Arhi FF: Kalarikkal House-2 [Thread 3 link posted]

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amv63

@amv63

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Posted: 13 years ago

#721

I wonder if the pre-Kalarikkal House Arnav would have reacted to Ravi's accident the same way or would he have been more annoyed about the inconvenience of being without his clothes and laptop. I think the past 2 days have changed ASR, sort of mellowed him into the Arnav he keeps hidden deep within.

He's forming a deep bond with Nalan and it's going to break both their hearts when Arnav has to leave.

You add so much depth to your story with these little touches Devi...the story reading, Arnav's realization of and respect for Nalan's self-respect even at this young age.

BTW, hope the boys stayed back and helped Kashi clean up the kitchen after the mess they made with the flour!!😛

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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: V323
@KBR- ^^ aww come on man, I'll make him upma every other day. I'll read him Harry Potter too you know. Prety please??And no, he's what- 7? I'm 16. I wont be THAT OLD, you know. Just 9 years. Please? I beg you.

Ps- Kalarikkal House- I think I'll take the proposal back. Dont mind, I like Nalan better. But don't feel bad, I still will be your stalker.

Pps- some wife I will be. Attempting to marry Nalan, stalking Kalarrikal House, and having an (imaginary) affair with Arnav.

I don't want to be rude my child, the answer is still no, you are not Kaveri Nambhoothiri. Nalan will not make the same mistake like Kashi and settle for some Dilliwali.

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citi

@citi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#723

The magic of the ordinary moments in life that are at the same time profound. Arnav seems to be living this after a very long time. Not only is Nalan a sensitive, mischievous cupid but also a healer in a way.

The bookstore a place of refuge in an ordinary world, as we always think of them in our ideal world of imagination. Arnav's intuitive understanding of the goodness of the book seller vis -s vis Kashi speaks of the distance he has travelled in his mind when it comes to her.

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sangeetha26

@sangeetha26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#724

Devi,you are extraordinarily talented.you MUST get KH published.

I have never stalked an FF before but THIS is simply stunning.

It brings back memories of dusty little villages,swimming in village ponds and Doting grandparents.

Your sensibilities and wordplay are to die for.

Stalker forever

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 13 years ago

#725

Wht a great way to greet the morning by reading this FF. the first thing I did after opening my eyes this morning was to stalk this FF on my phone and lucky me got an update. OMG I can see nalan and arnav walking around the book shop and also can see the cloth store in front of me. Devi I ask u again how do u do this man??? How I wish I had some talent for writing! Ur really blessed my girl! Way to go!!xxx

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#726

I loved the way you developed Nalan's character.there is a certain charm to his and Arnav's bonding!

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

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Posted: 13 years ago

#727

awesome.. hmmm interesting books...

what happening then

plz update soon n do plz pm meee

Edited by phillips_2909 - 13 years ago

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#728

Nice update.. They need to figure out for themselves as to what they actually want.. 😆 Time will tell all..

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shijinareneesh

@shijinareneesh

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#729

Sry for da late cmnd.read both chapter in a go...da conversation bw dese two is just wow...u r da most defensive female i had ever met hahaha..is Raizada frustrated???