OS: on the first date...part 7,pg 20

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Angel13

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

cute and sweet update

loved it

thanks for pm

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ISensedYou

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

hahahahaha...

hitler n lg

was very funny...

tanx 4 d pm...

update soon

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Nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Loved the update!!! Hope you continue soon!!! Thanks for the PM!!!

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amita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

nice one

continue soon dear

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Mahi Khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Awwh dat was again Cute!!
lol de diwali night!

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kriti_atharv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

just read both the parts...very cute dear...loved it n do continue...

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Anika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

good job...really nice...hoping to get more..

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Shweta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Arey, Just like the CVs who left that Kiss hanging in the middle ... You left your chapter ... 😛

Update soon ...

Don't leave such evil cliff hangers :P

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diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Part 3
Arnav is trying to call khushi but she is not receiving his call...
After 5 minutes,
a message flashes in khushi's mobile screen.
She opens the message..
"open your window."
she opens her window.
It was arnav standing outside of window...
She turns her face and tightly closes her eye..
A - what happened?
K - dont you remeber?we can not see eachothers face till our marriage...
A - oh!thats all crap,you know that i dont believe in this rituals..i just believe that i can not spend my day without seeing you..
K - this time you can not trap me in tour romentic chit chat..
A - move away from window,i m coming inside than we will talk..
K - that is not possible.ab aap jab barat lekar ayege tbhi hum aapko ander aane dege..
A - move away khushi..
K - once i said no then no...
A - khushi dont do this to me,i can not believe in all this rituals.
K- but i do..agar humne aapko dekha aur aapko kuch ho gya to?
A - lekin agar me tumhe nahi dekhuga to mujhe jarur kuch ho jayega.
K - no way,kuch din pehle to bol rahe the k kash tum life me na ayi hoti aur ab!!!
A - hitler kahi ki...
K - what did you call me??!!!
A - hitler...tumhare nakhre badhte ja rahe roj roj...
K - accha ji ab to shaadi k bad bhi nai aane dungi...
A - shaadi hone to do,i will take revange of my every single insult..
K - kya karege...
A - vo to tum mrs. ASR banogi tabhi pata chalega...
She understand his naughtiness and blushed in the last line...😆

A - so you are not allowing me to enter by window so i knock on the main door,buaji will surely allow me to come inside..
K - no you are not doing this..
A - yes i m..
K - if you love me then you will not do this...
Arnav thinks for a while and than he goes frm there.
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khushi has thrown her dice i.e. Emotional blackmailing,and asr was trapped...what do you think asr is the man who can be trapped this much easily?...just tell me i m waiting...
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that was part 3.thanks for all comments...here is quite long part...plz dont ger angry on On me for that 😉,and dont forget to comment...you are liking it or not?and also answer my question...i m waiting...😃

Edited by diasha - 13 years ago

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diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: wonderfulsunset
Arey, Just like the CVs who left that Kiss hanging in the middle ... You left your chapter ...0„2😛

Update soon ...0„2

Don't leave such evil cliff hangers :P

dont worry,i can under stand your feeling...😆 but i have taken that kiss topic to complete itself...[:p]