*Completed* Th#2 ArHi SS: Fire and Fire

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meradil

@meradil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

this was sooo freaking cute!!!

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#502

You are very lucky jeeja ji. You got the smarter sibling! 🤣 Awesome!! The ending was sooo cute!! 😳 I don't know how you manage so many stories at a time 😛

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awaww

@awaww

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

I loved this. You tricked me and Arnav so well.

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zoya

@zoya-shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

that was a great surprise for arnav and for me.loved the update.sorry for the late comments.couldn't get time to check my inbox.

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zoya

@zoya-shah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

omg zehra!😆.ashoutosh was a kiddo.that was a bigger surprise than khushi not really getting married.loved the ending.thanxs for the pm.

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#506

I so loved this story. It is totally awesome and real funny. I had thought from the start that this was a plan by Khushi. I mean she is known for her nautanki. But the scene where she wore the dupatta gave me doubts. And when she said she was engaged to Ashutosh i guessed that it must be a kid coz that is something Khushi would prank Arnav with. Loved the whole story. Simply superb. And it was total filmy.

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DasGH

@DasGH

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

Beautiful story witha happy happy ending..😛

Ashutosh n pooja in a Rabba vey moment🤣

Loved it👏

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pixie_n

@pixie_n

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Posted: 13 years ago

#508

gosh i luv all ur WORK <33 finally i hv read all ur SSs..simply amazing

dis story ws so beautiful<3

loved it

Edited by pixie_n - 13 years ago

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mayabegum

@mayabegum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Eeek.

just read all your updates from chapter 5 right to the end of your ss.

so sorry for the late comment!

Chap5- Aww that was such a cute update! i loved the way you descirbed how Arnav cried, and the scene between him and anjali and the way he said"no one loves me" that was soo heart touching!

chap6- Oh wow!

so we finally get to know the real truth! I loved the part beween Arnav and Khushi and the way he said to her that everyone leaves him because he was "bad" again that was such a heart touching scene!

Chap7- Right madam, how did you come up with a brilliant plot like that hey? cant believee austosh was just a little kid.. Ahaha ghat was such brilliant!

Loved the whole FF as a whole and i cant wait to read more of your on going work and your new writings to come ;)

thanks for the PM and again very sorry for the late comment! 😃

Edited by mayabegum - 13 years ago

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#510

That was a lovely ride... each turn we took, lead us to a marvellous treat. I am a bit sad it is the last chapter... i love light and sweet stories like this one. No major badies to give me a heart ttack and all. thank you .