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Sreya Roy

@sreya19roy

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Angel, kittu??? kya ho raha hai yahan??? 😕

Nice update...bt bohot chotu sa tha, next time bada wala chahiye 😊

Thanx for the pm BTW 😊

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esha

@ArShaAngels

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

awesome updte..

sorry late comment karne ke liye...

mujhe pm hi nahi mila tha...

but it was really gud...

updte soon

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kriyansh19

@kriyansh19

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Nice concept ..!
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
A bit confuse bt update soon ..!
N pm me wen u update next ..!

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tanu_arsha

@tanu_arsha

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Chapter 2

Swayam - but what..???

Angel - aap khud hi jaake dekh lo..

She said n left with her friend. Swayam went up and knock the door

*no response*

Swayam - kits dekh chup chaap se darvaaza khol..!!!

Swayam - dekh ab agar main kholunga na toh bahut peetunga tujhe main

Swaym - kits 😡

A girl dressed up in a cute pair of pajama's open d door.

Kits - kya hai..???

she said aggresively..!!!

Swayam pulled her inside and locked the door.

Kits - abe oye kya kar raha hai tu..???

she said in a shock..!! 😲

Swayam - kahan chali gayi thi 😡

anger clearly visible in his voice

Yahan aana tha toh bata ke nahi aa sakti thi..!!! dumbo idiot fool...!!!!

He again said getting hell mad..!!!

Kits - s..sorry..!

Swayam - what sorry han..??? mujhe bhi nahi bataaya. apne sam ko bhi bataane ki zarurat nahi samjhi na tune. wahan toh mana kar diya aur kaha ki aise behave karun dat i dont even noe u. why??? apni maasi se itna pyaar karti hai han? itna ki unki wajah se mujhe bhi chodke chali gayi..!!!!

he shouted on her and she just hugged him and cried a lot..

Kits - im soo sorry sam but wo promise. i have to leave all. im sorry please maaf kardo na. pakka i wont do it again. i promise. sorry..!!

Swayam patted her head.

Swayam - its kk. and ye kya haalat bana rakhi hai haan? kuch khaati bhi hai ya nahi tu 😲

Kits - khaati hun na

Swayam - kya..?

Kits - mom ki daant 😆

Swayam - 😡

Kits - woops

Swayam - chal chup cchaap..

Kits - kahan??? 😕

Swayam - lunch karne

Kits - aye u reserved haan

Swayam - chup baith. meri taraf se treat samajh le

Kits - kis baat ki treat

Swayam - tu chal chup chaap

Finish..!!!!

chalo comment karo 😳

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Its really cute ..!

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

lovely update...

it was short but really cute...😊

Edited by cool_star14 - 13 years ago

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Awesome part..
Loved it
kits nd sam convo was superb..
Update soon
thnx for pm

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Yay . . . . Kriya 🥳
ye dono to cousins hai . . . . . Aur sabke saamne chupa rakha hai 😉
I hope swayam ab kriya ki mom ko mana lega 😛
manana to padega . . . . . Varna hamara kya hoga 😆