I am unlucky.. love s not 4 me ss of kr &sw - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
Haiii...awesummm!!!! Totally loved it!!!!

Kitni jaldi khatam ho gaya...pata hi nahi challa...:(


Eagerly waitn for the nxt/last update!!!! <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updte...
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
When is d nxt update?
Plz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update..
Loved the way how Rey cares for kria..
Plz revel the truth fast...

Thanks for pm...


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Posted: 13 years ago
o my gosh swaron r already married, god can't bealive, i love d way rey scold kriya
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx for the pm
amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
here s the promo pic lolll😛


Edited by karthikasekhar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was very cute...waiting for the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww lovely pic,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,waiting 4 update😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

so here s the last update and es bar mujey aap ka ek beda vala comment chahiye about the whole part of ths story accordng to that i vil try my best to entrtain vth my new os pihu ki pappa or tarun ki pappa ka ek prem kahani so here v go

rey;-par ur myn only mine so u cant ..ek bar sach tho sunno

kriya;-sach kya sach ?????????

rey;- aab kyu pooch raheyho

kriya;-sach kaisa sach ye sab joot ke peecha ek sach be

rey;-tum kyu eysey behave karahaheyhu

kriya;-aap ko kya ..aap ko tho vo taani ka phikar hey na

rey;-taani taani taani ...ha mey taani ko pyar karthi hu aab ok na

kriya;- ya i new aap taani ko pyarkarthi hu mujsey nahey mey tho ek tissupaper ke tharana jo be mujey use kar saktha right

rey;-kriya vatha hell ur takng

kriya;-ya jo be jab be chathahu mujey use kar saktha

rey stop it damit tum ye line phir rpeat kiya tho mujey pathanahey mey kya karoonga par kuch eysa karoonga ..

kriya;-esliye tho me bola mey ek tissu paper ke tharahu

rey caught her by waist vith full on anger haa tum ek

tissue paper hu sirph mereyliye jab jathihu sirph mey

use karonga kisi or ko nahey dena no way ..she s

breathing so hard


kriya;-get lost frm my life


rey;-sersly!!!!!! Kya tumey koy phar nahey padeyga jab

mey tumarey lifsey lost honga ..kya tum mujsey pyar

nahey karthi???????

Kriya;-tumey mujsey zyadha pyar karthi hu esliye mey

ney bola merey lifsey chaley javo


rey gose near to her hear and say i love u kriya i love u

kriya;-i hate u i hate u...aap ko taanikey pass janachahiye i mean aap ka patni key sath

rey;-mey tho mera pathnikey sath hu .or vo taani kon hey

kriya;-rey plzzz yeha sey javo

rey;kriya tumara prob kyahey ??? mey sirph tumey pyarkarthahu or tum

kriya;-nahey aap mujsey pyar karthatho aap hamry shadikey dhin mujey akeyley chodkar kyu gaye uss taani keliye right pir kyu

ret;-ye sach nahey mey tumarey liye gaye

kriya;-kya ??? aap javo plz

rey;-mera bath tho sunno

kriya;-plzz go away frm me

rey;-fst lisen vat i...

kriya;-plz javoo

rey caugh her lip into his and kissing passonatly but she s pushng rey hardly the one thng she can understand through his behavir is he loves her but she dnt no y ?? who s taani...finally rey pind her to te wall still he s kissing .he just started to bite her lip strongly she s suffrng a huge pain finally he broke the kiss

rey;-sach ye hey

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viky my best frnd

neha vikys gf

shivam my 2nd best frnd

viky ;-hi rey

rey;-hi

shivam;-kaisey ho

viky;-teek hu

shivam;-hey do u no neha

rey;-neha???

shivam;-haa the gal who s workng vth us and next to vikys cabin

viky;-no

rey;-kyu

shivam;-i thnk she likes u

viky;-vat

rey;-yaa i thnk so

viky ;-no way so bye shivam c u later

rey;-ya i also vant to go

taani;-hi shivam y did u lie that neha loves viky actually u like her na

shivam;-ya par

taani;-dnt vory i vil help u

days passed viha started lovng each other

rey;-so wazap

viky;-kuch zyadhanahey par mey kush hu i got such a gal frnd like neha

rey;-ur lucky ye kiska photo hey

viky;-vo neha or uska frnd ka

rey;-frnd giv me

viky;-ye neha or ye kriya

rey;-kriya??

viky;-ya she s lookng cute naa

rey;-mmm hmmm yup

shivam;-wowww ye gal kon hey nehaki sath

viky;- vo vooo vo rey ke gf

rey;-kya???

viky;-plzzz

rey;-haaa

shivam;-she s so cute kash vo mujey ek night mila

rey;-kya?? stop it shivam

shivam;- any way if u dnt vant her giv it to me byee

rey;-y viky tum eysa bola

viky;- tumey ek sach pathahey

rey;-kya

viky;-at frst neha dsnt loves me or shivam neha ko like kartha hey ye bath mey ney shivam kisi or sey bath karney vakth suna

rey;-its ok par vo shivam eysa ussey kya hogaya

har dhin viha cames to reys house neha told about kriya alot rey started likng kriya but he never seen her..finally viha decided to get marry ..taani startd likng shivam but vn he heard about ths newz he vas shoked and he decided to kidnap neha and use her for one night all these heard by taani so she dsnt vant to happn ths

so he called rey

rey;-hello ye kon

xxx;-sory i cant say the name but i shd lik to say sum imp thng and she narrt it and said plz jaldhey kuch karo if not shivam kuch or kareyga

rey;-ya sure and thanks

finally rey decided smthng next day mong rey key kehaney pey viha got register marrg and rey narrets y and give a small gift they open and seen its two passport to malasiya ..and a job ticket too for viha .finally for rey they vent.viky got job and and they settle there.these all thngs were came to no by shivam so he decided to spoil reys life mainly kriya

in that time reys parents decided to find a perfct match.but rey dsnt even like any gal becoz in her mind kriya s there

finally shivam ke kehaney par taani started her actng "the drama queen"

taani;-hi aap rey hona

rey;-yup aap kon

taani;-mey taani

rey;-so

taani;-i like u

rey;-vat??

taani;-haa plzz

like wise days passed rey loose the hope he thnks kriya s not ment to be rey so he tried to like rey..one day taani or rey vent to some coffe shop and he frgt her mob in car the phone beeps 1st rey thnk no i shd not take finally he saw he caller id its the hell shivam he took

shivam;-my seet heart kaisey ho i missed u alot hamrey plan sucess hena or tumey patha hey rey ka parents ek ladki uskeliye chooskiya vo or kon nahey kriya par tumara ye actng ke vajasey vo shadhi hamey toona hoga or ekdhin keliye vo mera hey ..rey u gone so dear bye i am drvng so cal u later

rey;-kya ye sab ..or kriya the gal who choosn by my parents 4 me s kriya ..taani s actng ye taani shivam ke gf o god ye kya ...vait and vatch vat i am gng to do or kriya sirph mera hey

taani;-rey kya huva

rey;-kuch nahey mey socha kyu nahey ham dhono kal shadhi nahey karsaktha

taani;-shadhi ... vo be ethny jaldhey no rey

rey get out from the car and slap her infront of all

rey;-kyu eysa kiya ..aaj sey abey sey merey zindhagy sey jaavo

finally he married kriya and he vent back to dubai becoz he dsnt van any thng to happn by shivam ..aftr sm days she vn dubai becoz of swaron he tried her best to act like the persn who hate her most finally ven he saw shivam there his anger incresd he decided to say all the truth but destiny yahey thak dhonoko lekkar agaya

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rey;-aab bolo mey kya karoo bolona kriya

kriya;-rey I am sorry mujey pathanahey tha plzz rey

rey;-u now how much u hurt me .. kudh tumarey vain kattkar .vn I heard it I thnk I just lost my breath some were but u didn't care right or tum chatihu mey tumara zindhagey sey chalie javoo I am gng I vont come back

kriya;-I am sorry I dnt no anything abt ths plz rey plz rey I am sorry I vont rpeat

rey;-I am gng bye

kriya;- yaa aap javoo …she press her hand and throw her bandag to the waste bin its bleeding too hard..

rey push her towards him and give a angry look and started to suck each and every drop of her blood she was shokd to see his respond..he s sucking like a passitn vampire

she felt shivers ...it was new to her...she wondered what that feeling is...

she turned back...closed her eyes tight to stop her tears.. .he just crushed her b/w him and bed and started kissing her neck and shoulder while his hand clutched her dress...she became conscious..even then also he s kissing and biting her lips so hard finally he caught her tightly he never vant her to gave away from him finally they both slep each other in there arm …

next day mong both started a new life not only kreyansh

swaron too days passed both couple vent for

honeymoon to swizerland after that kreyansh and

swaron settld in dubai after two year swaron got a

beautiful boy child they named sidharath and accrdng

to reys wish kriya gave birth to a beautiful cute twin

angels named riya and reya so now both the couple life s gng sweetly


par shivam or taani ka kahani mey kya huva???


so guys thankz to u supprtng me to write os now its fnsh

vith a happy endhng so tankz for the likers now need ur

likes and valuable comment



and here s the next story 4 u actually I updated 1 intro

part and 2 main parts sodnt 4get to read it

pihu ki pappa or tarun ki pappa ka ek prem kahani


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