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arshilover3

@arshilover3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#621

One Word... Magnificent!!

I loved this update so much!!

The appearance of Dolly Maasi has definitely made a difference in the atmosphere... 😃 😃

Arnav ka 'Dil ki Baat' in the last update touched me deeply...

The way he expressed his feelings in such depth and in every little detail was nicely done... 👏 👏 👏

So that Khushi can understand his state of mind and heart...

He was more hurt than she was... I mean he was already hurt because she was hurt and then he felt the utter guilt and the pain...

So much pain!! 😭 😭

I loved the change of expression when he took Shyam's name... They both despised him... 😡 😡 😡

Also when you made Khushi think about their future without that 'fateful night'... I adored it...

I admire the new Arnav who is acting more like a 'husband'... 😍

He is treating her with respect and 'small gestures'... I love it!! 😃

I mainly love your work because they are quite realistic... ⭐️

Especially in 'Can You Forget The Past'... That forgive and forget doesn't come easily in reality... 😕

By the way, I'm happy to hear that your Mum is feeling better...!!

Thank you for PMs.

Please continue soon.

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someoneipk

@someoneipk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#622

I have been really liking your storyline...thanks for the pm...

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#623

Wow😃...was waiting for the update..brilliant as always.The time has come when the wounds have started healing...Awaiting another update and thanks for the PM

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Sanaya95

@Sanaya95

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#624

nyc...😊

Edited by Sanaya95 - 13 years ago

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amritab

@amritab

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#625

I'm really enjoying the fact that you are taking it slow between Arnav and Khushi - each chapter is revealing a little more about each of them - within the story, to each other - to us the readers. love dolly maasi - I hope she remains continually present in their lives. great chapter!