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Siva

@siva2901

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

Hi Deeps

In this update I have likes & dislikes

First I will tell all Dislikes because after finishing my comment u should not sad. so my sad comments replaced with happy one (I hope).

What I felt is

This update is cute but wow factor missing dear. Because so far you created your image as your every update will be Awesome. But this update cute. Usually I will read ur chapters minimum of 10 times. It made me to read again & again. But in this update I didn't feel like reading more than 3 times da. I very well know it's not possible to give a Awesome updates every time but u did it & I want next time.

So far the conversation between Ram uncle & kushi is not that must effective. I mean he is giving only piece of information. If kushi is as intelligent as Sherlock Homes piece of information is enough but it's not.

My Likes😳

What kushi said is true whatever may be the reason. What Arnav did to her it's a sin. When he there to explain she didn't listen now she want to know he is not telling. Nice lines

The way Anjali explained about Arnav. Omg My heart melted like chocolate da

My sis used to tell those words da I am her first child but for us six years difference. I nearly had tears in my eyes reading that Para da. I miss her so much. I love Anjali she reminded my sis da. A special Thanks to you Chellam for writing perfect dialogue. Love you 🤗 .

Arnav understood kushi very well that she will be waiting for him & she won't accept it. Wow I really adore Arnav. I once again fall in love with him. You always write Arnav as intelligent last part really superb. In kushi fb we come to know that Arnav loved Aarti So much but he won't admit it

When Arnav started walking towards her my heart beat started rising. I very well know kushi is pregnant, Arnav won't do anything yet my gutter mind activated 😆😆😆

Poor Anjali saying sorry😆😆😆. really in this update more cute Arhi scenes😳

Wow Deep Arnav dream omg I loved it I loved it I loved it .His dream beautifully written da.👏 👏👏 I really loved it 🤗

Thanks a lot for Pm 😉

Edited by siva2901 - 13 years ago

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

Any updates soon?
Waiting waiting
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oops!.i didnt notice the update.stupid me!.
Deepa dear,i'l try my best to update comment today itself...i'm nt sure i'l b able to come to if tom.so dnt b mad...i'm a bit busy r8 nw.

*edit
u ended it?just like that?.leaving us to ponder over the sentense...
I loved the blooming bonding between arhi.how she misses him,how he understands her unsaid needs...since their marriage,he has nt even thought abt lavanya even once!!!.
So there more to their past,more so to arnav's.will wait til the story unfolds.
Altogethr lovely update.i'm enjoying khushi's moodswings!ha ha.
Busy,thats y no pm's.i have a lot of pm to reply too..

Edited by Crazy_soul - 13 years ago

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cupcake-

@cupcake-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Aaahhh you ended it with a question😭 now my mind is churning with curiosity..

Very sleepy, Will read update once more and update comment in detail tomorrow :)

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Khushi trying to piece in together the past and comprehend, even a minuscule part of it, the reasons of Arnav's actions. Brilliantly written! And she has come to understand Arnav in such a brief time. Him not revealing occurrences of his past which have such a significant impact on his present. And yes, you got me there. Arjun and Aarti.. aahh.. i wonder what happened.. it must be on a grave scale for Arnav to seek revenge for it. *zips lips* Will wait for Aarti's part to be revealed. 😉

Awww.. they inching towards falling in love all over again.. Wanting to sleep in each other's arms.. 😳 If possible, I am sure Arnav would want to spend his entire life, with his wife in his arms, on the bed (pun not intended) 😆 I love their silly husband-wife banter 😆 Only Khushi can call him an idiot and get away with it 😆 And Arnav carrying her.. missing at on the show these days.. :( Reminded me of it... The part where she asked him whether he was happy that she was pregnant- Khushi's simple yet heart warming question took away my breath.. She is like a child, seeking reassurance whether he truly loves her or is it just another game.. Phenomenally done!

Khushi trying to extract information from Anjali. Their past is intriguing. Arnav and Anjali ingnoring poor Aarti... But I know for sure Arnav loved her. But what is to become of love when the recipient herself is dead and that love has slowly got poisoned, transforming into revenge. My heart goes out to Aarti. And now coming to Khushi, this Khushi is much better of a detective than the show, I tell you. And the whole cant-sleep-without-arnav part was so cute! What I really loved was Arnav stop changing his clothes on seeing Khushi at such a sleep-deprived state. Now that is a perfect husband! ahhh.. i want my rajkumar to be like that.. hopeless dreams And Anjali bumping into their room.. I am sure she loves this side of her chotte! 😳 And Arnav you fool, look at Khushi. She-Loves-You! *exasperatedly sighs* Oh lord, when will he remove his blinders? *pacifies self* Soon. Hopefully Soon!

He he, And Arnav understands Khushi so well.. He knows that her mind is racing and she stuck in the dilemma on how to ask what she wants to, at the same time trying to be subtle about it. Now coming to The Question and The Answer! Did I hear an inflection of 'Yes' in his negative answer. Or am I imagining things.. Why, for the love of God, did you stop there? 😭 I understand, partly considering how much you have revealed, why Arnav blames himself. But still, another whole week, ok maybe not a whole week but at least 4 days for another update 😭 *pouts*

Holy, crap! *slaps forehead* My comment has gone extra long and looks like another chapter of FILWE... Sorry! But I have to vent after reading this update! 😆 Hope you dont doze of reading this!! *waves and waits for the next update*

Sweta

Edited by cupcake- - 13 years ago

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laksh65

@laksh65

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

sort of a cliffhanger, nice update, thanks for the long update and the pm.

(you are also tamil, me too)

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srijaaa127

@srijaaa127

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

OMG why you ended yaar???

Awesome update dear... Loved it

PLz plz update it soon

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

the plot thickens... will wait for the nest part!

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.Saraa.

@.Saraa.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

wooo
really fab update..
Aww arhi moment..he understands her so well..khushi being denies accepting him..but cant sleep without him..loved all that.loving how u r keeping its originality too..ArHi relations..their bitter sweet bickering..awsome

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sonia.18

@sonia.18

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

Great chapter!!! I'm very curious to know about the secret! I can't wait for you to finally tell us. My guess is that Arjun is responsible for Arti's death, but then somehow khushi's dad is also responsible, and that together they destroyed Anjali and Arti's lives, so arnav took revenge by destroying khushi's life. Am I right?? Keep writing and update soon! Also, just to let you know, it isn't correct to say 'I am not getting sleep'. You say, 'i can't sleep' or 'im unable to sleep'. Sorry but that was frustrating to read.