ArShi FF~ Shades Deeper Than Grey *Ch-3 Updated*

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Nice update...A is a stalker! ;)

& K is so affected by the meeting that she is obliovus to her surroundings...

-Sona

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

that was amazing...loved it!!

looking forward to read more...

Do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Akrighty!! Sign me up for PMs!! :) I had waited with bated breath for someone to write this!!! An ArHi version of 50 Shades and its here!!! I'm intrigued! Although the first two chapters were strikingly similar...you obviously have your worn story to write here! :) Can I please get PMs for the next time you update? Please? Thank you! :)

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WittyKitty

@WittyKitty

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Wowowowowow .I just found this k I am hooked. Waiting for the next installment.please update,jaldi,jaldi!

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Moon_light

@Moon_light

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Radhika 🤗

Great to be reading something after so long and its college that has been keeping you away from us, no worries, am just glad to see your post and i must say, it made great reading as always. How can you keep such nice stuff tacked away in your brain for so long? You should update more often!! 😊

Your writing transports me immediately into your story, its a fab story, i only wish it was a novel coz all i wish now would be for a nice steaming cup of coffee and this story and i think i'd be in heaven!!

Looking forward to Chapter 4.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

I'm glued to it. i haven't read the original novel, so don't know how similar they are. But i'm loving this case of Love at first sight or you can say "The unknown bond" :) It feels so good reading this..

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Arnav followed Khushi that was shock

Arnav has some past with Khushi i thnk

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Sammy its so awesome to finally have your comment, I've been waiting for it like anything ^_^ and its because of friends and readers like you that 'm always motivated to write better than before.
Thanks for your lovely comment dear and also I must the kind of patience and brains you have when it comes to reading I must say you can be one f those amazing critiques and opinion writers. Thanks so much again.
Love you always and have missed you tonz and believe me when I say that 🤗
Always be there by my side. I'd always need you no matter what may come.

xoxo ❤️

Originally posted by: tariqsamira
Radhika 🤗

Great to be reading something after so long and its college that has been keeping you away from us, no worries, am just glad to see your post and i must say, it made great reading as always. How can you keep such nice stuff tacked away in your brain for so long? You should update more often!! 😊

Your writing transports me immediately into your story, its a fab story, i only wish it was a novel coz all i wish now would be for a nice steaming cup of coffee and this story and i think i'd be in heaven!!

Looking forward to Chapter 4.

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

I'm so glad you liked it. I hope I'd always be as entertaining as I have been lately!
Thanks Guys!
Love and Hugs ❤️

Originally posted by: Vsc94
Wowowowowow .I just found this k I am hooked. Waiting for the next installment.please update,jaldi,jaldi!

Originally posted by: aquagal
I'm glued to it. i haven't read the original novel, so don't know how similar they are. But i'm loving this case of Love at first sight or you can say "The unknown bond" :) It feels so good reading this..

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

First of all thank you so much for taking good few minutes to comment for my story! I really appreciate for I put in too much of my time as well ❤️ Well I won't give any hints you might be right or extremely be wrong in that perception 😆 I'd keep the suspense going a li'l longer, though!
Keep me up for updating good like this ^_^
Love and Hugs 🤗

Originally posted by: ArShifan1997
I love this! Its so interesting :) And I have always remarked that Christian Grey and Arnav Singh Raizada are extremely similar. But of course, Arnav takes the cake for me anyday 😳
Waiting to see how hot it will get in here ☺️

I also love how you're building up the characters. Khushi is adorable, and Arnav is very dashing. La is really sweet as well 😊

Haha, stalker Arnav 😆

Update soon!

Cheers, Avi.

*Edited

Im guessing Jashit is Arnav's best friend? Hmm, adds another complication to the story. It shows how gentlemanly he is, holding his friend's sacrifice in high regard.

Lets see how far he goes with his gentlemanly attitude where it concerns Khushi ☺️

Because no matter how hard he tries...he will fall for her. 😊

Loved it!