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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

mania... Where are you...????????? Apne us surprise update se hime surprisekarke tum to gayab he hogyi haan... :/ ... Till now... I've read ur update more than 10 times with each line reading atleast twice or thrice... Now when u gonna update yarrr...????????? Plzzz jaldi se update na... I'm dying to read the upcoming parts... :'(



OMG!!! Akanksha
Itna bada threat comment
ab to pakka se update karna hi padega LOL
Awww...thats really sweet dear but i m really sorry i had my reasons isliye to last time mention kar dia tha ki it may take more than 15 days hehehe
but now ab seedha update karing 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
I'm so SORRY guys
I know m l8 buh kya karoon I had my reasons
Plus I already wrote in the previous update's note
I hope its easy to convince you now 😆

Ohk...Coming to Your reviews they were wonderful
They never cease to motivate me😊
So without a delay here you go with the next update.



Luv
Mania❤️
Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
res

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ye res update keliye nahi tha???
Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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UPDATE 20


Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya... hai khuda
-Tum Mile



YOUTUBe link
www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xrb1ilmZbfY



[Shakti's POV]


I had been sitting on my bean bag, ruffling through papers, from past 3 hours. My IPod sitting next to me, shuffling through my playlist. A small sigh fell from my lips as I tucked a few stray stands of my hair behind one of my ears. I tapped my pen against my lips as I thought. 'I'm going to find kriti
...and when I do I'm going to kick her ass...' I huffed out a little as I continued to try to work my way through my sister's assignment.

Last night I shared a blissful feeling of love confession with Kunwar & today my little sister dumped me with heaps of her assignment. Do I suppose to entertain her at this peak of life? Argh!! Another small sigh fell from my lips as I picked up my I pod, my thumb brushing across the screen to unlock it. I smiled as I hit the next key hoping to hear a song that would make me smile, at least something to make me forget about my heart disease, which I was suffering from last night.

I stood stretching my legs out as I started to walk in a small circle around the large bumpy bag, my muscles singing happily at being able to move. I chuckled at my state. My eyes closed for a moment as the I pod switched to the song.

A small smile was toying with the edges of my lips; the song was one I hadn't heard in a while. I whispered "Teri Deewani" & inhaled deeply. I glanced around me making sure no one else was near my room. Dance was always my passion but taking help of it to deal with my inner turmoil was making my heart & mind collide. I stretched again only this time it was to the music now playing in my ears.


Preet ki lat mohe aisi lagi , ho gayi me matwari
Bal bal jau apne piya ko, ke mein jau vari vari
Mohe sudh budh na rahi tann mann ki
Ye to jaane duniya saari
Bebas aur laachar phiru mein
Haari mein Dil haari-2


My left hand raised in the air, right leg out a little further from my body, toe pointed a little as I took a deep breath my focus was now entirely on the music thrumming inside of my very blood, and on the dance I was about to do. Yes I was totally in love with Kunwar. I had lost my heart, my soul. No matter what I do, what I wear, its just HIM.


Tere naam se jeeelu tere naam se mar jau
Tere jaan ke sadke mein kuch aisa kar jau
Tune kya kar daala marr gayi mein mit gayi mein
Hoo ho ji Haan haan ji ho gayi mein
Teri deewani deewani-2
Tune kya kar daala marr gayi mein mit gayi mein
Hoo ho ji Haan haan ji ho gayi mein
Teri deewani deewani-2


Kicking off my rather tight shoes that now seemed far too hot, I leapt across small space to the sound of the music and rhythm of my heart. I moved through the room with grace & precision, my body moving with a passion that I never knew I had to this level. As I leaped & twirled about the room, my heart began to beat faster; my hair unwound from its confining pins & danced around my head. He was the reason I was metamorphosed into a love-seeking girl. His love has compelled me to cross all the boundaries and confinements. There were no limitations, only craving for him.


Ishq junoon jab hadh se badh jaye-2 haste haste aashiq suli chad jae
Ishq ka jadoo sar chadkar bole-2 Khub lagalo pehere raste rab khole
Yahi Ishq di marzi hai yahi rab di marzi hai-2
Tere bin jeena kaise haan khudgarzi hai
Tune kya kar daala marr gayi mein mit gayi mein
Hoo ho ji Haan haan ji ho gayi mein
Teri deewani deewani-4


There was music in my mind, a euphonious melodious tune that I knew but couldn't take place, & there was rhythm in my heart that was beating in the confines of my soul. And as the beat grew faster, my fluid movements became swifter. I could sense him, I could feel him. He had controlled my mind, body and now soul.


Ye mein rang rangeeli deewani-2
Ye mein albeli mein mastani
Gau bajau sabko rijhau ye meind deen dharam se begani
Ye mein deewani mein deewani


I swept across the room & forgot where I was. It seemed that I was not dancing anymore, but the music was pounding in my very veins & flooding through me, blending & twirling & twisting my body into position that I never knew I could do.


Tere naam se jeeelu tere naam se mar jau-2
Tere jaan ke sadke mein kuch aisa kar jau
Tune kya kar daala marr gayi mein mit gayi mein
Hoo ho ji Haan haan ji ho gayi mein
Teri deewani deewani-2


The song reached the climax; I moved so swiftly, leaping deftly about that the only thing I could hear now was that strange music & all I could see was my hair about my face. The tune got harder & faster the beat sped up & my pulse quickened. My feet moved faster than ever before in a circular motion and for the last time, I landed on my knees on the coarse rug.
I lifted my head slowly & turned to the window, allowing the cool breeze to kiss my face. As I stood up slowly, stretching in a manner that can only be called feline, I spotted something or rather someone on the opposite side of the room. It was a familiar man, who was standing, supported by the wall with amused smile playing around the corners of his mouth.



[Amar's POV]


As I stood there, leaning on the wall, my arms crossed in front of my chest and a foot placed on the wall, I could see her eyes changing the flavor from shock to fear. She blinked & bit her lower lip. Clearing her throat & spoke, "What are you doing here?" Her voice was soft.

One of my eyebrows rose slightly as I started at the small, embarrassed female in front of me, her dance had intrigued me like it always does.

"Came to pick you up for the shoot," locking her eyes on mine, as I took a step forward. "What were you doing?" I inquired.
Shakti shrugged a little as she turned slowly motioning toward some paper placed on the table. "I...I had been doing some assignment," with a smile on her lips she turned back to face me.

My head tilted to the left as I watched her "What assignment do you get in dance?" Shakti's smile was still firmly in place, when she nodded at my words "This was for kriti
...she asked me to help her." She said with matter-of-factly & started to proceed towards the door.

"And after that?" I spoke. The words made Shakti froze in her tracks, terror running through her as she processed my words. She shivered lightly & ducked her head a little as fear crept into her. A small smirk played on my lips as I smelled her fear. I took a few steps towards Shakti. "Is something wrong Shakti...you smell of fear..." I lowered my voice as I came up behind her.



[Shakti's POV]


I was still frozen in place, still not sure how to respond him, I was completely unsure as to what he would want from me. I closed my eyes as I felt him closer to me and took a deep breath knowing that what I was about to say was most likely not going to help the situation any but it was worth a shot in my mind, I had nothing else I could do. "I don't know what you're talking about Kunwar..." my voice was barely above a whisper as I spoke but I knew that he would hear me.



[Amar's POV]


I smiled a little more at her words knowing that she was floundering, I took one more step & stood right behind her, bending at the waist ever so slightly so that my lips was right next to her ear. "I think you know exactly what I'm talking about Shakti..Who were you dancing for hmm?" I trailed off as I lifted my hand and ran down the side of her cheek.
"Did you know I was watching? Were you dancing for me?" My words were punctuated with a low playful smirk.
I could see her shivering & blushing lightly as I spoke into her ear.



[Shakti's POV]


I remained frozen in my spot, my eyes opening as I stared straight ahead my cheeks tinted pink, my breathe increasing slightly. God knows why he has such an effect on me. "N...no Kunwar... It was not for you" I stuttered as I spoke, having him so close to me was un-nerving but exciting at the same time. He came closer this time, leaving a trail of electricity jolt running down my spine. His breathing kissing the outer layer of my neck. I gasped softly and closed my eyes again; my head tilting back some as I shivered harder. His hands encircling my waist.


"K...Ku...Kunw..ar?" I whined softly as I remained in his grasp, I was confused as to what was happening and why it was happening.


"Yes...Shakti?" he tightened his hold on my frame. I whimpered softly and closed my mouth biting my bottom lip as I waited for him to stop teasing me.


"What do you want from me?" I whined softly trying not to move since each breathe I took tightened his hold on mine.
He bit the shell of my ear, unsettling me. "You know, what your Kunwar wants from you." He slowly let go of me, turning my body towards him, caressing his thumb on my jaw line. I looked into his eyes, still my cheeks tinted pink. His other hand voyaged from my fingers to the length of my arm and then to form the outer cover of my cheeks. His every touch, his close proximity was taking me to the other world. The world where these sensual breathing is being served in every meal.
The other moment I felt his hot breathing surveying every corner of my lip. It was tempting and irresistible even in my home. Wait! HOME??


"Mom??" I shrieked, making Kunwar jump out of his skin. He turned towards the exit of my room to look. Taking advantage of his loosened grip I ran towards the door, sticking out my tongue.


"Come fast, we need to hurry for the shoot" I ordered him, making my way, giggling, downstairs.

"Yes, ma'am" I could hear his mumble.


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[Shakti's POV]


"It's ok, Shakti you dun need to worry, I'm by your side" Kunwar assured.

I looked into his deep eyes to look for as such nothing but I was sure there was heaps of love and concern penetrating in his eyes. I nodded.

"Ok, so then you guys have to lay down beside each other, staring in each other's eyes...I want passion and endless love." Siddharth sir explained.

We made thumbs up sign to tell him we were ready, following by positioning us next to each other on dark and cold road. No doubt, life seems to be complicated sometimes, a year or half ago we were trying to get chemistry between us by doing the possibilities told by Terrence sir and now it's our love which is flooding out of our bodies. We don't need to try anything nor we have to act upon something, the feeling pouring out is just PURE LOVE. The world was still for me then, no sound, no bickering; only a loud thumping of his heart was audible. My hand was frozen as he held mine; I didn't have any place to escape, to run and to hide. His smell became intoxicating as he covered the distance between us, stopping at few mms away. I could feel my thirst for his lips, for him; probably he was going through the same difficulty as I saw him choking. Whatever was the situation our eyes never unlocked for a micro second, even the time seem to be static.


But the situation was no longer in our favor, as we heard a large monster vehicle approaching towards us; probably this scene had to be end here unlike our real love. I'm telling you I'm gonna abhor these disturbances, yet it was needed. I didn't want to expose us this soon. Everybody rushed to us for patting our back for this sizzling yet so alluring scene. I was only left with a plastered smile to make sure nobody gets to see what's going in my heart. I surely needed some sleep.


"I need to talk to you come along with me." Kunwar dragged me to the side wall.

"Listen, after pack-up we are going somewhere, wear something good." He ordered still not looking in my eyes.

"Kunwar, I am damn tired, really wanna have some sleep." I explained him.

"No today you are not going anywhere. I know nobody is at home, so don't worry I'll drop you on time." His eyes gazed straight on mine, leaving an everlasting impact of his love.

I looked into his lustrous eyes, why did God have to make him so charming and irresistible? I agreed.

"Chale"

"Yeah" I replied with a smile. He walked inside the set, informing Palki for our departure and I stepped in my vanity to deck out in something worthy and to look if I was looking alright. Fifteen minutes later we met in the parking lot.

Shakti's dress


"I have a surprise, hold my hand." I obeyed and in a matter of minutes we were on a bridge that overlooked a beautiful lake like a castle covered in Ivy, below it was a garden full of colorful flowers. And to the left to the bridge was more greenery and tall paperback trees.

"Wow..." I whispered softly.

Place



"I knew you would like it" he said with a smile then added "just like you adore me." I hit his arm playfully and started laughing.

"Well I didn't bring you here to compliment me; I brought you here to ask you something." He got on his knees and ran his right hand through his hair. I immediately knew what he was doing, yes; he was going to propose.


I couldn't hear everything, could saw his lips moving , some words, his chest rising as he took deep breaths, his eyes sparkling and his hair growing messier and messier as he continued his speech.

"Shakti? Are you gonna answer me?" I laughed as I squeezed him into a hug and said "Yes, I would be honored to love you Kunwar, till death do us apart."

He lifted me up and spun me around grinning like he had won the muggled lottery. And I was in his arms, living he happiest moment of my life gifted by my prince charming.


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Phew thats for today
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Edited by magical_mania - 13 years ago
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Res 😉
unres 😛
love is in the air 😃
confession hua to kya hua . . . . Behene to vaisi hi hongi na . . . Irritating . . . Assignment karwane wali 😆
kunwar ki yaad aa gyi toh dance to banta hai na
lovely song . . . . . Conveys all the emotions to a lover
& wat if the lover is watching her 😆
sharma gyi shaks . . . . ☺️
ghar me koi nhi hai . . . . Fir bhi she's daring 😕
yeah . . . . The road scene . . . . . That was intense yet cute 😉
they were abt to kiss . . . . . ☺️
but shooting hai . . . . . So continue it later offscreen 🤣
date . . . Ahem ahem . . . Go go 😃
propose . . . Itni jaldi . . . . Kahin shaku NY na chali jaye 😆
isse pehle hi fix kar lo 😛
Edited by yogini64 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: deetha

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ye res update keliye nahi tha???


No dear 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mind blowing update
loved it
aww loved it when kunwar was teasing shakti...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hayeee.. Shakti dancing for kunwar...
N kunwar was watching shakti...poor shakti :p
She was blushing whn kunwar askd her out variuos que . Naughty naughty kunwar...

I loved dat place wea kunwar proposed shakti:)

One word fr d update MEGICAL <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awsome ..!
Loved d update ..!
Very beautifully u have described dere feelings ..!
Thanx 4 d pm ..!
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Mannu, I told u earlier darls, hospital pahuchane ka irada hai kya???
After reading dis, I'm gonna scream loudly- I 'm not even equal to ur toe's nail. Such sheer brilliance and magnificence of the plot is almost rarefied. I was literally drooling over my PC's screen, ahh, Mannu, I think I shud take a bow.
Song first, Teri Deewani is also in my playlist and dat too in favourites, had ho gayi ab toh.
Kriti's assignment, innovative thought.👏
Loved these paras-

Dance was always my passion but taking help of it to deal with my inner turmoil was making my heart & mind collide.

He was the reason I was metamorphosed into a love-seeking girl. His love has compelled me to cross all the boundaries and confinements. There were no limitations, only craving for him.


You know, what your Kunwar wants from you." He slowly let go of me, turning my body towards him, caressing his thumb on my jaw line. I looked into his eyes, still my cheeks tinted pink. His other hand voyaged from my fingers to the length of my arm and then to form the outer cover of my cheeks. His every touch, his close proximity was taking me to the other world. The world where these sensual breathing is being served in every meal.

Yes, I would be honored to love you Kunwar, till death do us apart."

Continue soon love.
-Nikki
Edited by nikita_arsha - 13 years ago

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