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Tammie

@saomom

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#791

Loved it! Glad to see this kind of Arnav...

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Arshi86

@Arshi86

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#792

Oh Arnav's in trouble, ab ayaga mazza. Personally I am glad that Arnav confessed to Shasi and Girima, to me that seems to be more in his nature, he is a very honest and straight forward person, he wants to have a pure relationship with Kushi and respects her and her family enough not to cheapen it by hiding their relationship.

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-Grace-

@-Grace-

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#793

Hi Naina!

so ive been reading your FF for a while now actually ever since its started but i dont comment on a regular basis

today after reading the update i thought i should comment

people who say this is becoming just like any other FF or arnav's character is boring them out or its losing its charm are wrong or atleast i dont agree with them

this FF is VERY different and i LOVE it to the CORE, its never lost its charm but it seems to be increasing by each update

im always excited and thrilled to read ur updates and you never fail me to feel that way

and arnav's character i love it in this FF, you've shown him to be practical, so make fair decisions and to be intelligent and sensible with keeping the true essence of ASR

im truly very impressed at the lengths and frequency of your updates (believe me i really am, cuz even iwrite FFs/SSs and take forver to update lol so i envy you for that)

also whenever i think that this story is about to end and all you add a new twist and make it make it even more interesting.

And i would just like you say best of luck for the future updates and if you need help in translating dialogues or something feel free to PM me =)

thanks for an amazing story<3

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#794

great update!!
wow...arnav told khushi's parents..didnt expect it so soon...but liked it!
the closing line of khushi..." How dare he "..cracked me up!!

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Jador

@Jador

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#795

HI, I have been a silent reader of your FF for quite some time now (unfortunately circumstances dont allow me to comment no matter how much I want), but when I read the note after today's FF I had to say this: you are a good writer and this story is one of the few FFs i enjoy reading. You have developed the characters well and if anyone thinks otherwise, its their personal opinion. Please dont get disgeartened by criticism. Instead continue what your doing - writing a brilliant, romantic ArHI lovestory.

Waiting for the next update...

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Sadaf

@butterfly06

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#796

Very nice. I like how upfront and honest everyone is.

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#797

Wow Naina its beautiful update. Next level starts. My prediction about Khushi came true..thumps up Afna. But Arnav side was totally unexpected. I really like that. First he determinent to meet her family, then very polite to them, then had a cofee with them & the most important he came again and tell the truth about their relationship ... I like this way. Its nothing to hide. They are in love not in a another relationship(you know what i mean) . So I am glad and like this way. They took another step in their relationship. He asks for permission and she said yes to her family. Now next step Raizadas... I am excited for their phone conversation. Thanks for PM. Waiting for next update

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#798

Naina...you should write for your self and the readers out there that ENJOY reading your work, and by the looks of it there are plenty of US readers!! I love this story...and Arnav shocks me all the time, but I swear I could KISS him today for his honesty with Khushi's parents...what a gem of a guy!!!

Keep up the great work!!

--Nags

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peepli

@peepli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#799

Another rocking update..your updates are all so down to earth..your characters do things which normal people do..loved the update..keep them coming..

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#800

i would like to make a couple of points here...firstly, this FF is your baby...so shape it up in a way you deem fit...you should not, under any amount of pressure whatsoever, be influenced to change it's content just to appease a certain section of your readers...i am sure there tonnes of readers who would appreciate/ critique whatever you put up, instead of forcing you to change track...& i totally second you on the fact that they should never hide their relationship atleast from their families...i mean, what's there to hide in the first place..they are not errant kids, caught doing some forbidden stuff...the fact that they have their family's blessings would only make things more beautiful in the long run... now coming back to this particular chapter, what do i say about it?..suffice to say i loved every bit of it- arnav & later khushi's conversation with shashi was the highlight for me...amazing job as always dear...do update soon...& thanks for the pm...😃

Edited by shagun-rocks - 13 years ago