ARHI SS* HAMARA PYAAR KA NAAM - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awsome update and thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the pm and updating sorry for not commeting. I just read all the chapters to current. Oh my you are so creative should be on cvs team we will definitely have high trps. I love the concept of drama, how the boys have Arnav and khushi's traits. I am so excited to read the next chapter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Jus read this whole ff...and i love it..
Please pm me thnks xx
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww this is such a beautiful FF... just read all in go ...love the kids so much... you know i cried so much while reading part 21 .. its such a heart breaking part to read... poor arnav was so divested that his own kids hate him ... and khushi 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting eagerly for ur next part plz update soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey u havent updated for a long time...iam waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago

thank you so much for your comments,,,

Here you go the story...


PART 23


IN THE HOSPITAL...

EVERYONE IS OUTSIDE THE ICU... the doctors were done his operation...some glass pieces were pricked in his body so they removed it...ASR have a head injury also... But the wound due to the glass in his stomach is deep ...and his right leg has a fracture... And his hands have many bruises and cuts due to the accident...

The truck driver tried to divert his truck so that the accident can avoid ... Due to this ASR's car hit a tree... ASR is in high speed the whole accident occurred...

Now ASR is in ICU...everyone is outside ,,,,crying and praying for him...

Then KHUSHI,, NK,, LA and the kids entered the hospital...when anjali saw khushi she ran her...

ANJALI ***Khushiji chote...chote...

The others just watch their conversation...but didn't said a word ...she is in a shock of state ...that what us happening in her life...

SHYAAM *** Khushiji arnav was coming to meet you and kids... and this accident occurred...

She just blankly stared at shyaam...Everyone is crying ...But khushi or the kids didn't cried...

LA *** Di please don't worry nothing happen to ASR...

NK **** Yes di nannav will be fine...you know he is strong...

LA *** Naaniji ,,maamiji please don't cry ...please...

PAAYAL *** Khushi...khushi...

Khushi didn't utter a word she just blankly looked at the space...now everyone really panicked because...khushi is in a state of depression...if something happen to her...

ANJALI ***Khushiji please say something...please

PAAYAL *** Khushi..khushi...arnavji will be alright...

AKASH *** Yes khushiji...bhai will be alright...don't worry...

NAANI ***Khushi bitiya...naani came in and shook khushi...[but she didn't respond..]

MAAMI *** Khushi bitiya...don't sit like this ,,,,say something ...please cry for sometime...

But nothing affected khushi...she just sat there like a statue...

Then ansh and asher came to their mamma...the kids are crying...and sobbing...

ANSH ****Mamma...you don't worry...nothing will happen to dad...

ASHER ****Yes mamma ... You see dad will be alright and will say 'what the' to us...

Khushi then looked at the kids...and hugged her...then cried uncontrollably...

KHUSHI **** Yes your dad will be alright...he will say "what the" to us...

Everyone felt something in their heart...khushi then moved to anjali...

KHUSHI **** Di this is all because of me... All because of me...

ANJALI ***Khushiji no don't say like that...

KHUSHI **** Yes di this is true...you suffered a lot because of me ...Then your whole family. .arnavji... now...again he is...

ANJALI ***Khushiji...

KHUSHI **** Di he met with this accident is because of me...if I gave him a chance then...

Now she is crying...with the whole pain and guilt that she is the reason behind ASR's accident...

PAAYAL ***Khushi sambhalo apne aapko...please...

NK *** Please khuhsiji ansh and asher ke bare mein socho..please...

KHUSHI **** Nanheji,,,, mein bahut buri hoon...mein hoon arnavji ke is haalat ki simedaar.. sirf mein

NK *** No khushiji ... It was just an accident khushiji...

KHUSHI **** Agar...agar unhe kuch ho jaaye tho...what will I do nanheji...

LA *** Khushi please control yourself...nothing will happen...

NK *** Yes khushiji your devimayya...is with us...with nannav... Nothing will happen everything will be alright...

Khushi again sat on the chair in front of the ICU...

Kids are beside her...she looked at the kids...

KHUSHI **** Anshu,,ashu,,,,mamma is very bad...because of mamma your dad is now in hospital...I am sorry beta...I am sorry...

ANSH ****No mamma...you don't know...dad will be alright...he is very strong...

ASHER ****Yes mamma...you don't cry...dad won't like that...

ANSH ****Mamma if you cry then dad will be angry on you ...So don't cry...aapko pata hain na we don't like your tears also dad...

ASHER ****Mamma dad teek ho jaane ke baad kya hum unke saath reh sakte hai????

KHUSHI **** Ashu...

ANSH ****Yes mamma once dad will be alright then we won't leave him...hai na mamma???

ASHER ****Mamma if we again leave then... Mamma we want our dad too...

ANSH ****Mamma we will take care of him...his medicines ...food...everything...please mamma...can we stay with our dad please????

Everyone is watching the kids that they are saying ,,ASR is cured now and they are going to leave him again...but the kids made all the others cry...

NK *** Yes beta...once your dad is alright then you can stay with him...play with him...ok...

ASHER ****Ok chachu...

ANSH ****Chachu ...papa teek hai na????

Hearing this khushi again started crying...

NK *** Haan beta your papa is alright...because he is anshu and ashu's papa...

ASHER ****Sach mein chachu...

AKASH *** Yes beta sach...

ANSH ****Chachu...hum kab papa se mil sakte hain???

AKASH *** Soon beta...we will meet him soon...

AFTER SOMETIME...

AKASH **** Paayal you and daadi should go home...the kids are really tired ...

LA ****Yes paayal you mein yehi par hoon...

PAYAAL ***Ok LAji...

Then naani and paayal along with alaap and niya,,,,,were ready to leave for RM...they came to ansh and asher who is with their mom...

PAYAAL ***Anshu,,ashu..Come with chachi...we can go home...we will come in the morning...you are really tired ...

The kids looked at paayal ...then their mamma...then to each other...

ANSH ****Chachi you go we will come after meeting dad...

Everyone looked at the kids...

ASHER ****Yes chachi, you go...we will come with mamma,,,,

NAANI *** No beta you two come with us..

ANSH ****No badi naani... we are fine...we are not tired...

ASHER ****Once we see dad then we will come...

KHUSHI **** No anshu ashu... You will get tired ...please go with chachi...

ANSH ****No mamma we are fine...you also is tired then you have to go home...we will be here with dad...

Khushi looked at the kids they are just like ASR...she hugged the kids...

ANSH ****Mamma please don't cry again...

KHUSHI **** No beta mamma won't cry again...

ASHER ****Promise...

KHUSHI **** Yes promise..Jiji you go with alaap and niya...anshu and ashu will stay with me...

PAYAAL ***Ok khushi...

Then paayal and naani left for RM...the others were waiting outside...

It is night time ansh and ahser are sleeping with their head in their mom's lap...but they are half awake...that if there dad woke up then they can see him...

INSIDE THE ICU

ASR lying in hospital bed connected with many machines and wires...the doctors were observing him thoroughly...and the next 24 hours is very critical for him...but he is responding to the medicines ...

So that's for now...

Thank you for the comments,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

And sorry for the mistakes...

PRECAP:::::

ASR AWAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

WILL HE RECOGNIZE HIS WIFE AND KIDS????????????????????

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the PM :)
omgg!! what happens next??
waiting for ur next update :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update,i hope he remembers kids n his khushi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg... head injury... this is sooo scary...

plzzz plzz give Khushi a chance.. she deserves it... the guilt will kill her...

no one will leave the chance to taunt her if anything of such happens to him..

nooo nooo nooo

ASR HAS TO RECOGNIZE HER!!!! Its a must must must
Edited by hetalmkn - 13 years ago

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