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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

will update by tomorrow most probably
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really ????
woohooo time to party..🥳
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Hello people I'm back with another update. And sorry for the delay. Enjoy.

Chapter 10:

Before starting the update let me introduce 2 new characters.

Pihu Singhania:
Rey's small little cute sister. She is rey's dad's younger brothers daughter but her parents died in an accident and after that rey's parents adopted her. She is the laadli of everyone and rey loves her a lot. Both of them share a very strong bond.

Madhu Singhania:
Rey and Pihu's mom. A sweet, caring and loving mom. Loves her family a lot and is strict at sometimes. Rey shares everything with her.


Update:

~~~~~Next Day~~~~~

It was nearly around 5:30 in the evening and rey was waiting down kriya's house waiting for her to arrive. Finally kriya arrived looking beautiful as always. Both of them got into the car and rey started drive. Soon the reached a beach. Rey and kriya were sitting near the shore making their feet wet. and were enjoying themselves. They were having lovey dovey talks, complimenting each other. Suddenly kriya started splashing water on rey's face. Rey was trying to prevent himself from getting wet as well as trying to grab kriya's hand. Rey was completely drenched in water and was looking hawwt. In other hand kriya was laughing continuously but when her eyes fell on him she stopped laughing. She couldn't take her eyes off him. Seeing kriya stare at him rey grabbed both her hands in his hand and now it was her turn to get wet. Kriya came back to her senses when she felt water drop on herself. She tried freeing herself but all her efforts went in vain. After a lot of pleading from her side rey finally stopped. He looked at her and just kept staring at her. His intense gaze sent shivers down her spine. He automatically loosened his grip on her hands. Seeing his grip loosen kriya had a naughty smile playing on his lips. Before rey could understand anything she splashed water on him and ran away. It took a moment for rey to understand what was happening. He saw kriya standing at a distance laughing at her. Thats it he got up and ran behind her. Rey was chasing her and she ran as fast as she could. Sge started running towards the water and thats when her speed slowed down. Finally rey caught her and they were in water with water level till their waist. Rey caught her waist and pulled her towards him and whispered in her ear "ab kahan bach kar jaogi?" Rey checked her from top to bottom and gulped. Kriya looked down as her cheeks flushed into dark crimson color. Water dripping from her hair made her look even more hot and seductive. Rey with his index finger made her look at him. He moved forward minimizing the gap between them and she closed her eyes in anticipation. They were about to kiss, his lips almost met her but...

SPLASH SPLASH

Rey woke up from his sleep and shouted "Pihuuu!!!!". Yes it was Pihu his little sister who woke his brother from his beauty sleep.
"sorry bhaiya" said Pihu cutely. Rey lifted her up and placed her in his lap and said "mai abhi bhi gussa hu". She caught both her ears and said "sholly" and kissed him on his cheek. Rey couldn't help but smile at his little sister's cute face.
Pihu: waise aap sote waqt itna smile kyu kar rahe the aur apne pillow ko hug kyu kar rahe the??

Re(self talk): Mai sote waqt smil...pillow ko hug karna..that means jo bhi maine dekha it was a dream!!!! but y it had to be a dream...noo yeh mai kya soch raha hu mai pagal ho gaya hu...mai baar baar kriya ke baare mai kyu sochta hu...ab toh vo mere dreams mai bhi aa rahi hai...koi toh mujhe iss ka answer do.

Meanwhile Pihu stood up on the bed and waited for rey to stand on the floor. But she saw that her brother was lost in his own thoughts. She shouted "Bhaiya!!"
Re:huh! kya huya???
Pi: aap kuch bhul rahe ho..She asked raising her one eye
Re:kya??
He then looked that pihu was standing on the bed waiting for him to stand up.
Re: oh sorry
He immediately stood up and then pihu climbed on his back.
Pi: waise aap ne bataya nhi aap smile kyu kar rahe the??
Re: mai smile nahi kar raha tha
Pi: aap kar rahe the smile vo bhi badi wali.
Re: nahi pihuu
Voices: tu smile kar rha tha.
It was then rey realized that vicky and swayam were also present there.
Pi: Dekha ab toh swayam bhaiya aur vicky bhaiye ne bhi bola. Ab bolo na plsshhh
Re: areey vo aise hi. Ab chale mom ko gud morning wish karne. Guy(to vicky n swayam) mai abhi aaya
Sw+Vi:okay..They knew that rey was going down to wish his mom with pihu hopped on his back.

It was their daily routine. Every morning Pihu would come and wake up his lazy brother and at times when rey doesn't wake up she pours a bucket of water on him. She then hops on his back and for a while they roam around in his room to keep a few things properly and then go down and wish their mom who would be busy in preparing break fast. He would then leave her to her room. It was a compulsion for rey to carry Pihu on his back because she loved it and he loves her very much.

Pi+Re: Gud morning mom.
Madhu: Gud morning kids.
Pi: mom
Madhu: haan pihu
Pi: kya mai aaj school se leave lekar bhaiya ke saath college jaun.
At this rey immediately spat the water he was drinking. HE didn't wan't Pihu to come to his college as it would affect his reputations...wat would people think when they see the heart throb of college has brought his little sis to college and is baby sitting her...noways he would never let that happen.
Re: no ways Pihu...abhi tum choti ho aur tum mere college aakar kya karogi...aur vaise bhi mai toh class mai hota hu.
Pi: Bhaiya aap kisse jhoot bole rahe ho hum sab ko pata hai aap class mai kam aur clas ke bahar zyaada hote ho.
Both the mom and daughter started laughing at rey who stood there pouting.
Pi:plssh
Re+Madhu: no..tum kya karogi wahan??
Pi: mai aapke friends se milungi
Re:par tum toh mere friends se roz milti ho
Pi:mai aapki nayi friend ki baat kar rahi hu
Re: meri nayi friend??
Pi: vo umm haa kriya...kriya se milungi mai
Re: par tum kriya ko kaise jaanti ho??
Kr:aapne hi toh bola
Re: maine?? kab??
Mad: mere pyaare betaji iss ghar mai sabko pata hai, yahan tak ki ghar ke saare sevants ko pata hai ki kriya tumhari nayi aur special friend kyunki aaj kal toh aap ghar mai kam uske khayalon mai hote ho. Jab dekho har kisi baat mai kisi bhi tarah kriya ko laate rehte ho, kriya yeh hai, kriya vo hai...
Here rey was very much embarrassed.
Mad:tu maan kyu nhi leta ki tujhe usse pyaar hogaya hai.
Re: a aisa kuch nahi hai mom. Mai chalta hu. Chalo Pihu.
Mad: beta think about it once.

Rey dropped pihu to her room and came back to his where swayam and rey were waiting. As soon as rey entered swyam spoke
Sw: kya baat hai??
Re:kya??
Vi:tu subah subah needh mai smiling and all ha..chakkar kya hai??
Re: ab guys tum log shuru mat ho jaana
Sw: kuch toh baat hai dude, vahan kriya bhi neendh smile kar rhai thi jab mai usse uthane gaya. Actually kal raat se vo smile kar rahi hai aur apne thoughts mai khoyi huyi hai.
Re: really??
Sw:haan
Vi:dude kya huya kal raat ko haan jo tum dono itna smiling and lost lost ho.
Unknowingly rey blushed and replied "aisa kuch nahi huya hai guys. Tum log jao mai tumhe colg mai milta hu."
After they left rey asked himself" kya mai sach mai kriya se pyaar karta hu?? yeh toh sach hai I love spending time with her, talking to her...but love usse?? I'm confused..."

~~~~~Kriya's House~~~~~
On the other hand even kriya was going through a similar situation. She was continuously thinking about yesterday night.
*****Kriya's P.O.V*****
Yesterday night no the whole evening of yesterday was magical. I felt everything special in it. Starting from the dance, the talks, the rain, everything seemed so beautiful. And the beat part was rey. He made it so special. Mujhe ho kya gaya hai?? Kyu mai hamesha rey ke baare mai sochti hu?? humesha usse baat karna chati hu...jab bhi vo mujhe touch karta hai i feel as if current is passing through me. Aur kal raat mai usse actually kiss karne wali thi and maine kiya bhi thought it wasn't a complete one. The way he cares for me..everything makes me feel he is someone very special to my heart. But yeh feeling hai kya??? Is it just friendship???
*****P.O.V Ended*****

Both of them went to their respective washrooms and came out after having their bath. Both of them switched on their music player and the song playing was "IS IT LOVE" from "KISMAT KONNECTION"


link to the song: http://youtu.be/KxvriWihiac

This color for rey,this one for kriya, this one for both of them together.


Kisssa tera
Teri daastaan
Chehra tera khud karein baiyaan
Kisi se pyaar tujhe ho gaya
Tu maan ja
Haan Maan jaaa...

Rey came out of the washroom and stood in front of mirror. He started combing his hair but was constantly thinking about what his mom told him in the morning, that everyone knew that he had feelings for kriya but he himself doesn't knows about. Is it so clear on his face??


Kahin na laage maan

Kya hai yeh
suna pan aaan haaa
aanhaaa
Mujhe tum bata do
koi to wajah do
aaah haaan
aaah haaan


On the other hand kriya also came out of washroom and was drying her hair. Even she was thinking about yesterday night. Both of them were feeling the same thing. it is true that their heart and mind are restless these days, they don't pay attention towards anything other thing but only about their special ones.

Har ghadi abb khayalon mein
Keh raha hai koi
Har ghadi mere khwaabon mein
Aa raha hai koi

Every time, everywhere they keep thinking about is each other. They have occupied a special place in each others heart. Every time when they sleep they dream about each other only and that results in peaceful sleep.

hmm
is this love. .mene na jana aaa ha aha
is this love .. tu hi batana aaa ha aha

But still there's a big confusion in their mind. Is it really love or just friendship????? A big confusion.

is this love ..can you tell me 2

(music)


Kriya goes to her wardrobe and keeps wondering which dress to select. After a lot of thinking she picks out a blue thinking hopefully rey would like it.

Tu ne chuna ishq ka rasta
haan humsafar is safar mein dhoonta hai tu
haan baat yeh maan bhi le zara
Tut kar abb kisi ko chahta hai tu


Kriya feels as if her inner voice is telling her that she has chosen the path of love which will give her only happiness and erase all her sad moments. It doesn't matter if she agrees to it or not but the truth is she so badly feels for rey and is unaware about it.


Raat din meri neendon mein
Jag raha hai koi
Raat din meri aankhon mein
Bas raha hai koi


Rey picks up his shirt and puts it on and imagines kriya standing near the window. He goes near her and sings these lines but when he tries to touch her she disappeared. He then realizes that it was his imagination only. He ruffles his hair with his hand and gets back to his work.

is this love. .mene na jana aaa ha aha
is this love .. tu hi batana aaa ha aha
I need you ..you need me

All we need is this feeelin of love inside of our heart

This is love


Kriya picks up her teddy and starts dancing with him thinking he is rey. Whereas rey on the other hand picks up his pillow and starts dancing imagining it as kriya. Both of them have a huge smile plastered on their face.

Tu Ne tera dil kisi ko diya
Baat yeh sach hai agar tu maan le ise
Dil ka sukun tune hi kho diya

Abb hakikat hai yeh tu jaan le ise


Rey's mind is still not ready to believe that he is in love. He has finally found the girl he was looking for. He has lost his heart, now it belongs to someone else and this is the reality he needs to accept it.

Aajkal mein chaaho mein dhal raha hai koi
Aajkal meri saanson mein chal raha hai koi

These days all her wants are being molded according to rey's. Now-a days even her breath is not hers anymore, It belongs to rey.

is this love. .mene na jana aaa ha aha
is this love .. tu hi batana aaa ha aha


But even after a lot of clarifications from their hearts they are still confused Is it really love??? Please some one help them.

Kahin na laage maan
Kya hai yeh
suna pan aaan haaa
aanhaaa
Mujhse tum bata do
koi to wajah do
aaah haaan
aaah haaan
Har ghadi abb khayalo mein
Keh raha hai koi
Har ghadi mere khwaabon mein
Aa raha hai koi


Rey checks himself one last time in the mirror, and finds kriya smiling at him. He turns back and finds her disappeared. He smiles at his own thoughts. On the other hand kriya gives herself final touche ups and even she sees rey standing in a corner staring at her which made her blush. She looked down for a few seconds and again looked up only to find no one there. She bet her forehead with her hand for imagining him all the time,

hmm
is this love. .mene na jana ahaha
is this love .. tu hi batana ahahaa

Rey picks up his back all set to go to the college and even kriya picks up her purse ready to go the college. Rey's sis, Pihu who had come to call him for breakfast and swayam who had come back home to pick up kriya, both of them notice their brother and sister respectively doing all these things.

PI: hmmm my bhaiya is in love
Sw: finally kriya is in love...


Re+Kr: Is this love???? maybe yes or maybe not.

So, hows it?? Do hit the like tab and give me your reviews.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
yipeee me first one to cmmnt


kitni cute chappy hai the way pihu talks to his dearest bro and our Rey in his Kriyaland awww...

i wasn't able to stop myself from awwwing
it was jst fab

too cute

nxt chappy bhi jldi update krna



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Posted: 13 years ago
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read karke comment karti hu
unres
mind blowing update...
i thought it was reality but when pihu pours water on rey...
he came out with his most beautiful dream 😉
in dream he was abt to kiss her... wrong timing pihu 😆 😆
love both the characters...
pihu is shoo cute nd his mom is fab... cool
everybody knows that rey have some feeling for kriys... 😳
pihu want to go collage with rey and want to see kriya.. thats nice
and the song sequence was amazing..
just loved it
u had beautifully expressed there feeling and what they were feeling fot each other...
yes they are in love with other... 😳 😉
eagerly waiting for next
update soon
thnx for pm 😊
Edited by GayatriJethani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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waaah duude kya likha hai awww his sis is so cute am loving this yaar jaldi update next part is so good the way u made them realise their love for eachother how cute yaar well im loving this one got to say thtwish pihu wuld go wd rey to college oh welll keep riting jaldi update next prt ok no delaayyy
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
Aww Super sweet update...

Lovd pihu's character n the way she teases his brother...

U explained the song beautifully...it really connected to their feeling...

Awesomee
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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super...duper...awesome... Ek dum bindaaz update..
Edited by ShemliArsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!!!! Awesome... 🤗
the beginning was just fab...
But seriously why it had to be a dream????? 😔
pihu is sooo chweeet...she wants to go to college just to see her bhai's new friend..kria.. Oops hone wali bhabhi.. 😉
loved the song part...beautifully potrayed kriyaansh's inner feelings...
In short it was a mind blowing update...
Loved it a looot..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome one mannu!!!:):)

Loved it very much!!:)

And d song part was amazing!!!:):)

Waiting for d next part!!!:);)

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