MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA #7 Thrd8 link 158 - Page 59

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb awesome part but painful n emotional loved it
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lov d geet dlgs

mk deserve dis nt k karn usne geet ko choda tha na

thoda bht pain to shn krna hi pdega

hop maan n geet jaldi mil jaye as maaneet
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Superb part
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superb update with mindblowing dialogues. geets dialogues was brilliant.
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piya cn v gt an updt fr Hum ho gaye apke netym in near future n also of DMG n Ek Main aur ek tu as well...plz
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this is not fair at all ... kya h ye yar ... waiting waiting does this waiting list ever gets cleared... piya u knw our restlessness thn ... i cant wait ... piya plzzz shona update dona... plz plz plz
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Heya friends 🤗

Okay I know after writing updating status I became invisible lol but as you'll know my health is not fine and since my fever recurred my doc gave me a clear warning that i am supposed to take bed rest and this time if this fever comes back it can lead to serious consequences so my beloved Dad took this Doc's warning seriously and did not allow me to go to work nor my classes these days and he knew his darling daughter very well and hence he disconnected the internet so that I have no option left but to take bed rest these days

uff so that's the reason i couldn't post the update even after writing it

But today u will be getting 3 back to back updates one of jaane tu second of mh and third for kopl😳

posting jaane tu in 5 minutes

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Thanks for your love and support dear friends. Here is the next update I hope each one of u would enjoy reading it. I dedicate this update to my darling friend Namita:) Nami dear this update is ur birthday treat I know I am late but due to unavoidable reasons I couldn't post the update before pls forgive ur stupid friend.

PS: I am going to delete my buddy list and I am going to remove all those who r not responding to the pms of my FFs. I am sorry guys but I can't send 900 pms to get only 200+ likes and comments. From the next update onwards I am going to send pms only to those members who r liking and commenting on my FFs so whoever wants a pm do comment and like the update and the ones who aren't doing so would be automatically deleted from my buddy list.

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PART 45

Maan wished that he could rewind the wheel of time and rectify his mistakes but today he was helpless he had everything that he once desired for but he was still unfortunate as he had lost the trust of his love…

Geet: Sheeshe ko todna aasan hotha hai par tute hue sheeshe ko jodna utna hi namumkin… aapko aapki khushiyaan mubarakho aur ab rab se yahi dua karungi ke aaj ke baad Geet naam ki badhdua aapki zindagi mein dubara kabhi daakil na ho… kyunki Geet ke sapne toh mamuli hai aur MSK ki zindagi mein maamuli cheezo ki zarurat nahi [It is easy to break a glass but impossible to join the broken pieces…Be happy with ur dreams and I hope that the curse called Geet will never cross ur path again as she is ordinary and MSK's life has no place for ordianary things]

Geet started walking away from him

Maan: Geet rukho Geet… [Geet pls wait]

Geet: (without looking behind) Call me Miss. Handa MSK as no stranger has the right to call me by my first name

Maan was shattered as today for the first time he drank the poison of Geet's hatred…

He was a rich successful man but yet his condition was worse than a beggar as today the wealth of love was no longer in his reach…HE WAS A WINNER WHO HAD LOST HIS MOST PRECIOUS GEM TO BECOME AN UNFORTUNATE CHAMPION

Geet stepped out of the room and decorated her eyes with black glares as she didn't want anyone to notice the pain she was going through

"Kitni berahmi se kuchla tha tune ye dil

Ab wo dil jo maaf kar sake kaha se laaye

Aakhein khali kar di humari

Ab tumpar barsane ko aasu kaha se laaye

Tanhayi ki aadat ho chali

Tumhare saath chalne ka saath kaha se laaye"

[-Ritzy Di]

Her life was not a game and she could never allow any one to make a mockery of her genuine feelings all over again; to establish this she had to be strong

She held her bracelet possessively and tried to regain her strength

She wanted to leave this place as soon as possible as she feared that her heart might once again become vulnerable

Her prayers were answered as she saw the official entering with Brij

Without thinking twice she moved like a tigress and welcomed Brij with a crackling slap

She held his colar and moved him to and fro and questioned

Geet: Tumhari himmat kaise hui mere Maan ko phasane ki main tumhara khoon kar dungi [How dare u to trap my Maan in this case. I will kill u for this act of yours]

The official requested Geet to remove her hands and tried to calm her down

Official: Geetji ab aapko tension lene ki koi zarurat nahi hai aakirkar aapke vishwas ki jeet hui. Brij ne wo drugs apne gang se churakar unse dhoka kiya aur ye drugs wo apne hi gang ke competitor ko bechnewala tha. Ab ye criminal ke job mein gadari ki ek hi saza hai aur wo hai maut bus issi liye ye apni jaan bachakar bhag raha tha. Maan toh isse galti se mil gaye aur apni jaan bachane k liye issne unse lift maang li aur jab Police ki nakabandi dekhi toh darr ke mare drugs isne Maan ke car mein hi chod di taaki Police ke saath saath dono gang wale Maan ki jaan ke peeche padh jaaye aur ye sahisalamat waha se nikal pade [Geet u need not be tensed now as ur trust has emerged victorious Brij had stealed the drugs from his gang to sell it to the rival gang and the whole world knows that in the crime world the punishment of deceit is only death. His gang members were after his life and he was trying to hide from them; coincidently he took lift from Maan and left the drugs in his car as he saw got scared on seeing us]

Geet could not stop herself and once again she showered Brij with a series of slaps

Geet: Officer iss insaan ko achha sabak sikhayega [Officer teach this man a good lesson]

Official: Don't worry Geetji aisa hi hoga; waise aap abhi Maan ko apne saath leja sakthi hai bus aapko kuch legal documents par sign karna hoga formality ke taur par[Don't worry Geet we will do the needful by the way if u wish u can take Maan with u; u just need to sign some legal papers for formality]

Geet: Ji nahi Officer Maan ke secretary Dev bus aate hi honge main aaj hi LA se wapis aayi hoon aur kyunki ye drugs ka mamla LA se shuru hua hai main nahi chahti ke mere dhakalandazi ki wajah se Maan koi aur musibat mein pade. I hope u understand officer [No officer these things will be taken care by Maan's secretary Dev. I have returned just few moments back from LA and since this case is associated with LA I don't want to create unnecessary problems for Maan by interfering in this matter. I hope u understand officer]

Official: Okay Geet jaise aapki marzi [Okay Geet as u wish]

Geet shakes her hand with the officer and thanked him

Geet: Ab main chalti hoon waise ek baat aapko bata du ke Maan ek emotional scene ka rehersal kar rahe hai kamre mein toh agar aapne unke aakhon mein aasu dekh liye toh chaukiyega mat wo kya haina wo realistic actor hai issliye har emotion mein jaan la dethe hai [I would like to tell u something Officer actually Maan is doing rehersal of one emotional scene in the room so pls don't be shocked if u see tears in his eyes.He is a realistic actor and hence belives to put soul in every act of his. I'll take ur leave officer. Thanks once again]

Officer: Oh wow!

Geet: Ab main chalti hoon [I think I should leave now]

Officer: It was a pleasure meeting u Mam and I am sorry if I said something wrong while handling this case

Geet: No need to be sorry Officer u were just doing ur duty. Take care

Geet left the place from another exit. Sanju was already waiting for Geet.

She got into the car and left the place immediately thus protecting herself from the unnecessary attention of the media

After sometime,

Dev helped Maan to complete all the formalities after which an official announcement regarding Maan's innocence was declared in the media

Naintara was watching the news

Naintara: Uff ye humne kya bewakoofi kar di; agar hume pata hotha ke Maan itne aasani se bahar aa jaayenge toh hum unse peecha chudane ke bajaye unka saath dene ka naatak karte ab hum kya kare [Uff what a foolish act I committed by blaming Maan in front of the media; if I had even the slightest clue that Maan would be out of this mess so easily I swear instead of blaming him I would have stood by him]

Naintara: Par hum tension kyun le rahe hai Maan toh hai hi bewakoof bus unke saamne jaakar koi naatak karne ki deri hai yun chutikyo mein humare mutthi mein kaid ho jaayenge wo [But why am I taking tension Maan is a fool I just need to narrate a story in front of him and he will once again melt in front of my sweet talks]

Naintara: Toh chaliye Naintara shubh kaam mein deri kaisi aur waise bhi agar humne media ke saamne Maan ke khilaf kuch kaha hai toh ussi media ko hatiyaar ke roop mein use karke phir se unka vishwas jeet lenge [So why am I wasting my time let me go any finish this good task at the earliest. It won't be wrong to use the media again to regain the trust of Maan]

She was just about to switch off her TV when she saw the joint interviews of herself and Geet being compared on TV

Naintara: Ye Geet phir se aa gayi itna sab kuch ho gaya par ab bhi Maan ke liye apne dil mein sachhe pyar ka diya wafadari se jalakar rakha hai Madam ne ab dekhna tumhari iss asli mohabbat ko phir se ye Naintara kaise zaleel karti hai [This Geet is here again; she faced a lot of humiliation coz of Maan but still her heart is loyal to Maan. Just wait and watch madam now its time to insult the divinity of ur sacred love]

Naintara took a glycerine bottle with her and walked out of her bunglow

Meanwhile,

Police headquarters

The press was waiting to attack Maan with their questions

After finishing the remaining formalities Maan stepped out with Dev

All the cameras started capturing Maan as soon as he made his presence felt

Journalist 1: Maan aap kya kehna chahenge apne iss giraftari par? [Maan what would u like to say about your short term arrest?]

Journalist 2: Kya aap Police par maanhani ka dawa laayenge [Will u charge Police for arresting u in the wrong case?]

Journalist 3: Jail ki deewaro se khuli hawa mein saas lekar aap kaisa mehsoos kar rahe hai? [How do u feel breathing in open air after staying behind the bars?]

Maan couldn't hear any of these silly questions the only words that were echoing in his mind and soul were "CALL ME MISS. HANDA MSK AS NO STRANGER HAS THE RIGHT TO CALL ME BY MY FIRST NAME"

Was this the truth had he really lost his Geet? Does she really feel that his genuine feelings were scripted or was simply a cheap act?

Was he so unfortunate that the light of his life; the fragrance of his soul will never embrace him again?

His random thoughts were broken as he heard his name

Naintara: Maan…

The pain in his eyes adorned the clothes of anger and the way his hands moulded into a fist were a clear indication that he was all ready to kill this bi**h who was the biggest storm of his life

In a typical Bolywood style Naintara ran towards Maan and hugged him in a dramatic way

The news hungry journalists captured this moment with loads of excitement

Naintara: Maan hum jaante the ke aap begunah hai aur dekhiye aakhirkaar humare pyar humare bharose ki jeet hui [Maan I knew u were innocent and look finally my love and trust proved to be right]

Maan's blood was boiling. He wanted to push Naintara on the ground but he was trying to maintain his calm for some time as he didn't want to insult any woman

Naintara: Oh Maan ab toh muskura dijiye aapki Tara aapki baho mein hai ab yun murjaaya hua chehra kyun jab aapki roshni aapki zindagi aapki panahon mein simatne ko bekaraar hai [Oh Maan why aren't u smiling when now ur Tara is in your folds. I am desperate to melt in yours Maan pls take me in your embrace]

Maan drank his saliva as his anger was now reaching a new level

Naintara: Aaj toh bada khushi ka din hai Maan dekhiye aaj humari mohabbat ke charche puri duniya mein hogi wo kehte haina bure waqt mein toh apna saaya bhi saath chod detha hai par mujhe yakeen hai aapko aaj humari mohabbat par fakr ho raha hoga kyunki aapki Tara ne aapka har kadam par saath diya aur ab toh ye saath humara yuhi umr bhar barkaar rahega [Today is an auspicious occasion Maan as our love is the topic of discussion in the whole world. There is a saying that in times of difficulties ur shadow also does not like to stand by ur side but ur Tara is holding ur hand in front of the whole world u must be feeling proud of our love]

Maan was now ready to give Naintara a solid reply but before he could speak anything one of the journalists interrupted

Journalist: Excuse me Mam jab humne aapse Maan ke giraftaari ki baat kithi tab toh aapne apne aur Maan ke rishte ko apnane se saaf inkaar kar diya tha ab yun achanak se humdardi kaha se paida ho gayi? [Excuse me Mam when we had informed u about Maan's arrest u had clearly mentioned that u disown this relationship so can u make us understand from where did this sudden soft corner develop in ur heart for Maan? ]

Naintara wanted to kill that journalist for asking this question

Naintara: (with a fake smile) Wo toh humne issliye kaha tha taaki hum aasani se Maan ke liye kuch kar sake [Oh that statement was made by me so that I could do something for Maan without any interruptions]

Journalist: Toh kya aap ye kehna chahthi hai ke Maan ki rihayi mein aapka haath hai? [So r u indicating that u r the one who has played an important role in taking out Maan from this mess?]

Naintara: Ji haan humne Maan ke liye aasuyon ki nadiyaan baha di bhagwan ke saamne dekhiye ab bhi humari nighahen lal hai…ye humare sache pyar ki dua ka toh asar hai jo Maan bina kisi adchan se iss case se riha ho gaye [Offcourse I created a river of my tears in front of God and my red eyes r a proof of this truth… this is the power of my unconditional and true love that Maan is out safely from this problem]

Journalist: Ye sab toh kehne ki baat hai Mam par aap sach ko jhutla nahi sakthi; sach toh ye hai ke Maan ke saath unki musibat mein aap nahi balki Geet Madam khade the unhone ek second ki bhi deri nahi lagayi ye kehne mein ke Maan nirdosh hai… aapne toh Maan ka naam bhi sunna gawara nahi kiya par Maan ki sachhayi ki parchayi toh Geetji ki aakhon mein hi nazar aa rahi thi… [These words of urs do not have any impact Mam as we all know the truth Geet was the one who stood by Maan in his bad phase; she didn't even think a second before declaring Maan's innocence whereas u didn't even like the mention of Maan's name. Geet's eyes were reflecting the sacredness of Maan's truth and as far as u r concerned u walked away from him without thinking twice]

Naintara gave the journalist an angry glare.

Naintara: Geet ki kis sachhayi ki baat kar rahe ho tum? Hum tumhe batate hai Geet ki asli shakal. Geet ke bachalan; besharam; kalankit… [Which truth are u trying toi show mw? Let me tell u the real picture of Geet. She is a characterless; shameless and tainted…]

Before she could say any more wrong words for Geet; Maan twisted her hand and forced Naintara to face him

As soon as she moved her face in his direction with all his strength and might Maan decorated Naintara's face with a tight deserving slap

Naintara's hand automatically made way to her face as she was shocked by Maan's actions

She lifted her head to confront Maan but before her eyes could meet the confident gaze of Maan she was once again welcomed with yet another strong blow whose sound was more intense than the first slap😎

Every insulting slap on Naintara's face was mindblowing news for the journalists and they were capturing every shot of this scene from all angles

Naintara: (raising her finger) Maan aapki himmat… [Maan how dare u…]

Maan twisted her finger and turned her hand strongly and without wasting any further moment he gifted Naintara the perfect token of his hatred by showering her with a series of 10 slaps in one go👏

The slaps were so fast that Naintara could not find time to react

Maan left her hand furiously and pushed her away from himself; this action of his made Naintara to fall on the floor and for the first time she tasted the poison of insult and that too in front of the whole media

Maan: Tumhari himmat kaise hui meri Geet ka naam apne gande zubaan par lane ki? Ji toh karta hai ke tumhara gala daba du taaki dubara kabhi meri Geet ki pavitrata par laanchan utaane ki himmat tum jaisi chudail dubara na kar sake [How dare u to take the name of my Geet from ur dirty mouth? I feel like pressing ur neck so strongly that a witch like u won't even dream of ruining the purity and sacredness of my Geet]

Naintara trembled as she saw a new Maan in front of her eyes but her evil mind was not ready to accept defeat

Naintara: Uss Besharam… [That shameless…]

Maan did not allow Naintara to complete the word he slapped her once again with so much strength that the sound of this slap started resonating in the atmosphere

Maan: Besharam; behaya; badduma daag aur kalankit toh tum ho Naintara. Are tum toh itni gaiguzri ho k apna maksad pura karne ke liye tum raah chalte ajnabee ke saamne bhi apne kapde utarne mein ek pal ke liye bhi na hishkichau bus sharth yahi honi chahiye ke wo ajnabee paisewala ho [Shameless; Characterless; a forbidden taint and the epitome of impurity these adjectives are best suited to describe u Naintara. U r such a cheap woman who will be ready to to shed all her clothes on the road in front of a stranger if he turns out to be a rich man]

Naintara's throat was completely dry by now; her whole body was shivering as Maan was making a perfect mockery of her image in front of the media

Maan: Kya kaha tumne tum aasuyon ka saagar baha rahi thi toh chalo ab media walo ko bhi tumhare uss magarmach ke aasuyon ke darshan karwadethe hai [ What were u telling? Oh yes u endless shed tears for me which could give rise to an ocean so let me show the world the source of ur crocodile tears]

Maan snatched her bag from her hand and Naintara moved a little back as she was sacred of getting another slap from Maan

Maan removed the glycerine bottle from her bag and poured it complelty on her face

This was yet another unexpected thing for Naintara; her eyes started burning with the irritating sensation of glycerine

Maan: Dekhiye aise bahaye the inhone wo nautakiwale aasu [This was how she had shed those crocodile tears]

Naintara could not bear any more insult she tried to get up but her feet did not support her and she once again descended on the floor with a huge bang

Maan: Tum Geet ki sachhayi batane wali thina pehle khud ki sachhyi toh pehchanlo; aaj se Naintara ka naya introduction hoga "Ek giri hui aurut jiska koi imaan nahi; koi charitra nahi" Paiso ki bhooki chudail ho tum are tum kya jaano sachhi mohabbat k roohani noor ko tum toh aisa grahan ho jisse shaitan bhi nafrat karne ko majboor ho jaaye [U were going to tell the world the truth behind Geet's image but before that why don't u reintroduce yourself as a cheap woman who does not possess a character. U are a witch who is always hungry for money and it is impossible for u to understand the sacredness of true love as the devil also hates to get a glimpse of a dark eclipse like u]

Maan: Tumhari aukaad toh meri Geet ke pair ke mail ke barabar bhi nahi hai uski ek parchayi mein wo tej hai jo ke har baddua ko dua mein tapdeel kar sake aur tum toh wo batkismati ho jo ke har chehre se muskurahat badi maahirta se cheen le [U don't even come close to the dirt of my Geet's feet; my Geet is a blessing and a holy prayer whereas u r an omen of bad luck who possesses the capability to snatch the smile from anyone's face]

Maan: Khud ko Bollywood Queen kehthi hona par sachhayi toh ye hai ke tum kisi raah chalte bhikari se bhi zyada gaiguzri ho kyunki wo bhi apni izzat ko kabhi bech nahi khate par tum paiso ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti ho ya phir tumhare language mein kahu toh APNA FUTURE SECURE KARNE KE LIYE tum har aire gaire k bistar ko haskar apna sakthi ho kyunki tumhare liye paiso se zyada kuch bhi nahi khud ki izzat bhi nahi [U call yourself Bollywood Queen but the truth is ur condition is worse than a roadside beggar as he too will think twice before selling his respect but u r so cheap that u will go to any extent to gain money. I am sure u will happily accept the deal of warming the beds of every other man that crosses your path inorder to SECURE UR FUTURE as money is what ur heart desires everything else is worthless in front of it including ur self respect]

Naintara sat there completely paralyzed as her plan to humiliate Geet had backfired strongly

Maan: Sachhi mohabbat ko kisi ke sahare ki zarurat nahi hothi wo toh meelo dur rehkar bhi aapke dil ka haal padh letha hai par ye baat tum jaisi DESPERATE PUBLICITY QUEEN kaisi samjhegi? [True love does not require any catalyst; it can understand the feelings of ur heart even if it is miles apart from u… but the divintity of this feeling cannot be understood by a DESPERATE PUBLICITY QUEEN like u]

Naintara was sweating badly

Maan: Tum yaha Publicity ke liye aayi thina ya yun kaho CHEAP PUBLICITY ke liye toh lo maine tumhara kaam aasan kar diya ab bachi kuchi kasar tum khud puri kar doh hmm… let me help u in this apne raat ke anginan humsafar ke saath apna experience hi share kar lo sach kehta hoon masaledaar khabar bankar akhbaar ki surkiyon mein cha jaayogi [U were here to gain CHEAP PUBLICITY so look I made ur job easy now whatever little things are left u can make it up to the mark by narrating the tale of your endless night partners and the experience u shared with them I bet this will indeed make an eyecatching headline]

Maan bends slightly and declares

Maan: Aaj ke baad agar tumne sapne mein bhi meri Geet ke khilaf koi bhi galat baat kehne ki ya karne ki sochi toh tumhara wo hashr karunga ke maut bhi tumhe apne aagosh mein lene se daregi [From now onwards if u even think of harming my Geet even in ur dreams I will deteriorate ur condition to such an extent that death will also think twice before taking u in its folds]

He snapped his fingers and warned her

Maan: GET OUT OF OUR LIFE & STAY AWAY FROM MY GEET OR ELSE BE READY TO FACE HUMILIATION IN EVERY PHASE OF UR LIFE AS NOW GEET IS NOT ALONE HER MAAN IS THERE WITH HER

Maan walked away from there confidently thus allowing the press to carry on the insulting sequence of that bitch by showering her with cruel questions that her evil mind also failed to answer

PRECAP: Naintara goes to meet Geet how will Geet welcome Naintara?😉

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AAAmai first for the first time yeee anyways ye hui na baat maan babu ... NO no no MAAN SINGH KHURANA superb ... Uff the line ws so so much painful Call me Miss. Handa MSK as no stranger has the right to call me by my first name ... its so hurting ... bt ye toh shurwat hai .. maan hs to go through so mch to make his mishty believe in his love ... bt kuch bi ho jaye i luvd the way they say mera maan nd meri geet .. they knw they belong to each other for eternity ...nd piya jii plzzz for god sake tc of ur health ... Amazing update

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