Ecstasy : An ArSha SS ! *Updated-Pg 14* - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
aaWW TEASING WAS Sooo AMazing lovd it
Update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update...
Thankx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
gud

but y is that Vrinda is creating problems everywhere
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Res. 😳

Mujhe pata hai I'm late. Exams dude.
Don't give me that look now.

I'll unres this in some time.
You got me right. I'll take my sweet time in unresing. I'm a laze you see! 🤣

Till then adios. Love you! :*

Aditi


--Unres--

So here comes my lamba waala comment! 😎

Originally posted by: kittu_arsha

| Chapter 3 |

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Late Again..Sorry 🤣

Now what sort off punishment would you like to face? 😛

Sooo..This Part is Dedicated to My Sweetest Asma Di..OUR Peacemaker.. ❤️

As ITS HER Hap-Hap-Hap-Happy Birthday ! 😳

Happy Birthday Di 🥳

Enjoy 😛

Sure, we will. 😉




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We were having Fun when the Driver Rushed towards us. He spoke panting "baba log..vo Bus kharab ho gayi hai..Shayad se kafi garam ho gayi hai..aur theek hone tak der ho jaegi"

It was Already 6 PM..We had No Other Option but to Spend Our Night there..n The Worst Part was There was Not a Single Soul to be seen there..Damm ! We were Hungry !

Hahaha. The best possible situation. Bus kharab ho gayi. Yay. I hope we get a confession soon. As you know ab toh maahol bhi aisa hi hai. 😉

Everyone Sighed..We Settled a Born fire n were Sitting in a Circle..Everyone was hell Tired.. 🥱

Archi finally Spoke in a Low tone "Mujhe bhook lagi hai" 😕

Lol. I love this character. He's always hungry. Either as Vicky or as Archie. 🤣

We could Understand as We all were Hungry.

How could Alisha see his Love Sad..She Probed "Umm..Dhabe par koi nahi hai toh kya hua..Saaman toh sara hai na..Hum bana lenge Khana!" with a Smile on her face. 😳

Aha. I like this girl. 😳

"Khana? Hum banaenge..Pagal ho gayi hai kya Alisha" finally Shakti Speaked. 👎🏼

Lol. This was expected. After all our angel and cooking. Lol, I do not expect that from her! 😛

Haha..Poor She..I Know She has No Idea about the C-O-O of Cooking !😆

He's such a good friend. Knows her so well. 😃

"Na Shaku Bai ! Koi bhi banalega but Not You..Mujhe abi Marna Nai hai. " I Teased.

"Oh Shut Up Kunwar" She started running besides me but Vrinda..She has to Interfere.

Lol. This was a nice punch. I liked it. Uh-huh. I hate this Vrinda naani. God, why does she have to spoil the *perfect* moments? 😡 🤢

"Oh Comeon Guys..Stop..Don't Worry I am Good at Cooking..I'll Help" She Excitedly Said.

Of course. After all, she's our very own bride. 😳

Shakti was jealous now.She couldn't help but spoke "Oh..Ofcourse Vrinda..You Must be Knowing How to Cook no..Afterall you were ALMOST Married in Lux Perfect Bride..Right?" 😳

Hahaha!! This was the very thing going on in my mind. 😆 Love you Shaks! 🤗

Everyone broke into fists of Laughter..Vrinda was Just Quiet and Looked down..🤣

Shaks realized what she just spoke n Suddenly went up to vrinda "Hey..i was JK..i Hope you don't mind.."

Aw, she's such a sweet heart. Even then this sick girl has problem with her. If I would've been at Shak's place, I would've killed her at first place. She's such a bitch! 😡

Vrinda passed her a Fake Smile.Yes ! She was feeling Insulted Right Now..I Could make it out seeing her face.

"Chalein Ab..bahut bhook lagi hai" Alisha said.

All the Girls Joined her..Even Shaks..How could she back off when Vrinda was There.

"Hey ! I'll help you Guys too" She Jumped.

"Me Too" I Followed her.😉

All the girls shot back a *u dare Not enter the Kitchen Kunwar* .. Which made me stop in My Track all Scared.

"Fineee" I growled.

The Guys chuckled..WTH Mann..Koi Izzat hi nahi hai meri..Uff !

Lols. This was fun. Bechaara Kunwar. Aw, it would've been so cute (aw types) if Kunwar would've gone in and helped them out. You know what I mean, right? Maybe the others would've decided to leave them alone and given them some privacy. I'm sure everyone would've loved to eat a ArSha dinner! 😉


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Ummm..Yes ! 5 Mins..Exactly after 5 mins of Boredom I saw Shaku Bai coiming out of the Kitchen drowned in Wheat with A Baby Face. 🥱

I ran upto her biting back my Laughter.

"Kya hua Shaku Bai ? "

"Merese Khana Banate Nai Banta..M Good For Nothing..n There Inside..VRINDA can handle it all"

I raised my eyebrows questioningly😲

"I mean..Al..Alisha..Vrinda..Everyone"

"Oh" I exclaimed.

"Exactly ! I cnt do Anything" She turned to move away.

I grabbed her hand and made her face me..those Choclate brown eyes were looking at me curiously..i was Lost in the 0h-so-beautiful-best-friend of MINE.

"Kunwar ?"🤔

Hey sweet Voice brought me back to my sense.

"Shaks..you Are Perfect in your own silly Little ways

You are the Best Dancer..Aren't You?"

"Hmmm" her eyes Glittered.

"Can Vrinda even Match Up to your Dance?"

"Naah..Never" She Proudly said.😛

"Fir? You are The Best and Perfect for Mee"❤️

She looked at me Confused..Damm Kunwar ! tu use Propose nahi kar raha hai..pro..Propose? Mai use Propose Kyu kArunga..uhhh'FOCUS!

"I Mean..The Pefect for US" poininting those bas***ds who Were Enjoying OUR Moment..They were Gaping at Us as if Watching Some Live Movie.

She Looked Up My Shoulder to Get Their Reply.

But They were Too Lost in OUR So-Called-Romance for Them.🥺

"Guuysss'Sahi Bola na Mene?" I Almost Shouted.

"Kya..han..haan..Sahi Bola tune..Par kya bola? " Archi spoke..he was still not able to come out.

"Shut up diot..haan Bhai Sahi bola..S-H-A-K-U B-A-I..U are Perfect" with his to-die-for-Smirk Shan replied.

I Glared at him.

"Umm..umm..Thanks Shan..vo..voo..i'll catch u guys later"

Shaks looked here and there to avoid their Glances and rushed away.

Ok, this part was again so cute and intense. Kunwar knows just how to make her come out of her miseries. Lol, Shaks all covered in flour. That must be one scene to watch. And the small ArSha moment. Aw!! And the gang. They're super cute and awesome. Specially our awesome Shan. Very well written yar! 😊

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"Kaminooo..Aj toh Gaye tum Sab"

And there Started Our Tom & Jerry Game.

Now we were Tired and all Landed on the *Khatiya* lying outside the Dhaba.

We were laughing our butts off..FRIENDS !

"Dude..You are in LOVE " Shan spoke looking up at the Sky.

"Why Shut up..i am NOT. You are Talking Nonsense" I shot Back.

And I was completely Ignored by the boys..fir Bejjati ! 🥱

"I Agree Mann..I mean look at You Guys..You are so Comfortable with each other" Archi jumped.😆

"And..you see..She Fits PERFECTLY in Your Arms" Macci winked.😉

And they broke into Laughter.🤣

"GOD ! Stop it Guys" I literally growled which finally made them Stop.

I Left from there.

I heard chuckles behind my back..Crazy People..I Laughed on their Fantasies..

I mean Come o Me and Shaks?

But aisa ho bhi toh sakta hai na..

Whatever they said was repeating in my head again and again.

How on Earth can this Be TRUE?

Naah ! Not Possible !

Aah! Finally the thing I was waiting for. Love the boys for this. Now finally Amar would be thinking about this (maybe a lot) and finally something will go into his brain and maybe he realizes that he really does love her and they're meant to be and that she's just perfect for him and that they make the best couple and that.. so forth! Nice call on adding this conversation sweetheart. I loved it. 👍🏼


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On the other hand away from the tents..behind the Dhaba..It was a Peaceful Place.

Shakti Mohan Sharama was Sitting under a Tree playing with anything or Nothing and Talking to Herself.

Me and Kunwar?🥺

Comeon Shaks..Tu Aisa Kaise Soch Sakti Hai..

This is Soo NOT Happening'We Are BEST FRIENDS and That's All..

But fir sabko aisa kyun lagta hai..Nahi Shakti..Don't think Rubbish..Sab bas Pareshan karte hai tujhe.

And vaise bhi..Kunwar toh Vrinda..

Ummm..But Mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ki Kunwar Vrinda ko pasand nahi karta.

Kyun nahi kar sakta? Uski choice hai.

And Vrinda waise bhi Kitchen mai bol rahi thi "Just Wait and watch Guys..Kunwar Will Love it All" n Crap..

Holy Shit! This Made me run Out of there.

But..umm..Then the Girls were Also Teasing Her..Why?😕

Wel..They are working together from the past 6 Months..soo Maybe they know it Better..

Maybe That's True..

Hmm..I Should NOT Come Between The Two..

Hey ! I Never Did..it was Always Kunwar'But I was the One who never Left Him..My Fault !

Nowww'I Won't Ever Come between them Or Ever Interfere in their Lives..Kabhi bhi Nahi !😔

Kunwar..Just be Happy..I don't Want to be Some Obstacle in Your Life.

Keep Giving that Million Dollar Smile Of Yours.I Chuckled.😊

But i Am Sad .. I Don't Know Why ?

Oh My Gosh. You seriously did that? Can you please tell me where your feet are? I wanna drag you and throw you into the ocean full of shark. What is this? Me not likey-likey. Cheating. I don't like Shaks thinking (basically worrying) about that cruel and good-for-nothing Vrinda and her fantasied Amar when its so not happening. Krits, you better correct this or .. 😈 😡

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All The While Someone was Sneking from behind a Tree..it was Vrinda.

She gave a Evil Smirk to Herself and Patted her Back.😉

"Great Work Vrinda ! You Did It"

And I'm on my way. To drink the blood out of your body! 😳

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I likey likey the chapter but not likey likey also. It was a mixture of good events and bad as well. I not happy that much. Please do something to make this small innocent girl happy na. I'll be waiting for your update. Hope it comes sooner. A lot more sooner. Pretty please. 😃

Originally posted by: kittu_arsha

So..Liked it? 😉

Yesh! 😆

No..Ending was Bad..haha..i Know..

Then why do you even ask? 😡

Wanna Kill Me? Go Ahead'btw You Don't Have My Address..lol

But I have super-natural powers. I'll find you and kill you soon. I'm sorry people, you'll no more get updates for this SS as I'm gonna kill the writer before she can update this! 🤣

Comments and Likes Welcome..Pleaseee.. 😳

Done. 😳

For the First Time I am Offering..lol

How generous! 😛

bahut time lagati hu na Update dene mai..Isliye 😉

Next Update on..umm..Pg 25

I'll try my best to... 😆

Well..Its Upto You..haha ! 😆

Buddy Me for PMs

Already have! 😉


Love you sweetie. Update soon. 😊
Edited by Aquilia_Aditi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesum,read all d parts..sorry for being late exams going on n thnx for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
liuved it...😃
bt kaha rok diya..
hate vrinda...
she and kunwar no chance shaks aisa mat socho..
aur update jaldi karo plzzz..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome...update kittu
aww our shaku bai ko khana bnana ni ata...hehe mjhe b ni ata
n love boys ki masti
n hayeee wo idoit vrinda played her prank...n shakti is trapped in her plan...i m waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
loved the ArSha convo and boys teasing kunwar
iss vrinda ko toh😡..huh uss ki itni himmat..
and u jaldi update kar plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved the teasing part...
I hate this Vrinda...always a problem...
Loved it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice one i wish koi arsha ki tarah tanha ke os bhi likta!😊

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