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^^ MY REACTION TO ALL THE CHAPTERS OF THIS FF 😲 😲 😲
Farwa sweetie, I had no idea about the amazing amount of talent and creativity you possess with which you write soo beautifullyy.. I am actually in tears and even now I am lost for words.
I am a new reader to this FF and I happened to stumble across your story through your PM which I am extremely grateful for, and I thank you for sharing your work with me that has moved me ever so.
I read all of your chapters in one go, not caring about my food (it was worth it!) or my homework (our teacher wasnt even here to my luck... loool) or even my sleep (trust me I was like a zombie at school todayyy 🤢).
I felt as though I was there witnessing the whole thing, like the whole story was before me, I never thought I woud be able to feel sooo many emotions at one time!!
I was sad 😭, angry 😡, upset 😔, heartbroken 💔... It was alll to much!!
I am a very picky sort of person and it takes a lot for me to say that something has really moved me or touched me or inspired me to change my viewpoints on something, bt let me assure you dear, never before have I ever felt sooo much pain of a character in a story/FF/tale/fiction as I did with the character of Khushi in yours.
I saw her struggle, watched her live the torture of being called names, losing her dignity, nearly being molested and not to mention abused both mentally and physically. I absolutely loved the characters of NK and La in your story dear, how NK gave up everything to stick with Khushi being right to do so and poor La's turmoil in trying to forget ASR but also thinkng about her friends future... Simply brilliant!!
I am really confused about Anjali's approach to the scenario... she seems in big time denial and I really hate the way she doesn't face the situation. Does she not want ASR and Khushi to be together?? I knw she doesnt knw the whole truth but STILL, LIGHTEN UP!!
And Shyam.. as much as a ba***rd he was to Khushi, I really like how he has the guts to admit his mistakes in front of ASR and say hes sorry. I found that weirdly cute...
Mann, has ASR srsly pissed me off!! How could he not trust her?!? HIS KHUSHI?!? HOW?!? WHY?!?! Although he totally does not evn deserve to luk at Khushi, I cnt help bt feel extremely sory 4 him too... he is our hottie after all right?? 😉
ArShi have come a looongg way and they have an even longer way to go if they are to unite and become one!! I absolutely love your style of writing Farwa and I look forward to reading your future updates. Dont keep me waiting tooo long!!
PS - Have fun reading myy looonggg coment!
PPS - Sorry dear for making you read thru all that... I figured one long comment wud b betr thn 50 odd smaller ones right??
Great job!!! Xx 👏 👏 👏
Edited by rockprincess123 - 12 years ago
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