Jyo.ArShi.Ipk FF:Love In Hatred PAUSED

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LOVE IN HATRED !


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PART 1
{Arnav and khushi were back to Raizada Mashion . khushi is also back with her plans for irrtating arnav! with extra love and care for him !
Arnav was getting ready for his office and was not able to locate his car keys ! he was finding them when khushi arrived}
KHUSHI :Aap ki car keys , SWAMI
ARNAV:Oh plz .. dont start it again khushi
KHUSHI :par kyu ..
{arnav interrpted inbetwwen}
ARNAV:and plz dont call me SWAMI , main tumhare Swami nhi hun !
KHUSHI : Aap humare pati haii 6 months ke liye hi kyu nhi par hai toh na ! pati PARMASHWAR toh hai na
{Arnav with a naughty smile on his face to tease khushi and take the revange of wat she did in Gupta house !}
ARNAVtab toh humne har wo cheez karni chahiye jo ek pati patin ke beech hoti hai !
{khushi in a nerovs tone}
KHUSHI: kya kaha rahe hai Arnav ji ! aap bhul rahe hai ki humari shaadi sirf 6 months ki hai !
{Arnav moving towards her slowly}
ARNAV :so wat khushi , u said it ryt now "6 months ke liye hi chahi aap humare PATi hai " toh ab kya hua jab main khud tumahre pati huni ki duty follow kar rahe hun !
{khushi started moving backwards and started bitting her nails ! Suddenly Arnav's teasing smile was replaced by the his love! as seeing khushi being so innocent and beautiful}
KHUSHI:Arnav ji ... aap
ARNAV :kyu ab kya hua kahan gaye tumhare pyaar , tumhare Swami , tumhare Pati Parmeshwar !?!
{arnav seeing khushi's beauti & innocent forgotted evrything , khushi was not able to move backwards as she reached the end of the wall seeing arnav coming close}
KHUSHI :arnav ji ... ruk jaye !
{but inside her , her heart was saying maat rukigaye !! they both were so close that their started beating fast & both were able to hear ech other's heart beat DHAK DHAK DHAK DHAK}
KHUSHI:arnv...
ARNAV:shhh khushi {and bought his lips near her's , khushi cloesd her eyes as she wanted to feel that moment ! but suddenly Arnav remembered all the scence where kushi and shyam were together ! her statement " ki chode dijiye anjali ji ko "
and the gift wraper .. All his love feelings were vanished & angry came in to its extent Arnav took few steps back and hitted hard on the wall and said}
ARNAV:you are not WORTH it !!
and left from there !
{Arnav's action made khushi scare so much that tears started following from her eyes she thought "kyu karte hai aap aise arnavji , ek pal me itne pyaare aur agle hi pal me itne burre" Anjali saw arnav going to office without having his breakfast}
Anjali: chotey nasta toh karte jaaye
ARNAV :Di bhukh nhi hai directly lunch karlunga !
{And left the house ! "kuch toh hua hai ine doono ke beech tabhi chote itne gusse me gaye hai !"
Suddenly the phone rang !}
Anjali: hello ! haan ji , kya par kab aur kaise ? thik hai hum log aay rahe hai !
Nani ji , mama ji , mami , akash , payal ji , khushi ji , shyam ji
Evryone: kya hua di ??
Anjali: nani ji wo aapki behen ko heart attack hua hai ! aur wo chahti hai ki hum log unnke paas lucknow jaane hogye !
Payal: Anjali di hum abhi packing shuru kardete hai! chale khushi
Akash: aur main tickets book karvte hun!
Anjali: hum chotey se puch lete hai !
{everyone went inside their room for packing After having a talk with Arnav! anjali went to khushi's room where payal was helping khushi in packing}
Anjali: khushi ji humne aap se kuch baat karni thi!
KHUSHI:haan di kahaiya !
Anjali: ji wo humari baat chotey se hui aur
KHUSHI :aur unko bahut saare kaam hai office me isse liye wo lucknow nhi jaa payge ! toh kya aap yahan chotey ke saath ruk jaayngi ? haan di hum yahan Arnav ji ke saath ruk jaaynge ! aap chinta maat kijiye gaye

PART 2 - SCROLL DOWN !
Part 3 - Pg 3
Part 4 -Pg 6
Part 5- Pg 7
Part 6 - pg 9
Part 7 - pg 10
Part 8 - pg 11
Part 9- Pg 13
Part10- Pg 15
Part 11 - PG 21
Part 12 - Pg 23
Edited by babydevil - 12 years ago

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Jyo.Arshi.IPK thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it 😊

continue soon...thanx for the PM dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg!! i'm second yeeehhh...
i have never been second in any of the ff's or ss's
well going for the story it's awesome and marvellous
i loved the concept very much and luking foward to read mor

thank's for the pm and do pm me when u write more😛
Edited by naina1716 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice start dear continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVE IN HATRED
Part 2:

Anjali: ji wo humari baat chotey se hui aur...
KHUSHI :aur unko bahut saare kaam hai office me isse liye wo lucknow nhi jaa payge ! toh kya aap yahan chotey ke saath ruk jaayngi ? haan di hum yahan Arnav ji ke saath ruk jaaynge ! aap chinta maat kijiye gaye !
Anjali: par yeh sab kya hai khushi ji?
khushi: accha yeh , wo di hum jo faltu ka sman lucknow se leai the bas wahi Jiji ke haatho wapas bhejwa rahe hai!
{ kitne pyaar hai dono ke beach me . bina kuch kaha hi ek dusre ki baat smajh jaate hai ! }
Anjali: accha theek hai ! hum chalte hai ! { when anjali was leaving the room se saw a showdow hidding from her , she went there to see who was it }
Anjali: Aap ? aap yahan kya kar rahe hai ??
Shyam : wo ranishabe ! hum aapko hi dundh rahe the !
Anjali: humne par kyu ?
shyam: humne yeh puchne tha, ki hum konsi shrit aapne saath le ke jaaye! mtlb Black waali ki White waali ?
{ anjali thinking : par abhi toh humne inhe batye the ki konsi shirt le ke jaani hai ! aur agar inhe yehi puchne tha toh fir yeh chup kyu rahe the [why was he hidding then]}
Shyam: accha ranishabe humne kuch kaam yaad aaygye hai ! humne chalte hai !
{ and shyam goes ! Anjali thinks : bina jaane hi chale gaye ! kuch toh ajeeb hai !}
Shyam talking to himslef: hum toh sirf khushi ji ke liye lucknow jaa rahe the ! par abb toh wohi nhi jaa rahi hai ! aagr humne delhi me hi ruk jaay toh phir hum unse baat kar sakte aur wo kaam bhi kar sakte hai jo humne karne tha !
{ All the family memeber left for lucknow , khushi went back to her room and sat near pool and started thinkin about Arnav and his behaviour today she was so lost in her thought that how time passed , she did not get to know , suddenly some one knocked the door }
Khushi : kon hai ?
Om prakesh : ji hum op hai khushi ji ! ji wo humne yeh puchne tha ki dinner me kya banne gaye ??
Khushi: Dinner !! ji time kya ho rahe hai ??
Om prakesh : ji 8:30 pm !!
kHUSHI : kya 8:30 beje gaye hai ! hey devi mayyi hum bhi na ! Arnav ji office se aat hi honge aur aati hi unhe dinner chahiye rahte hai !! achha om prakesh ji aap paneer ,aloo,palak aur bhindi cut kar ke rahkye hum aate hai !
Om prakesh : ji khushi ji !
{ it was 9:30 pm and khushi was done with her all work , she had made three vegetables , chapati , dal and rice and was waiting for arnav , and she decided to wait for her in their room }
Khushi: om prakesh ji hum aapne room me jaa rahe hai, jab Arnav ji aaye toh humne bata dijiye gaye}
{and she went inside her room & sat near the pool to take the amazing view of blue sky with moon and stars together glowing and making the sky look gorgeous} { She was thinking about her and arnav , thinking how bad arnav was but sweet and loving moments took over the bad once , what she felt about Arnav she wanted to say it loud out }
Khushi : NAFRAT NHI PYAAR KARTE HAI HUMNE ARNAV JI SE, UNKI EYES , UNKE LIPS , UNKI SMILE ! SAB HUMNE UNSE PYAAR KARNE PA MAJBOOR KARTI HAI ! I LOVE YOU MR. ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA
{ Suddenly she felt that someone was standing behind her she saw a shadow , she turned behind to see who was it }
Khushi: Aap ? yahan kya kar rahe hai ?? aap toh jaa chuke the na ??
Shyam : haan hum gaye toh the par aap ke pyaar ne humne wapas bola liya !
FLASHBACK
Shyam: kya par kaise ?? haan haan humne pata hai ki bahut bade nukshan hoge par hum nhi aay sakte hai ! hume pata hai ki 15 lakh ki baat hai par hum nhi aay sakte hai and he hungs the phone
Anjali: kya hua ??
Shyam : kuch nhi ranishabe ! bas ek case ko le kar ! pata nhi log itne lapharve kaise ho sakte hai ! itne bade evidence kaise kahne chode sakte hai ! ranishabe aapko pata hai hum ek case lar rahe hai jis me hum log jitne hi waali the par humare clint ne wo evudence kahni chod diya aur ab wo oppsite party ke paas hai ! pur 15 lakh ki baat hai !
wo chahte hai ki hum wapas delhi aay jaaye !
Anjali: agar aise baat hai toh aap chale jaaye !
Shyam : par
Anjali: aap jaaye !
PRESENT
Shyam : par yeh aap kya kaha rahi hai ! accha ab hum samjhe! aap humari Parhiksha le rahi hai ! yehi dekhne chahti hai na ki hum aap se kitne pyaar karte hai bas aaj yeh hi toh sabit karne aayi hai !
Khushi : kya mtlb hai aap ke ??
{Shyam putting his both hands on khushi's cheek }
shyam : ab hum se aur intejar nhi hote hai ! aaj toh hum ek ho kar hi rahnge
{khushi used full force and pushed him back and shouted for help }
Shyam: koi nhi hai ghar pe ! chinta maat kijye ! aaj humne koi nhi ruk paayge !
{ khushi started runing and shyam chased him , khushi ran ! and siad
khushi: Arnav ji kahan hai aap ! bacahe lijiye aap humne !! ARNAV JI
{ suddenly the car stopped , ARNAV: is some calling me for help
but he found no one near him or the car ! he went back in the car and started his car ,he was in the mid way of his house }
{khushi was scared , shivering and was badly injured and was hidding behind the certains}
Shyam : Khushi ji hum jaante ki aap kahan hai plz ab aap aur humari pareksha maat lijye !
{ Arnav reached home , he saw the main door opened just near the door om prakesh was laid he was unconsiens , arnav shaked him but no response was there! he shouted KHUSHI, KHUSHI but again there was no reply he got tensed he started searching for khushi... the whole house was destroyed , glass stuff were broken , table and chairs were upside down ! he shouted }
Arnav : khushi , khushi where are u ?? kahan ho tum ! plz reply me
{ khushi was in Anjali's room . teid with rope to the bed and was badly crying , she heard arnav but was not able to reply him as her mouth was covered with a cloth ! Shyam was coming close to her , touching her , touching her cheeks , her neck , her stomach, her leg and said }
Shyam: ab humne ek hone se koi nhi ruk sakte hai !
{ he took out the cloth from her mouth she shouted ! ARNAV JI , shyam came near her to kiss on her lips , but suddenly the door broke it was arnav , he heard shyam .
love
Diva😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ahhh did u have to stop there omg cant wait for the next part plz plz plz update ASAP cant wait anymore yaar both updates were great loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Divya,
A big thanks for sending the link again.The story is interesting.Awaiting to see how the story unfold further.
Thanks once again for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww you stopped there!😲 pl update soon.Good going girl
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plz continue i love it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Keep It Going :) FINALLY Shyam Will Get Caught

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