FF arshi : and he returned! part 16 updated!!!!!

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dhwaniianak

@dhwaniianak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

nooo its to smalll

i loved it

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: dhwaniianak
nooo its to smalll
i loved it

😲 still smal?? 😲😲😲😲😲

i'mm really sorry dear! but i donno y i thought it's big 😭😭😭 may b tooka long time to write that's y

anyways thnx...at least u liked it!

😲

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

Originally posted by: lakshyaNkt
superbably written. loved it.

thnx a lot...😳

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Mushfika

@Mushfika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

Originally posted by: divyanshimalviy
osmmm!!! yea me first😃

hahha! 😆 congrats!!!
and thank you! 😳

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

Great, I like how the story is moving along. He's being so protective of her against Dadi. I hope Dadi realizes she's being manipulated by Shyam. Thanks for the update. I'm enjoying reading your work.

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#506

thanks for the PM

nice update

I wonder what he going to say to Dadi?

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Krishika

@KaShArHi_Krishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

Heyy

Awesome part!!! I am glad that Arnav found everything out. Can't wait for Arnav and Daadi action. LOL, Khushi tickling Arnav...so cute!! Please continue soon. Thanks for the PM!!

Krishi