Os ~~swaron in Village~~ prt 5 updated - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
hi dear!!excellent one,pagal ho rhi hoon,nxt parhne ke liye.n i m sorry 4 being late,net itna slow tha puch mat!!plz jaldi update krna..luv u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Himani read both the parts in one go.
What an idea...visit to a village its sure gonna be interesting.
Loved both the updates.
Jaldi update the next part😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

<font size="6" color="#ff0000">Himani update ...</font>



yaar current went...i'll try to post as soon as curren come...otherwise i'll update tom.mrng ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Itna chotu sa update...I want more 😔

Ohk now lemme come to the update...Awww this was such a sweet n cute update...it was simply OUTSTANDING 😊

Awesome awesome awesome update Himani 😊Superb update Deetha 😊 this was such a cute n emotional update...it was simply OUTSTANDING 😊

Awesome awesome awesome update Himani 😊

Enjoyed reading every bit of it...I'm super duper excited for this train journey 😃 n now toh apna majnu gane wala hai wo v apni angel k kehne pe hayee...I toh just can't wait anymore...I'm sooo excited 😃

Btw brilliant writing Himani...keep it up 👍🏼

Thanx a lot for the pm n update fast 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Oye wen vil u update? 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Oye wen vil u update?😳



yaar 2 prt updated amd 3 prt i"ll update today !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
It's amazing please update please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Thank you so much for your love and support guys...heres the next part, i hope you like it as well...

A cute soft voice caught his attention "please sing na"

Swayum turned around saw Sharon standing right behind him.

"I mean you sing so well, so why not?"

All in shock "Tumne kab suna?"

"Umm'wo '.. mene nai suna'.."Sharon denies nervously

Again all kids start screaming

"Swayum bhaiya sing''"Swayum bhaiya sing"'' "Swayum bhaiya sing"

"Ok'.ok'..ok I m singing'..hey buddy give me your guitar" Swayum shouts

All settle down and Swayum start singing'.guys I want you to read the lyrics first and than listen the song.

Here is the link for the song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ht1yTMkBVew

With all the emotion s and love Swayum start singing

mujhe raat din ab tera intezaar hai

mujhe raat din ab tera intezaar hai

bataun tujhe kis tarah kitana pyaar hai

Tera intezaar hai, mujhe tujhse pyaar hai

mujhe tujhse pyaar hai,tera intezaar hai

His love is so visible in his soft voice,

His endless love and endless wait.

Tanhainya bhi hai, bechainiya bhi hai

Tanhainya bhi hai, bechainiya bhi hai

Masoom dil bhi hai, majbooriya bhi

sadayein teri kyun mujhe aati nahein

woh yaadein teri dil se kyu jaati nahi

I will wait till this loneliness, restlessness,

and boundedness to come to an end.

Le aayenge sanam, tujhko ko mana ke hum

Le aayenge sanam, tujhko ko mana ke hum

Pagal se ho gaye, dil ko laga ke hum

Deewaane ko tu ek naya koi naam de

Subah pyaar ki, pyaar ki koi sham de

So here Swayum ends the so with some questions to be answered by Sharon, all the kids and everyone gives a huge applauds to him'Sharon still lost in his song, his sweet voice, he emotion and most of all his love'her chain of thoughts broke by a cute voice of a cute lil boy..

"Hello princess..." said boy and offers a red rose. (In same style like Swayum offers her on rose day'lol) flashback flashes against her eyes how Swayum did the same on rose day and smiles on the coincidence.

"Thank you" she accepts the rose and gives her angelic smile to the boy.

Now a strict voice ends all the fun and entertainment

"Kids on your births now and go to sleep" Hitler miss.

All kids went to their respective births and others too disperse to their respective seats'..but before our gang leaves the same boy came and tells Sharon to bend a little, as she bends boy kisses her on her chicks and says "good night princess" and runs to his birth. Rey took advantage and whispers in Swayum's ear "Dekh dekh kaise teri princess ko apni princess keh raha hai, good night wish bhi kiya and that to with a kiss'.haaw!!!"

"arey no...Small kid yaar jaane de" Swayum tries to hide insecurity. (Insecurity wo bhi ek small kid se lol)

"arey small-wsmall kuch nai, kya tune kabhi use gud night kiss kiya itne dino ke relation me nai naa'.see uss kid ne first meeting me hi Sharon princess bhi bol diya and good night kiss bhi de diya'smart kid I must say" adding fuel to the fire'bechara majnu jealous and that to with a kid hahaha'.

Vicky broke their talk and loudly "guys I think we should go to our seats and let kids sleep'good night bacho"

"Good night bahiya" all kids in chorus

All went to their seats, all of them not feeling sleepy so they decides to play a game (I m sure we all played this game a challenging a romantic one)

Guys aaj isi se kaam chala lo'I know its too small and sorry for that sab current failure ki wajah se hua'.aage kaya hota hai uske liye next part ka wait karna padega.😃😃 Next part would be full of Swaron'.😳😳so have fun n enjoy!!! Don't forget to hit like tab and comment'.guys do comment I really love them❤️'..till than take care guys.😊😊


Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
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kitna chotu sa update himu..
but maza aya..😆i loved rey..so naughty😆..bechare swayam se kya ho gaya..ek bacche se insecurity..shit!😆
but the tats LOVE..😳baccha ho ya koi aur..apni gf ko kisi aur ke saat..koi ladka bardaash nahi karega..😳

p.s nw me waitin fr swayam's gud nyt kiss to sharon☺️
Edited by neetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Ye Rey Narad Muni ka kaam kab se karne laga? 😆. Lovely update and nice song. Th song really said a lot of Swayam's love for Sharon. Last portion of this update was really good where Rey was trying to make Swayam jealous. Ab bas Swayam bhi jaaye aur Sharon ko ek good night kiss de de. 😛

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