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priya

@lovelypriya

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

😳osam n fab plz do continue i would love to read it n thanks 4 the sketch so plz do continue,,,,,😊

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Interesting story, great job plz continue soon

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Tia3303

@Tia3303

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Nice :)
Plz pm me when you start

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rajashree

@raj-guria-kriti

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

heyyy its rlyyy nice...continue soon...👍🏼😉

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iluvrainaarti

@iluvrainaarti

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

chapter 1.

Story starts from when Shivam tells Taani that what happened to weaklings at footloose was wrong.

Shivam: Taani I feel very bad for your brother and his team. Itni mehnat ki par uss ka koi faida hi nahin hua. Voh toh disqualify hogaye.
Taani: Han par iss main koi kar bhi kya saaktha hai.
Shivam: Taani joh bhi ho Sharon aur Dazzlers be sahi nahin kiya Swayam aur Weaklings ke saath. It was not right.
Taani is seen lost in thought.

Scene change
Taani and Swayam are at home.
Taani: Bhai, ek bast poochun?
Swayam: Yeh koi poochni ki baat hai? Kya baat hai?
Taani: Bhai aap sab Shivam se nafrat kyun karthe hai? Saach saach
bolna Bhai.
Swayam: Taani Shivam ek acha ladka nahin hai. Usne Sharon ka use
kiya kyunki uss ko Dazzlers ka routine churana tha footloose
competition ke liye aur jab hum ko pata chala humne uss ko
aur uss ke college ko expose kiya. Dekh Taani mujhe teri life
mein interfere karne mein koi haq nahin hai par please jab
bhi uss ke saath ho to please be careful.
Taani: teek hai Bhai. Ab bhai raat bohat hogayi hai ab aap so jaye. Aur
aap fikar maat kijiye sab teek hogaye ga.
Swayam: paatha nahin kab teek hoga sab. Pata nahin kyun jab bhi
kuch teek hone lagtha hai to kuch na kuch ghalat ho jaa tha
hai.
Taani: ab sab teek hogaye ga aur iss baar kuch galat nahin hoga. Ab
aap tension free ho kar aaram kijiye. Goodnight Bhai.
Swayam: goodnight Taani.

Scene change to Taani's room.

Taani is thinking about what Swayam said and what Shivam had said earlier at college.

Taani in mind: toh iss ka matlab Shivam mujhe use karne ki koshish
rahaen hai taaki mere zaariye voh dono teams ko judaa
karde phir voh dono teams ko ruin karega. Itni gaandi
sooch kaise ho saakthi hai. Ab thak ussne jo bhi kiya
so ki ab aur nahi. Main yeh hone nahin doongi.

So tell me what you all think. Should I continue or not.

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Nikhat

@blossom1234

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

wow,i loved it👏

now Taani is realizing what Shivam is trying to do😆

plzz continue soon😳

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marina

@Loveurlife1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

it was really good

awesome 😊

cant wait for the next chapter

Edited by loveurlife - 12 years ago

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Man!sha

@_LostSoul_

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Loved it yaar...👏

Plz continue...

Waiting😍

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SanelyInsane

@SanelyInsane

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

omg...JUST LOVED IT...WISH CVS SHOW MEIN BHI KUCH AISA HI DIKHATE...ANYWAYS...KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK...AND PLEASE DO CONTINUE...WE ALL ARE EAGERLY WAITING FOR UR UPDATE