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Posted: 13 years ago
ok K n snigu bye..me going
padhai..argh
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Bye Chetu...

I wil updt soulmate soon.

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di where to go next??? 🤔
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K is 4th thread of marriage ready??
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Come here..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/channel-v-dil-dosti-dance/3179923/kriyaansh-arsha-at-126

Pls keep liking d comments when u r in d3 forum.

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updating...any1 here...aru , k...koi hai kya...?
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k pehle apna cmnt unres kar...fir update dungi...chota cmnt karegi chalega...par apna cmnt jaroor unres kar...
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unres kar le toh bata diyo...update kar dungi
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Chapter 9


Swayam reach KFW...



Reception



Swayam :excuse me...I'm Swayam Shekhawat...and I want to meet ur MD its urgent...

Receptionist :sorry sir u cat coz mam's not in london...

Swayam :what...?...ok may I plz know who call me before sometym...and said the deal is cancel...

Receptionist :may be mam's PA Ria...

Swayam :and where is ria...?

Receptionist :hmm here she's coming...



(swayam turns and shock took over his face...)



Swayam :Ria

Ria :swayam...wow what a pleasant surprise...what are u doing here...and hows is sharon nil vicky neha..tani rey... how are u all...?

Swayam :hey hey girl give urself a break ok...sab theek hai aur main yahan deal k liye aaya...jo unfortunately cancel ho gyi...

Ria :oh toh tum ho Mr. Swayam Shekhawat India se...

Swayam :aur deal cancel tumne hi ki hai..

Ria :nhi meri boss ne...main toh unke orders follow kar rhi thi...

Swayam :waise deal cancel kyo ki...

Ria :bcoz Miss. Khurana ko late comers pasand nhi hai...aur wo kisi ka wait nhi karti...

Swayam :aur ye tumhari Miss Khurana milegi kaha...

Ria :swayam tum na sirf 30 minutes late hi...30 min pehle hi mam apne fiance k saath paris gyi hai...



Flashback before 30 minutes...

Kriya is working on some designs...when a handsome looking man ehters kriya's cabin...kriya going to shoot daggers on that person...when he saw that his best friend and would be husband is here...



Kriya :uday what are u doing here...u know na office timings main mujhe disturbance pasand nhi hai...

Uday :yes sweetheart mujhe pata hai...lekin tum ye bhul gyi ho ki humne aaj paris jaana that...tumhare shoot bhi hai..meri meeting bhi...aur humara vacation bhi...aur shaddi ki shopping bhi toh karni...

Kriya :uday abhi jaana zaroori hai kya...bohot kaam karna hai...

Uday :yes aaj hi jaana hai...chalo utho...humara private jet bhi ready hai...bas tum ready nhi ho...



(then they goes to Km...and then Khurana land take there jet and fly for paris)



Present



Swayam :aur kab tak milegi ye Miss. Khurana...

Ria :sorry but 1 month se pehle nhi aane wali...waha unka shoot bhi chal rha hai...aur holidays par bhi gyi hai...

Swayam :ria kuch ho sakta hai..ye deal bohot imp hai...agar deal nhi hui toh hume bohot loss hoga...KFW k saath deal kar rhe hai...ye jaane k baad investors ne invest kiya hai company main...plz kuch help ho sakti hai toh batao...

Ria :ha ek tareeka hai...Geet Mam

Swayam :Geet mam Ye kon hai...

Ria :abhi bata chal jayega.1.minute...



Ria :suzy(receptionist) plz dial geet mam number...

Suzy :but geet mam is in her cabin...

Ria :geet mam is here...oh god I have to report her immediately...swayam plz follow me...



Geet's Cabin

Geet is workin on some file...when she hear a knock

Geet :come in...

Ria :Godd afternoon mam...

geet :Good afternoon ria...Is there something important...

Ria :yes mam...

Geet :shoot

Ria :Mam Mr. Shekhawat wants to meet u...

Geet :bring him hhere



(swayam and ria enters cain)



Swayam :hello mam I'm swayam shekhwat...

Geet :Mr. Shekhawat plz take ur seat first..and I'm GeetMSK

Swayam :GMSK MSK's wife...means this company is belongs to Khurana Empires...

Geet :well yes this is my SIL company...waise aap maan se mile hai...

Swayam :yes mam...sir ek baar humare colg aaye the..well humne hi unhe bulaya tha humari help karne k liye...

Geet :konse colg...

Swayam :St. Louis mumbai..

Geet :oh...(in mind)...toh ye swayam kriya ka best friend...thank god kriya yahan nhi hai...bohot mushkil se kriya apne past se bahar aayi hai...apni life mai aage badna shuru kiya hai...ab uska past uske samne nhi aana chaiye...plz babaji...sab theek rakhna...

Swayam :mam aap kuch soch rhi hai...

Geet :hmm nhi...bataiye yahan aapko kaise aana hua..

Ria :mam main batati hoon mam Mr. Shekhawat humari company k saath deal kar rhe the...lekin late hone ki wajha se K mam ne deal cancel kardi...

Geet :oh god ye bhai behan na pure dust danav hai...Sorry Mr. Swaym...but meri hubby ko aur SIl ko na wait karna bilkul pasand nhi hai...but dont worry...ye deal cancel nhi hogi...meri SIL toh nhi hai...but ria...saara kaam sambhal legi..kyo ria..?

Ria :yes mam...mam but agar K mam se pooch lete toh...

Geet :ria main keh rhi hoon na...aur wo meri baat kabhi mana nhi karegi...(self talk)nahi wo chahegi uske best friend ko loss ho...

swayam :thank u man aapne meri bohot badi problem solve kardi...

(geet smile..and then swaym leaves)


In mumbai India...

Kriya's dance academy

we saw a handsome face work in some files but he have no glow on his face...

and then a lady enters wear bluue saree...

Lady :rey tum abhi tak kaam kar rhe ho...tumhe yaad hai na hume shopping jaana hai...(yes the guy is rey...who lost his glow after kriya left)

Rey :sharon plz mujhe koi shopping nhi jaana...main ye shaddi sirf mom dad aur tum logo k liye kar rha hoon...aur is shaddi ki preparations main shopping main mujhe koi interest nhi hai...plz mujhe in sab se dur rakho...

Sharon :rey hum sab jaante hai tum taani se shaddi sirf hum logo k liye kar rhe ho...aur abhi bhi tum sirf kriya se pyaar karte ho...but rey...kriya ab is duniya main nhi hai...she's dead aur wo kabhi wapas nhi aayegi...plz try to move in in ur lyf...tumhe bhi khush hone ka haq hai...

Rey :nhi sharon mujhe kush rehne ka haq bilkul nhi hai...aur wo jaane k baad toh bilkul nhi...main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nhi kar sakta sharon...galti sirf meri hai...agar main kriya ki unkahi baato ko samjh leta toh kriya humare saath hoti...agar us din mujhe sachayi pata nhi chalti toh main humesha sochta rehta...kriya ne kabhi mujhse pyar nhi kiya tha...


Flashback...

St. Louis colg...

this the last year of the colg for the gang...and new students also join the colg...

rey is still a gs...

sharon came to rey...

Sharon :rey girls locker room main lockers kam pad rhe hai...tumne kaha tha..kriya ka locker hum kabhi nhi kholenge na hi kabhi kisi ko locker use karne denge...par rey its imp...hume wo locker 1 student ko dena hoga...wo locker colg ki property hai...

(rey half heartdly agrees with sharon)

Rey :thik hai sharon...but 1 request...wo locker main hi open karunga colg khatam hone k baad...

Sharon :ok


rey go to girls locker room...after colg timing...and he open the kriya's locker...she found some hair clips...her one dress...and one diary...after thinking a lot...he opens her diart and starts reading...

after reading he cries a lot...

Rey :kyo baatcutter kyo main tumhe samjh nhi paaya...plz baat cutter mujhe maaf kardena...I love u kriya I love u...


next day he tells all the truth to the gang...all feels really guilty coz of them...kriya sacrifice her love...

and all are also crying...


Flashback ends...




pheww thak gyi...now reviews tym...I want long comments ok...

and I want comments from all of u...ek comment karne se kangal nhi ho jaoge...

yaar read karte ho toh cmnt bhi kardiya karo...

itni kya kanjoosi...


agar mujhe comments milenge toh main next update karungi...warna is ff ko bhul hi jao...

aap logo k liye wajha se unhe bhi suffer arna podega jo humesha comments karte hai...


and plz guyz...thode colorful comments de diya karo...


aur afar sabne comment karne ka socha hai toh niche boxmain jo note hai...warna mat padna



guyz this the last update of the month of destiny's game...next update after 25th september...the resaon is as u all know...exams is near...and my exams going to start from 15 sept..and will finished on 26th...and I will try to give u all update on 27 or 28



okbye tc

luv u all

kriti


Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Ughhh...u will make me hate Uday...
Agar woh ruk gayi hoti toh Swayam se mil paati...
Flashback bhi awesome tha...
Abb update ke liye wait toh karna hi parega...
So m waiting...
Not 4 sept's end ...
Cuz meri exams hai oct mein yaar...
But agar yeh month jaldi khatam nahi hua toh...
Tera update nahi milega...

@ K- Tune mere pehle cmmnt kar diya...unwah 😭
Edited by cherrydrops2 - 13 years ago

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