*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS:Fire and Fire

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melanie

@Black_kittykat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#651

wonderful update... read all the 4 parts again to get the climax 🤪 sorry cud not get it...so hurry up & update 🤗

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Priyavishu

@priyavishu18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#652

Hae I m new to the Forum and just now I saw u r SS...

Its really amazing... All the Words u described r really Excellent...

I feel tat Its like as real... Keep it up...

Success consists of doing the common things of life uncommonly well.

Like as u r Excellent thinking and the Describing way and style...

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#653

That was brilliant. Khushi's POV was really well written..

Can't wait till they both meet..

Can't wait for the next update.

Please update soon..

Thanks for the PM..

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M.A. for IF

@EvilMindedMe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#654

Zehra! This is great! 👏

Interested to know how it'll end!

P.S. I'll edit, if I find a sentence that could be your climax!

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#655

I really feel like crying for these poor souls! I don't know what else to say!

Loved it..

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thulasi_arshi

@thulasi_arshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#656

beautifully written😊

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Madhurya

@maddieee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#657

it's indeed fabulous... 👏 great update

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Natasha

@tash10

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#658

So, this time the story is being penned from Khushi's perspective!!! Loved it!!!😳 She's in such a quagmire between her love and her adoptive parents, but has finally decided to agree to her parents' wishes!!! Looking forward to the next update =)