Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted]

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Sindhu

@sree10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

GREAT. I had forgotten about shavathaalam. u reminded me. This story reminds me of many Malayalam novels and folk lore i read years back.

THANK U.

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-publicenemy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: cadbury26
hey it was incredible update ..but there's a problem
Devi i donno what's a mangalik dashia
so m confused ...but any ways thanks for the pm

""His family was just as illustrious as ours, and they had a healthy respect for astrology, just like ours. So, they wouldn't let them get married. My great-aunt, she had chovva-dosham… She was manglik."

He had never put any stock in astrology, but knew that many still did. Clearly, back in the day and especially in this neck of the woods where tradition and ancestry seemed to be seeped into the soil to such a degree that they seemed to drink and eat it daily, it must have been all that ruled.

"So what happened?"

"He defied his parents. Wouldn't return to their illam and stayed here. He wanted to marry her, no matter what. My great-great-grandparents were trying to figure out how to deal with this, but even my great-aunt wouldn't agree to the marriage."

"Why not?"

"I don't know how it works in North India, but there is a strong belief here that if you have chovva dosham, then your spouse will not live long. She… she believed it, so she wouldn't marry him."

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Great updates so Kashi has manglik loved Arnav and Khushi's conversation seems like they are letting some walls down and instead if jusr bickering having more meaningful conversations

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-daffodils-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

i had read chap 5 to 20 in a single strech...

really wonderful...ur stream of thots...n the powerful words...r mindblowing... the verbal combat b/n arnav n kashi in the initial chaps...n the progressions of ur story...!!!!i loved it...

i really hooked to this ff...

i lovd this...u r presenting new n deep aprons of concern,personification...caring...all...

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nimra21

@nimra21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Stunningly powerful update. Best chapter of the story so far no doubt it. Kashi is such a strong girl but Arnav is right. This curse won't be enough to keep the vultures away. The dialogues were especially brilliant. Well done! :)

Thank you for a wonderful story. :)

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

yes, i agree with the previous commenters.. this is the best chapter so far.
because this made me go up and read it again.. to capture the nuances in the text.
then read it again, to catch the nuances in the subtext.
love how you have bought in the dynamics between them.. and how nalan is utterly comfortable with arshi's proximity
. thank you for the update!

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amritab

@amritab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

I loved this line "Even you, a man I am sure has never experienced true desire in his life, cannot resist me." I thought it was so intuitive of Khushi to recognize Arnav in this way after having just met him. And it is so true - he has kissed and kissed her well so many times already. Aah if only I knew such passion in real life. Great chapter!

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

The conversations between them is the highlight of this story, and I say repeatedly that you out-do yourself with every update.

Love it...absolutely!

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

Congatulations on the new thread...
And the update was really awesome as usual...
The interaction between the two, their vulnerabilities - you did complete justice to each and every aspect😊
And - "Why is your... Puli... shy"? - that really made me smile😆😆

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

It usually takes a while (or a good night's sleep) to let your updates sink in, and by the time I comment, everyone has already said what I was thinking.

The update was amazing. Has it really been only a day since they met? (One day, one thread? ;) lol) They have an odd camaraderie, sort of. (Why is it so difficult to find the right words? I always feel like there couldv'e been a different, better word...)

According to my research a.k.a. searching google, I read that if said person is born on a Tuesday then it cancels out the dosh. Or if the person you are marrying is also manglik then it also cancels out.

Arnav, Nalan, and Kashi.. Their interactions are so interesting and fun.

I can't wait to read more! Loved the update, D!