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Posted: 19 years ago
that was g8 continues soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww that was a very gud part...do cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part!!

thank god kripa didnt get an abortion!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
amazing part
cont soon
lol angad is getting jelous
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks everyone!! yup kripa didn't take an abortion!! she lied to she could make angad hate her... 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part 😳 👏
plz continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
part 19

angad has had and marches up to kripa and soham kripa and soham look up at him kripa looks at soham then at angad then she stands up

k (angry)- why did you follow me?
a- you didn't kill our kid?
k (shocked)- i...
a- kripa.. you didn't kill our kid!
k- angad just leave me alone and go back to your beloved simi {gets tears but hides them}

{simi will be played by anjali in kavyaanjali and you all know soham is played by ejaz khan meaning kavya}

a- thats it

angad grabs kripas arm and drags her out of the place people are staring at them soham controls the people

angad is mad and confused and also happy

a (hugs kripa)- you didn't kill our kid!

kripa just stands there then angad remembers kripa
saying i love you to soham

a (gets mad)- dammit you do you love soham?
k (scared)- i.. i only love his as a friend..
a (calm)- really?
k- yeah..
a- oo.. well grab your bag and come with me! (grabs kripas arm and turns to go)
k- were are we going?
a (turns to look at kripa and smiles warmly)- home..

kripas heart melted when he smiled at her kripa gets her bag and both angad and kripa go home when they get home angad notices it is late kripa was about to walk to her bedroom when angad grabs her arm and kripa turns around

a- at least eat something

kripa smiles this time angads heart melts seeing her smile kripa was about to make something

a- what are you doing kripa? you should take care of yourself and our baby...

kripa smiles at seeing angad care so much kripa goes on the couch and turns on the tv angad is cooking kripa is watch 'Kya Hoga Nimmo Kaa' all of a sudden kripa hears something fall she goes into the kitchen and sees angad covered in flower kripa tries not to laugh angad sees her

a- kripa you go watch your show... i'll handle it..
k- its ok.. ill help

kripa bends down and all of a sudden she feels something in her stomach

k- ahhhhhh!

angad helps her up and carries her to the sofa and makes her lie down angad gets kind of mad

a (kind of mad)- kripa i told you i will handle it.. now look what happened..

but kripa is lost in her world unknowingly kripa places her hand on angads check angad looks at her

a- kripa...

kripa gets out of her trance and notices her hand on
angads check and takes it off quickly

k- sorry...
a (kind of sad)- its ok..

angad starts to turn but kripa holds his arm he turns

k- how about we just order pizza?
a (smiles)- thats a good idea..

angad orders pizza while they are waiting they watch a movie angad puts in a scary movie... {can't think of one} whenever the scary parts come kripa puts her head on angads chest closes her eyes tight and digs her nails into his arms angad was enjoying this then all of a sudden the doorbell rings kripa gets scared and digs her fingernails deeper

a- chill kripa its the door
k (acting like she wasnt scared)- i knew that..
a (smirks)- sure you did..

angad answers the door and kripa comes too the pizza guy is there angad is wearing short sleeved shirt the guy gives the pizza and when angad was about to give the money

pg- wow your wife must love you a lot

angad smirks looking at kripa kripa is confused

k- why?
pg- take a look at his arms

kripa looks at his arms and sees her nail marks on angads arm and blushes

pg (whispers to angad)- youre a lucky man dude my wife never even looks at me... (lol)
a (grins big and looks at kripa and puts a arm around her shoulder)- dont tell anyone but my wife wants us to have 100 babies... (lol)
pg (his mouth drops open)- lucky dude... well i better leave... bye..

kripas mouth is wide open angad closes the door and looks at kripa

k (yells)- ANGAD!!!!!!!!!!!
a- yes darling...
k- youre SOOOO dead!!!!!

angad runs and kripa chases him around the house

k- i want a 100 kids? and that with you yeah right!!

angad gets sad and stops kripa senses she hurt angad and tries to say sorry

k- ang...
a (inturrupts)- no its ok... lets eat... (dull)

angad walks to the table and sits down kripa holds her ears and does the sit ups angad looks at kripa

k- sorry... please forgive me.. i didnt mean that...
a- but youre right... were not even married...
k- but..
a- stop and eat...
k- no i wont stop until you forgive me...

angad starts to eat kripa is tried but doesnt stop its been ten min and angad looks at kripa who is still doing the situps

a- ok i forgive you now eat of else the baby will starve...
k (hugs angad)- I love you

kripa goes and sits down and starts to eat angad just thinks about kripa saying i love you over and over

this part is for raksha didi! hope you like it!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwww

for me???
thank u soooooooo much!!
i LOVED it!!!!

awesome part!!!!
-Luv Raksha xx
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww that was soo cuteee 😳 😳 loved itt continue soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: blah_blah

awwwwwww

for me???
thank u soooooooo much!!
i LOVED it!!!!

awesome part!!!!
-Luv Raksha xx

thanks didi! im glad you liked it!!😃
- Mauli

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