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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#461

the backround to their relationship was interesting to read, especially the gradual change in arnav's attitiude to parties and to khushi... loved his vulnerabilities when it came to khushi and his attempts to find the truth about khushi's marriage... wonder if it's khushi's marriage or someone else's... only time will tell! and hopefully, arnav won't bleed to death after his tantrum!

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#462

awesome part.. she really is getting married.. you described their first meeting so well..

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Aisha

@.Aisha.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#463

Woah! Arnav's really getting irritated!😆 I actually thought that Khushi was just playing a prank to make Arnav agree for marriage...I guess I was wrong!😛 Anyways, awesome update and thanks for the PM!👍🏼🤗

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Yuks

@-Yuks-

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Such a lovely update. I feel for Arnav, really I do, but sweetheart, something's gotta give. You can't get your way every single time

He didn't even really ask her why she was doing this. Just reacted in his usual explosive way like he does.

I can understand how it feels when you are left for another, but now that he has the resolve, he should use it. But sensibly, not his usual way, ruin something beyond repair before attempting to fix it

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#465

Seeing Arnav upset like this breaks my heart but i know that u'll give us a happily ever after of a ending, soo i'll jus relax and go with the flow.
P.S.: Did i mention jus how much of a AWESOME writer u are :)

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#466

OMG !!!

A part dedicated to me ???
My friends read this and she texted me, and tabse lekar ab tak Ive been so excited to read the part !!
Amd Finally, this is the first thing I do !!

And I loved the update Ze !! It was amazing !!

The bond between Arnav and Anjali described beautifully !! The way you put that Anjali doesnt need anyone to tell her about the changes in her brother, and the slow transformation of Arnav, from ASR to Arnav, Khushi's Arnav !! That was just great !!

And the way he tries to control his emotions, bottle them up , hoping that maybe this is all a joke, maybe she would compromise and come out ! And look what he's done !! Already wasted a good 3-4 days !! And the uncontrolable rage, and the possessiveness which grips at the end, his inability to be with her !! And he cut his hand !! OMG !! What is gonna happen now !!

You are just upping the ante with every update !!
Loving this !!

And once again thanks for the dedication on such an amazing chapter🤗