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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting... some of your sentences are run on and have a lot of unnecessary word. still i like it;)... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing and great update 👏👏 please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
when are you going to update?
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Posted: 12 years ago
i hope he find her soon and she will give him a taugh time
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh wow this was an awsuuum update hun...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 13
She quickly sat on the floor with Arnav head in her lap while Arnav was still unconscious'. Suddenly Khushi started to scream' Her pain in her womb started to increase'. She put her right hand on her womb while her left hand was still on Arnav cheek'.

People started to gather around and called the ambulance...

On the other hand Arjun and Priety started feeling something wrong when Khushi didn't showed up after sometime'. Both decided to go and see what is taking her so long but when they came out they saw people gather around something.. Both Arjun and Priety looked at each other for a while nervously thinking what they are thinking is not true'. Arjun and priety held each other hand and walked toward the crowd' People started to move away to give them a way'. Arjun didn't know why but his grip on Preity hand was getting tighter and tighter as they took steps forward' When they reached where they were supposed to both of them left each other hand and ran toward Arnav and Khushi'

The ambulance arrived at the same time.. When Khushi saw Arnav moving into the ambulance she started calling his name'

Arjun: Khushi everything will be ok?

Khushi: Arjun Arnav ji.. Please save him'

Priety: Arjun you should go with Arnav while I go with Khushi'

Arjun looked at Khushi and she smiled with nodded her head in yes'

They came to the nearest hospital as they could'

Arnav was still unconscious.. He was losing too much of his blood'

Arjun was scared to see Khushi crying in the pain... He couldn't see Khushi in pain anymore'

The doctors came running down to take Arnav and Khushi into the emergency room' while Preity and Arjun sat on the chairs outside praying that everything is okay'

Arjun: Arnav? How can he be here? And Khushi ? How did they meet? What happened?

Priety: It's not time to ask and think about anything else except to pray that both of them are okay'

Arjun: I don't care about Arnav.. I just'I just want my best friend to be okay.. She has suffered a lot of pain' and I can't see her anymore suffering'

Preity held Arjun hand and spoke.

Priety: If something happen to him will Khushi be able to live?

Arjun: She has lived without him for such a long time and you think she won't be able to live without him again?

Preity grip on Arjun hand got tighter.

Preity: At least she knew he was alive and happy' She saw him today and all the wound have renewed themselves again'She won't be able to live without him Arjun... She loves him'She is carrying his child'

Preity looked at Arjun eyes which were full of pain for seeing his best friend suffering' He stood from his chair and that is when the doctor came outside... Arjun tried to talk but the doctor left in hurry.. They could hear Khushi screaming more loudly than before'

The doctor who took Arnav came '

Doctor: Are you related to the patient?

Arjun looked at Priety asking her the answer to the doctor question from his eyes' Priety smiled and nodded'

Arjun: He is our friend'

Doctor: Well, we need to start operation and we need your signature on these papers... If you don't sign them we can't start to operation and that can cause the patient his life as he has already lost a lot of blood'

The doctor said as he handed some papers to Arjun... He took them and signs them'

The doctor went back inside and another nurse came out from Khushi room' Arjun stopped her..

Arjun: Nurse how is Khushi?

Nurse: We are trying our best to keep the baby and the mother safe'.

Saying this the nurse left and Arjun sat back on his chair with his hand over his face... Priety could clearly see he was really scared'

After another half an hour Khushi doctor came outside'.

Doctor: Coagulations it's a girl'.

Arjun stood up from his chair and quickly hugged preity... He was so happy he just couldn't believe it'

Arjun: Can we see Khushi? .. Arjun said it in excitement...

Doctor: Yes you can go head and see her but make sure you don't disturb her too much'

Arjun and Preity both entered the room and saw Khushi.. Her face was pale'

Arjun went and sat by Khushi while the Nurse was handing the baby in Khushi arms but Khushi looked at Arjun'

Khushi: How is Arnav ji? Khushi said it in pain'

Arjun looked at Preity again, then the baby and then at Khushi'

Without looking Arjun answered.. "He is having a operation"

Khushi who was laying down on the bed got up'"What? I need to go and see him.. I can't let anything happen to my Arnav ji.."

Khushi said trying to get up from the bed when Arjun stopped her..

Arjun: Khushi don't worry he will be fine.. You have not even seen your baby face and want to go and see that man who left you months back while you were pregnant with his child'

Arjun said it all in one go and little mad at Khushi..

Khushi stopped where she was and looked back at Arjun..

Khushi: I don't care what happen months back' He is the reason why I have this little angle and when he is in anger you want me to leave him and let him die'

Arjun looked at Priety and then at the nurse... Without saying anything they knew he wanted them to leave Khushi and him alone' Preity left while the nurse put the baby in her crib and walked out'.

Arjun: Khushi what are you saying? I just wanted'

Khushi: I know Arjun you want me to punish Arnav but how? He is the man who gave me happiness...

Arjun: and pain'

Khushi looked at Arjun shockingly' She knew he was right.. She wanted to stop but her heart dragged her toward Arnav and without saying anything else to Arjun she walked out of the room'

Arjun was totally mad when Khushi walked out of the room..

Arjun: Khushi you just gave a birth and the doctor said you need to take rest'

Arjun yelled from behind but Khushi ignored him'

Khushi walked to the room where Arnav was'.She saw the doctor coming out..

Dr: Ma'am you cannot go in...

Khushi: I am his wife...

Khushi said looking at Arnav'

The doctor looked back at Arnav' "If you go in then make sure you don't disturb the patient."

The doctor said and moved out of the room'

Khushi walked in the room and saw Arnav with a bandage on his head and unconscious'

Khushi sat on the bed and held Arnav hands in his' A lone tear drop from her eyes to Arnav hand'

He could scene Khushi was there but didn't have the strength to open his eyes but he held Khushi hand and made his grip tighter'

Arjun was looking inside from outside while Priety stood beside him'

After another 5 minutes the nurse came inside with the baby in her arms crying' Khushi looked at the nurse and then back at Arnav who was holding her hand' She tried to remove his hand so she can take the baby in her arms..

Hearing baby crying voice Arnav opened his eyes bit... He looked at Khushi and then at the baby' The nurse told Khushi that the baby is hungry and she needs to drink milk'

Khushi looked at Arnav and he let go of Khushi hand' Khushi walked to the nurse and takes the baby from her in her arms' The first thing Khushi did was to kiss THEIR daughter on her forehead and then walked to Arnav'

Arnav tried to get up but Khushi stopped him and brought the baby girl near him so he could see his little princess'. Suddenly the baby started crying again' Khushi looked at Arnav and then back at her daughter' and that is when Khushi came to realize what she was doing' She remembered then making love and then Arnav throwing her out of the house' She quickly took a step back and Arnav looked at her confusingly what was she doing? Tears started to roll down from Khushi eyes'. And suddenly she run out of the room still holding her baby tightly in a fear of losing her'

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Edited by ArShi_Addiction - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I hope Arnav apologizes about his behavior. Khushi doesn't deserve this pain. Great update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update as always. Khushi needs to be stronger and arnav needs to suffer.

Cant wait for the nxt part xx
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update, can understand Khushi's dillema, after all how much pain can a person endure!
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it its so awesome so khushi left fearing he might give her pain again anyways love it and plzzz update soon can't wait to see what happens in the future
Edited by please6 - 12 years ago

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