ISK RISK (AKA TPTG) -RAJAT MUGDHA FF NEW PART PG5 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
interesting story
Continue Soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Hey very nice ff dear..
firstly I luv d name of characters..
Rajat & Mugdha..
hmmm..
amazing..
So bf has even planned his honeymoon..
& gf is so confused..
oh Ganesh ji..
wo to mere b fav hai..
To Ganesh ji k b dialouges sunne milenge..
wow..
Jhuth??
ha ha ha..
well..dekhte hai Mugdha...jhuth kab tak nhi bolti ho..
which is impossible for u..
very nice dear..
waiting for d nxt ud..
& plz giv d character's intro soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Damm interesting story...so Mugdha is going 2 create golmal here...vry exicited n eagrly waiting 4 d nxt part😊...plz ud soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
loved the first part
waiting for the character sketch
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
guys moved it in the fanfic section now.😊
Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Wow...rtmc with golmal...sound interesting nd different with lots of fun nd zooth...
Update was awsom...luv the name of leading character mugdha nd rajat...
Continue soon
pm me plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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To my dear buddies


& for bearing me😆
Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-1

PART 2
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The car halted in front of a beautiful bungalow , she quickly entered in quite 'not pleased' mood, muttering to herself she made her way towards the house

Damn ! this so not done , aisa toh last 2 years mein kabhi nahi hua. Mujhe toh vishwaas nahi hota ki they both did this. Ramu ko bheja mujhe receive karne ! ,they know wen I get her I always want see one of them . But nahi choti behen ki kisi ko kya padi . main toh swapnil and sumeet dada se baat hi nahi karni wali.

Entering the threshold simultaneously she was continuing theself talking 'loudly' "meri toh koi value hi nahi , ' sagi' (real) behen hoti toh aise mujhe ditch nahi karte"

"hey"

she turned to the direction of voice, her eyes falling on a male in red long sleeve Tshirt , in his early 30's ,he was kind of angry

She then bit her tongue realizing what she said in anger , she extended her hand to explain , but he gestured her to keep quite and turn facing her sideways with hands folded and a fake livid look on his face.

Then she realized the house was decorated , by moving her eyes she discovered a welcome banner behind her; hung at a height , she was to utter something for apologizing for her quick tongue. But she heard a voice from behind

"swapnil jaldi se yeh cake set kar table par and then we have to hide" a man said probably of same age as he, his hands were occupied with a big rectangular chocolate cake , he came in without looking as his attention was on the cake ,so he didn't realize her presence, but when he saw her , but then he eyed swapnil and placing the cake properly aside , he quickly moved and in no time was beside swapnil , he held him (sawpnil) by his arm and said.

"tujhse naa ek kaam nahi hota , jab car ki awaaz suni thi tab andar aake mujhe inform nahi kar sakta that. Saara surprise kharab kar diya"

But swapnil was mum . she was really distraught , how can she explain she didn't mean it or did she?

'I m not there real sister' In a way it was true she was just not just their sister but was a friend , daughter , protge , some times advisor, reluctant audience when sahil dada's drama were not that houseful, and alsolike a understudy actor to help sahil dada to practice his lines, she was swapnil dada's student after all if he hadn't put in lot of effort in tutoring her she won't have able to crack '12th cet' with great marks.

She kneeled down ,sahil was confused to her action , but swapnil didn't glance at her.

Her holding her ears she said.

"sorry . I didn't mean it you know naa. Please choti sis maaf karo "

No matter how mad he be with her , but three of them can never be angry with each other , the longest record for playing angry was 60 minutes.

Swapnil smiled she quickly hugged him , sahil too join them making it a group hug.

Hours later after having the delicious cake and awesome food prepared by sahil himself ,they all were relaxed.

They were discussing abt sahil's new drama , she always supported sahil acting. Unlike sahil ;swapnil had a business of his own and he was quite successful in it

Finally a flat rectangular box gift wrapped was placed on her lap. Gift !

She clumsily unwrapped it . IPAD.!

Swapnil tapped on her head and said

"buddu engineering ke last year mein aur tujhe IPAD and E- book reader ka fark samajh mein nahi aata . u know the syllabus is not at all technology updated . purane funde hi sikhaye jaa rahe hai".

She and Sahil gave a look to swapnil who was in "pravachan mode".

"Chalo chodo" swapnil continued his pravachan "Dekh mughda , now u r gonna appear for masters next year . so u can read all the reference books on the kindle DX e-book reader without straining ur eyes as it has E-ink technology not unlike IPAD LCD display to strain ur eyes" (yup me tech- geek 🤓 can't hep myself writing abt things I love . For example gadgets , food ,RTMC. But story se connection hai .😆)

SAhil whispered to mugdha "ab yaha se khisak le varna Steve Jobs ne IPAD ke launch ke waqt itna bashan nahi diya hoga jitna ye dega"

Bado (elders) hamesha maaneni chahiye . how cud she defy her sanskaar . before swapnil could enlighten them more about the difference of LED AND LCD display. They were off from the drawing room.

"And that's why kindle dx is a smart" and swapnil turned his head he discovered he was the only person on the sofa ;the lounger on opposite side was vacant . but completed the sentence "choice " .



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(i'm bored now😛.So TO B CONTINUED)

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HELLO guys i have tell u all abt my FF

Cindrella story (college drama nahi hai yeh)




One request to new buddies who have joined recently

give it try to this ff

the main reason i saying this becoz though it says part 16 is on.

but leaving last two parts none of the update is more than TWO N HALF PARAGRAGH. so if anyone wishes to catch up. i haven't wriiten much

Else later Jab ANANYA ka MAKEOVER hoga & when veer will be going GAGA over his wife. tab catch up karne ke liye bohot padhna padega . but now all the 14 parts are soooper short.

TA TA ,SEE YA BYE😊



Edited by pranita1202 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
nice start to pt 2

love the title change


n PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ CINDRELLA complete karo soooper soon .

baki sabko maro goli. HA HA LOL. but really CINDY KA CHARM tottally diff hai.

plz plz i really love ananya veer n

plz PLZ jaldi se makeover karwa do ANNAYA KA . let VEER be going mad over ANANYA

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