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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
amazing prologue...
update soon...😊
and plz. do pm me...
Edited by Eyesfriendly - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Chapter 1

*2 days later*

-- St. Louis --

Rey - guys ye swayam kahan hai aaj kal...?

Sharon kept qute

icky - really yaar. uski philosophies ke bina mazaa nahi aa raha

Vishakha - yaar taani bolo bhi wo kahan hai...?

Taani - umm bhai wo . . .

Neha - taani why not tellung us where swayam is?

Tani - wo guys bhai . . .

Rey - bhai what taani?

Taani - bhai ghar waapis chale gaye

All - what...!!!!

Taani - haan wo actually . . .

Sharon - ghar...? but uska ghar toh yahin mumbai mein hi hai

Tanni shook her head saying no

Taani - nahi bhai ka asli ghar new york mein hai

All - NEW YORK...!!!!!

All of them were damn shocked

Swayam belongs to new york was really a big blow for everyone

Rey - but wo toh ...

Taani - bhai went coz of angel...!

All - angel...?

Taani - haan bhai ki choti behen...! angel toh bahut tym se zid leke baithi hui thi ki waapis aao par bhai ne use promise kiya tha ki woh footloose ke baad zarur waapis aa jaayenge aur wo chale gaye

Vishakha - dude pehle kriya aur ab swayam great...!

Bharat - sahi mein re. humaar paas toh jaise koi dusra kaam hi nahi hai

-- New York --

Swayam reached his home and was standing infront of his house. opps correction. shekhawats's and khanna's residence

A girl was chasing her friend. Both of them were so lost in eachother but finally one of them look at swayam standing there. he opened his arms and that girl hugged him as tight as she could..

Swayam - hey my angel...!!! hows u...?

Angel - bro i missed u a lot

2nd Girl - heyaa swayam. great surprise huh..!!! pehle kittu aur ab tu...!!!

Swayam - kittu yahan hai...???

Angel - haan brro wo ek mahine pehle hi aayi thi..!!! but





finish

phew chalo baccha log comment tym

jaldi-2 comment karo jisse ki main jaldi-2 update karun 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
oky kittu is kria lekin khaana kaise??????

who is angel??????

zara CS do na i mean shakal ke saath... so u know can see them ..

plzzz

K so not fair. tu contacts use karke first comment karti hai...

gandi bcchi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

oky kittu is kria lekin khaana kaise??????

who is angel??????

zara CS do na i mean shakal ke saath... so u know can see them ..

plzzz

K so not fair. tu contacts use karke first comment karti hai...

gandi bcchi


😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
res

unres

angel, kittu?

anyways yeh thoda confusing hai...

but this was a bit short...

Swayam belongs to NY...a big blow for me too...

n angel uski sis... shekhawats n khuranas hopefully its Kria khurana then😳

hope ki nxt update mein sab clear ho jaye...

well this was really fab

I loved it

keep it up

Edited by -shenz- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
dont worry yahan unres abhi kar rahi hu... hopefully bada wala comment😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: -shenz-

dont worry yahan unres abhi kar rahi hu... hopefully bada wala comment😛

nahi mera matlab tere angry emoticon se tha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

nahi mera matlab tere angry emoticon se tha

woh toh saara tere mish k upar nikal na chahiye... yaha nahi
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
amazing update.i think kittu is surely our kriya
thanks for pm and update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Amazing bt confusing?
Kittu angel?
Plz cs post karo na

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