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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: siva2901

Hi Deeps 😊

Very Intense Update dear . You know what After reading this update I got Goosebumps da 😳. I wonder how can a person write Damn Intense 😭😭😭. U r really Awesome emotional writer da. 👏👏👏.

Omg I am travelling along with the ff . Its very lively and the feelings & emotions were beautifully portrayed 👏👏. If anyone gets hurts it hurts me 😭😭😭.

*********************************Coming to My Analyses ****************************************

Poor Kushi planned to make his birthday special. But its gone waste😭.

Arnav - Lav conversation
I really love Arnav Lav conversation . wow Lav wished him @12 o clock its really nice . As a girl friend she cares him😳.
I felt very bad for Arnav . Poor boy didnt speak to her peacefully & lovingly😭.
Love the way you explained about Dilemma 😛
Lav very pavom 😭 Dont know when her heart will broke down 🥺.
I want Arnav to speak privately to Lav . so that it cant hurt her that much.
Its not Lav fault to fall in love with Arnav . So i want a smooth & friendly relationship bet Lav & Arnav after she knew the truth😊.

Nani
Omg How can Nani hurt his chote😭.
Nani words only brought tears in my eyes😭😭😭
Even though her anger is right . how can she hurt a Birthday boy.
I am bit upset with Nani😔.

Anjali Kushi conversation
Anjali so cute 😳
She always says to Arnav that Kushi really loves him.
Anjali is prefect Nokia dear😃 (Connecting people)😆😆😆.
Without Anjali the family empty

Arnav Nani
omg From the beginning of the part till end i was like 😭😭😭
Each & every dialogues of Arnav brought tears😭,
Nani too good 😳. The way she explained about Arnav only convinced me . or else i will be upset with her😊

Kushi Bday gift
Omg her gift is something precious to Arnav
Love the way Arnav traced the report😳.

If she loves him unconditionally then why she is keep on saying Arnav stay away from us
This part Arnav dialogues brought tears in my eyes😭.

Last two dialogues were Ultimate👏👏. I really love that dialogue 😃.


OMG
I didnt expect Arnav will kiss her ☺️☺️☺️
Eagerly want to know Kushi reaction . I hope she will wont mind 😆.

My Fav Dialogues

I can never be happy when he is in pain. It hurts me more than it hurts him

Being loved by two people at same time is also a curse

Do you really hate me that much nani?

She doesn't know anything other than to love unconditionally

I certainly believe you deserve her love

I will never forgive you even if you think of hurting her again

Why are you doing this when you very well know that I don't deserve any of this

because i am not Arnav Singh Raizada to get happy seeing other's pain



Overall Its Marvellous update 👏👏👏

Intense I loved it 😳

Some are So Lucky that Even after Hurting , They get more love - Like Kushi
Some are So Unlucky that Even after Giving So much Love , They Always Get Hurt- Like Arnav😳
These quotes written based on your ff not on this particular chap😆

Continue soon Cant wait to read more
Thanks a lot for making Arnav happy 🤗.
Thanks for the pm😊
I think my comment is boring😕😭

thanq dear...
first person who said loved la and arnav's convversation...iam happy abt it
ur analysis and fav dialogues made me😃...
thanq 4 constant support...dont know what i would have done with you🥱...
and reg ur quote...ur reversed arnav and kushi character da...because kushi had never hurt him but only gets hurt by him
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: reniji66

This story is so sad in so many ways. However, in spite of everything if Khushi is willing to forgive and Arnav wants to make a family with her, its time for Lavanya to go. She ruined that moment for Khushi and its time Arnav made a definite choice. Lavanya may love him, but Arnav is in this position because of what he did. Its time he was a man and committed to Khushi completely. Bye, bye Lavanya.

thanq 4 commenting
well...i have already warn you that this ff will be emotional...
it going to get more emotional but interesting at same time...
one thing it's not that easy for arnav to just throw lavanya...of course he has to do it because kushi needs him
what iam trying to say is he needs time...
for that you have wait for two or three chapters😛
love
deeps😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriyanshlover

Beautiful update. Arnavs birthday. I wish Arnav got to know that Khushi had put alarm towish him first. Not bcs he may hurt more bcs making him understand that she loves him. And is angry.

Lavnyas heart gonna break terrible. I feel sad for her, I even feel sorry for Arnav. He trying to fix things but they semes to get worst. There can be a better gift for a father than what rnav got from Khushi. Arnav is a big idiot. Go and tell the whole truth. But he is hurting her more not telling her the truth. I could feel Arnavs emtionals. Fear not seeing his baby is very big inside him. And I can feel it by this update.



Amy (Amina) 😉

thanq 4 commenting...
glad tat atleast you are thining from la's pov...
of course everything will be fixed up...wait and read
love
deeps😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dumas

dammit asr have not told la he is married yet because you can't promise another woman to come to meet her for a week and poor khushi wanted to wish him but la called first hope he realize soon khushi is his soul mate thanks for the pm

thanq 4 commenting
yes...he still didnt tell la abt his marriage...he had explained the reasons to anjali in chapter 7...
he wanted to meet la to tell her truth not with any other intension...
of cousre he will realize abt kushi...but dont ask me when😆
love
deeps😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jahnvi.luvs.ASR

heya...so am all set to write what i felt after or while reading this update...f
rankly speaking i felt bad for khushi...she is hurt...she is trying to forgive arnav...whatever the other side of story is after la's phone call what she only know is that he love la and is waiting for her to come back...she was thinking that he love her equally as much as she does and the baby more but this phone call made her think that he loves la more...i know whatever he shared with la was more than what he felt khushi but still there is this dreading feeling...a feeling when you get to know that the person you think has starting loving you doesnot love you...and in khushi's case she always have been unlucky with male person's love...
khushi patched up arnav's and nani's relation...i just dont know what ll happen when la ll actually step in their life...i so wish that this visit only make arnav realize his true feeling towards her and that the only person he now loves is her...i am waiting for next update eagerly...

thaks for PM and scribbling down the beautiful update...i just love it...when you read the update you just cant help but think about it continuously...and m dead now...coz m sure this is going to be in my mind till i read next update... :)
hope i dint confused you with my constant blabbering :)


P.S. i really love nani's anji's concern toward her and i genuinely appreciate your efforts at writing...its just amazing to be a part of something so captivating and emotional and interesting...all at same time :)

thanq so much for this beautiful comment🤗...
iam very glad that u had understood eac and every character so much...
u had understood everyone's feeling...iam very happy...
thanks
love
deeps😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: please6

i think khushi should leave him and make him realize he loves khushi not la anyways loved it and khushi is so forgiving omg i wish i could be like her forgiving i mean i do forgive people easily but if someone did something like what arnav did to her i would have ruin him all the ways i can and make him suffer double the pain i did to make him realize how it feels anyway loved it and i really think khushi should leave him for a while anyways loved it again and thanks for the pm

thanq 4 commenting
i can really understand ur anger towards arnav😊...
yeah kushi is so forgiving...everyone will not same all the time...i cant say anything more
wait and read
love
deeps😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: seeta_naips

thanks for the PM


fabulous update

Arnav still have feelings for Lavanya?
He can't seem to make up his mind who he loves.

Man up Arnav and make a proper decision, you can't love both of them.

Khushi loves him unconditionally even though he treated her like crap.


OH YEAH! and you are very evil to stop there.

thanq 4 commenting
arnav is in confusion...it is not easy for him to forget the girl he loved for ten years...
he needs time...iam trying to write this close to reality...
i really hope u dont want me to write like this...kushi does something good...arnav becomes emotional and forgets la and starts loving kushi..tat will be pathetic
of course this is arhi ff..so he will fall in love
wait and read
love
deeps😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: april2003

It is so true that Love is greater than Hate...Their relationship is slowly changing and I'm certain they will adjust. Arnav thinks he loves Lavanya... but I don't think he actually does not romantically though and I don't think he ever did based on what I've picked up from his thoughts. It seems that they've always been there for each other as a shoulder to lean on and a bit of intimacy etc.

I think when he first met Khsuhi he actually experienced what love was but was just to afraid to give in to the feeling but now he is finally realizing what it is because he has something to compare it with.
I am glad Khushi forgot her enmity with him and asked Nani to forgive him. Nani and Anjali seem to have accepted Khushi wholeheartedly even though they know about Lavanya...Why is that?

Khushi's gift was lovely but I so wish Lavanya had not called or Arnav had turn his phone of. It was a bit of progress on Khushi's part to want to be the first to wish him
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hats off to you for ur understanding and analysis...
i tell you nothing can make an author happy than a reader understanding their story to the core...
thanks ...thank you so much
@blue...nani and anjali accepted kushi because...1. kushi is very sweet
2. they accepted kushi thining arnav loved her
3. after knowing truth, they felt bad for kushi
reg la...i will be revealed soon
love
deeps😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shijinaraghavan

"Being lovd by two at a same time is a curse"wah kya dialogue mara hai yaar...nd ur planing to end dis bfre 30 really..oh i'll miss it..nd offcrse we need an update on wed...yeh bhi koi poochne ke baath hai..we r greedy people..grhhh...bt why didn't Arnav tell to La..it s bad u knw..she already suspect him...i knw she will be heartbrkn bt i care more for Khushi..my concern is always with her..Khushi 7mnths pregnant ryt..so aftr delivery we will gt to knw y she choose to stay only for 6mnths?is dis cz of baby's safty..may be threatening frm his bro side for carrying an enemy's child???arrghhh lot of question yaar...wen r u gng to answer..through update...lov u damn it...

thanq 4 commenting...
u know what... u gave me a heart attack...
kushi is just four months pregnant...
3 months after arnav dumped she came to his house...
well now one month has passed
@blue...arnav didnt tell her because he wanted to tell her in person..face to face...
he knew la will be broken...that's why
he explained it to anjali in chapter 7
love
deeps😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: orchidpurple

Like seriously...why did you stop exactly at the kiss...You could have very well stopped at "when Arnav sensed Khushi's presence.."...But these cliff-hangers will be the death of me...Hhahhaha...Jus kidding...😆

Back to the update...what do I say...Emotional...a little enlightening (Khushi and ANjali realize Khushi loves Arnav)...and ..bonding time ...

In all these emotional updates before, I forgot about La completely..thx for reminding'she is yet to be taken care off'La needs to know the truth asap'

""His hand was still around her waist holding her securely as if this sound could harm her while her both hands were resting on his shoulders.""'AWW'that was cute'😳

" Arnav decoded which will hurt Kushi more; talking with Lavanya in front of her or behind her back."'thinking like a true Business man'which deal makes LESS LOSS'.but this time he thought with his heart'.that was nice to see some changes in ASR'valuing other people's feelings..

"Being loved by two people at same time is also a curse""''.That is so'very true'.Tug of heart as I say'between 2 people'

"But now I regret it. I wish it was girl. It would have hurt me less than to watch him grow like this and destroy other's life.""'I can't imagine Nani said those words'Poor Arnav heart broken on his birthday'.

""Your brother is an idiot, di.""'that is the second time Mrs ASR call Mr ASR "idiot"👍🏼

Loved Khushi's birthday gift to Arnav'

"""because i am not Arnav Singh Raizada to get happy seeing other's pain." """funny'but true'

""Do you really hate me that much nani?" he asked pitifully gulping the lump in is throat."'When I was reading this and previous few lines'I was actually gulping the lump in my throat'.too emotional to handle'.You are truly amazing Deeps'

And you just stopped at the right moment I guess

Best lines of the update'I loved the most was Khuhsi's response to Nani👏👏

""But what I knew is I can never be happy when he is in pain. It hurts me more than it hurts him."""



Thx for the PM

OP

thanq so much for analysisng the story this much
ur comment always makes me smile
thanks for enligtening nice dailogues...
@blue...yea that was so cute of you to notice tat and post it here...
i thin out 250 readers only u thought it was worth quoting here...
iam glad u liked it just like i did while writing it
love
deeps😃

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