but kriya hols him with his shirts collor and kiss him byt this time passionately and rey also responded with equal passion...they both lost in the moment that they didn't realized when kriya opens his shirt buttons...and rey opens her sweat shirt zip...They both didn't know what they were doing and didn't realized when they were totaly nak*ed. Rey was about to ent*r her, but came back to his sense and tried to look at kriya, she opened her eyes to find out the reason behind the sudden change of rey. She looked confues at him, rey stared back at her eyes and whispered "kriya are you sure??" kriya was touched by his concern towards her and replied in a whisper "I trust you Rey" and pulled him closer to herself. The night passed by and the young and sweet love birds make love the whole night and finally slept for a little while before the sun makes it's present.

(imp note guyz...guyz ye story flashback main chal rhi hai jahan rey vicky ko apne aur kriya k bare main bata rha hai but mind one thing wo apne close moments vicky ko nhi batata sorry ye add karna main bhul gyi )



reviews tym
hows it...good bad average...
all ur juttas chappal galis dhamkis...are most welcome

ok now bye
take care

with love
kriti

Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res
main ati hoo dinner ready kar k

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