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hum a gaye chalo mere ane ki khushi main party... :-b he he sry jokes a part
ok now update did i really hv to say how it was??,ok i will tell it's good it's only good couz super amazing part toh next hoga
finally sati n shankar met with each other but situation is not so good for them,now their will be fight or must be some little nok-jhok but it will be intresting too see their first meet
vishnu n shankar's convo made this part intresting n sati shankar's meeting
update soon
luv u :-)

lo ji hum phir a gaye phir se party ha ha ha...
upar wale post main space ni thi that's why did one more post
actually i wanted to say sry for being so late
liked vishnu's prankster nature...every time poor shankar has to pay for his prank...ha ha
sare fr8's aise hi hote h apko phasa k bhaag jaate h but apka saath hamesha denge...*cute na*...
really loved the bond b/w shankar n vishnu... :-)

Nice part Aru👏...Thanks for PM

Originally posted by: FairyDreams

PART-1

Its nearly 6 months passed after Shankardev's wife maharani Panchhidevi passed away after delivering a dead baby ..She was so caring wife of Shankar that her death created a never ending emptiness in Shankar's heart and life..Shankar being an introvert person never showed his sorrow or pain to anyone but bore a tremendous agony and loneliness..he was only 18 when he was married to Panchi and in this 12 years she fulfilled every duties of being a life partner..Shankar never wanted to marry another woman after being a king because he couldn't imagine anyone to share his love for Panchi..but still Panchi time to time reminded him of Sati . Shankar's 1st wife and told Sati has the same right on Shankar like her but Shankar every time stopped her..still Shankar feels Panchi always had doubt that Shankar still remembers Sati..and that's why somehow Shankar feels himself responsible for Panchi's death and so decided not to marry again and will adopt a prince to make his heir...
The person after Shankar's wife had importance in his life was his childhood friend Vishnu, their friendship can be regarded as a true example of ideal friendship ..and Shankar's pain made Vishnu so restless that he lost peace of his mind in the thought how to make Shankar happy again..to take his friend away from his loneliness Vishnu often invited Shankar to his place and asked Lakshmi to take care of him..

Palace of Vaikunthpur

In Garden Shankar was playing with Rajkumari Vidisha and Rajkumar Saket two children of Vishnu and Laksmi...his heart lightened with the presence of Vishnu's children and so Vishnu asked them to roam around Shankar...Vishnu after finishing his due Rajkarya came to garden and smiled to see Shankar smiling...Vidisha and Saket that time was debating over the right over Shankar...and Saket however managed to sit on Shankar's lap..failing to remove him Vidisha's eyes got teary and then she noticed Vishnu and ran to him "pitashree:...and her voice made Shankar aware of Vishnu's presence..

Shankar : itne shighra tumhara rajkarya samapt ho gaya mitra????

Vishnu taking Vidisha in his arm came closer to Shankar

Vishnu: karne k yogya aisa koi karya hi kahan hai ab??

Shankar : tum kuch asantust prateet hote ho..kuch kasht hai kya??

Vishnu (addressing to his children) : tum dono andar jao ..tumhare mata tumhare liye bhojan leke prateeksha kar rahe hai...

both Saket and Vidisha ran towards Andarmahal ..they were feeling hungry..

Vishnu : vandhu humse adhik tumhe hamare swavab ka gyan hai..to tumhi anuman kar lo mere kasht ka karan

Shankar (smiles) : satya kaha Vishnu hamein bhali vati gyat hai k jab tak jeevan mein uttejana na ho tabtak dainandin karya mein man hi kahan lagta hai tumhara??

Vishnu (smiles) : vandhu jab itna sabkuch gyat hai to tumhe yeh bhi avashyahi gyat hoga k tumhare prasannata hi hamare santushti ka upay hai??

Shankar : kyun Vishnu tumhe koi sandeh hai k hum prasanna nhi hai?? abhi to tumne dekha hum kaise Saket aur Vidisha k sath crira kar rahe the..

Vishnu : Shankar tum apne apko mithya se bhramit kar sakte ho ...apne pranpriy mitra ko nahin..aur ye tum bhi jante ho...

Shankar ( being grave) : satya keh rahe ho mitra..parantu hum kar bhi kya sakte hai?? chahkar bhi samay chakra ko veeparit disha mein pravahit karke apne jeevan k sunyata dur to nahin kar sakte

Vishnu kept hand on Shankar's shoulder ...

Vishnu : samay chakra ko parivartit kadachit na kar paye ..parantu vartaman samay ko apne ichanusar parivartit to kar hi sakte hai na??

Shankar : mitra hamein tumhare ye rahasyamayata samajh nahin ate hai..kripaya saralta se kaho tum kehna kya chahte ho??

Vishnu (smiles again) : arthat jaise tumhe gyat hai k jeevan mein koi uttejana na ho, to mera man dainandin karya me se uth jata hai..to kyun na ham dono kuch samay k liye deshbhraman k uddyesh yatra kare?? jaise hum purv samay mein kiya karte the??

Shankar : tumhare vichar to uchit hai vandhu ..parantu hum pr ab apne rajya aur praja ke dayitwa hai..aur uske paschat tumhare parivar bhi to hai..

Vishnu : mitra kadachit tumhe smaran nahin hai ke tum is samay bhi tum apne pradhan mantri pr apne rajya aur rajkarya k dayittwa saup ke aye ho..to kuch divas aur sahi..hamare pradhanmantri bhi hamare anupasthiti mein rajkarya palan mein saksham hain..aur rahi baat hamare parivar ki to hamein devi lakshmi aur devi shree pr purn viswas hai . to tum shighra Kailaspur jao aur yatra k prastuti lo..

Shankar : parantu ham chalenge kahan??

Vishnu (smiling mysteriously) : kyun na tumhare jeevan ki shunyata ko dur karne k ek prayas kiya jaye??

Shankar : ham jante hai tum kehna kya chahte ho vandhu..parantu tum jante ho k humein is prayas mein koi ruchi nhi hai aur nahi hum vo Dakshpuri pr kabhi pravesh karenge jahan kabhi hamare pita ka apman hua tha..

Vishnu : to tum us apman k pratishodh kyun nahin lete?? hamne iske purv bhi tumse kaha aur aaj bhi kehte hai..chalo kar lete hai rajkumari Sati ka haran this waisehi jaise hamne kabhi Lakshmi ko Vaikunthpur le aye the..

Shankar : aur hum bhi tumse keh chuke hai k nari haran mein hamein koi ruchi nahin hai..humne Devi Lakshmi ko haran karne mein tumhare sahayata kiya karan tum unse atyant prem karte the aur unka kisi aur se vivah tumhe swikarya nahin tha..parantu hamne Panchidevi k atirikt kabhi kisi stree se prem nahin kiya...aur Rajkumari Sati ko to hum 18 varsh se dekha hi nahin..prem ka to prashna hi nahin uthta...

Vishnu : nahin dekha to dekhne mein kya asuvidha hai..hum chadmavesh dharan karke chalenge..

Shankar : Vishnu yadi tumhe Dakshpuri k hi bhraman karna hai to hum is yatra mein ansh nahin le sakte..tumhe ekaki hi apne sasural jana padega...

Vishnu ( making his eyes round) : nahin mitra nahin..tum jante ho k maharaj Daksh hamse kitne aprasanna hai ..unhe lagta hai k hamne Lakshmi ka haran karke unke putri aur hamere prathama patni Shree ka apman kiya hai..yadi hum akele Dakshpuri jaye to hamein unke krodh se kaun raksha karega

Shankar (smiling) : tum ismein swayam saksham ho vandhu ..parantu tumhare dristi mein Dakshpuri k atirikt vraman upoyogi koi aur sthan nahin hai kya??

Vishnu : avashya hai..Devloka k sabse sundar sthan..Parvatpur..chalo hum wahi chalte hai..aur suna hai k Parvatpur k jyeshta rajkumari Ganga tummein ruchi rakhti hai..ekbar unse bhi mil lenge..

Shankar : dekho Vishnu hum ek hi shart pr tumhare sath Parvatpur chalenge ..hum uhan chadmavesh dharan karke jayenge aur kisiko bhi hamare parichay ka gyan nahin hoga vishesh rajkumari Ganga k sammukh hum kadapi nahin jayenge..sweekar hai???

Vishnu : avashya vandhu..to shubh karya mein vilamb kyun..aj hi Kailaspur jao aur apa prastuti shuru karo..

Shankar : jaisa tum chaho vandhu

Vishnu hugged Shankar in happiness

Vishnu : waise hamne to yeh bhi suna hai k parvatpur k kanishth rajkumari Parvati is prithvi ki sabse sundar kanya hai..chalo ek jhalak unka bhi darshan kar lenge..ab koi apatti mat karna..

before Shankar could say something a ringing voice came from back

kis sundar kanya ki baat ho raha hai???

both friends turned back and found Maharani Lakshmi coming towards them

Vishnu : rani hamare liye tumse adhik sundar kanya to is brahmand mein nahi hai

Lakshmi : humein gyat hain k aap hamare vishay mein baat nahin kar rahe the..khair choriye hum to bas aap dono ko yehi smaran kara ne aye the k bhojan prastut hai ..aur sab aap dono ke pratiksha kar rahe hai..chaliye ahar kar lijiye

Shankar : chalo mitra bhojan k samay kisi aur vishay pr charcha anuchit hai..

Vishnu : avashya..

both friends followed Lakshmi to Ahargriha..

I love your FF's a lot. The scenes are so well written and the dialogues are elaborate. U could make a great screen play writer. Should think of that as a profession. Please update Part 8 soon.👍🏼

wohooo 🥳finally the most awaited moment is here princess Sati meets Shankardev n this one"Hath mat lagana in falon ko..is pr keval hamara adhikar hai..." is osm n Krishna n Rudra's convo as usual sweetest part😳waiting for Shankardev's reaction to Sati update soon...

Could translate to English please.

FairyDreams superb. Waiting eagerly for the next update from u. 😛

Like always very good and a great read.. Loved the bit where Shiv and Sati finally meet. And Shiv and Vishnu have been protrayed as fbrothers. It was fantastic to read their convo. And I am sorry for the late reply as I on holiday and I need to wait to get internet. But will reply sooner from now on. I cannot wait to read the further updates.