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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

Reply Part 39-->

Hi Soham Swati Sonia Joseph S3J...Finally I m back with my comment...😊...Sorry once again 4 late comment...Part 39 update was completely rocking, Outstanding and mind blowing...Story presentation , dialogues everything was excellently written...I enjoyed reading very very much...Sajan candle light dinner date was beautiful...loved it...this date refreshed my memories of MJHT and Sajan all dates..... U have beautifully showed the change in samrats character after he fell in love ..the samrat who was arrogant n harsh n rude is changing into the samrat he was when he was a child when his mom was alive...even Dai maa felt this change which made her very very happy...earlier if anyone would have disturbed samrat he would have got extremely angry n would have lost his temper but this in love samrat controlled himself ..He did this 4 gunjan this scene was beautifully written n shown....as they say love changes u 4 the better ..the person u love n who loves u will accept u as u r but U yourself want 2 change 4 the better n for ur love and this was shown in samrat behavior in the full update....his wanting 2 make gunjan happy , his thoughts about changing himself 4 gunjan ,his controlling his temper, his concern 4 her when someone came 2 her house so late ,samrat who never waited 4 anyone was waiting for gunjan at the dinner table 2 have dinner with her wow!! ...This really a very sweet scene n excellently written..and when power cut happened darkness fell n he realized she was afraid of darkness at that time the way he calmed her down n held her hand n told her he was there 4 her and lighted candles with her all this was a very well written scene and it showed Samrats caring nature n his deep love 4 gunjan and this scenes also showed how cute n innocent gunjan is and samrat realized it 2 and this scene samrat when he saw Gunjan in candle light he was lost in her beauty and thinking of her as an angel was sweet...I also felt gunjan is indeed an angel as after spending time with her sam was happy n samrats beautiful memories of time he spend with his mom on diwali lighting diyas etc was refreshed and he wanted 2 live that dream again..Dinner scene was beautiful...sajan conversation during this scene..Gunjan wanting 2 make fresh hot rotis and heat veg 4 sam was cute scene n sam relaxing her n telling her everything was hot n he will eat this only and when samrat realized the reason why gunjan was hesitating in having dinner with him why was she feeling awkward the way he relaxed n calmed her down n the way he talked 2 her n told her 2 form her own opinions and then His apology 4 his behavior at the lunch time all this was beautifully written...sam who never apologized was saying sorry wow!! this showed how much sam loved gunjan and then this scene Sam serving dinner and saying lagta hai mein host hoon 😃 and lagta hai order pass karna padega mujko his this words😆...wow! sam being naughty cracking jokes 😃...this was cute... but he joked bec he wanted 2 relax her...but this was the most shocking thing for our sweet Gunjan...😊......sajan happily having dinner together cutest scene and when kheer was served by gunjan n he realized she had made it 4 him his happiness and his praise of gunjan from the heart made gunjan happy ..this was the most beautiful scene...and Samrat jealousy was also excellently shown when gunjan mentioned rahuls name and excitedly talked about him and shared with sam the happy family moments of hers the glow on her face clearly showed how precious those moments were 4 her and samrat immediately realized that friendship wth rahul was very precious 4 gunjan and this made him jealous and his thoughts I will show gunjan Khushiyaan kasey hansil ki jati hain these words showed his jealousy n also showed that as samrat never had any real happiness in his life so he didn't realize that Khushiyaan haasil nahi ki jaati ...I hope he realizes this soon.....I wonder sam ka kya reaction hoga when he realizes that Rahul is not Gunjan's cousin but he loves her and is strong competition 4 sam.....and gunjan can do anything 4 rahul n her family...this scene was also beautifully shown when sam decided 2 leave gunjans home n he made sure noone saw him leave this late at night showed he cared 4 gunjan n her reputation very much n Gunjan's concern 4 him n asking him 2 call her when he reached home this was also beautifully shown..loved The whole Candle light dinner of sajan's...excellently written scene...Gunjan's shock surprise n happiness at samrats changed behavior was beautifully shown during office conversation during samrat serving dinner and during the time when sam said he had cracked a joke ..her surprise n her thoughts said it all how shocked she was ...Gunjan saw something in sam had changed but what she couldn't realize ...both love oneother but donot realize it...gunjan's glows when she talks about her family n rahul ..this scene was beautiful as it showed her family is her life and gunjan waiting 4 sam's call n when he didnot call her thoughts and her saying 2 herself why will sam call he is samrat shergill all these many thoughts showed that gunjan is trying 2 control her feelings because she doesn't want 2 get hurt again n she thinks that their is difference between her n sam status as she thinks she is just an employee 4 sam ..hope Gunjan realizes soon that sam loves her as much as he loves him n samrat thoughts about gunjan n the time he spend with her n his confusion whether gunjan loves him or not and his thoughts about his office staff n that now he will have lunch n dinner also with gunjan and his thoughts about feelings matter in love n marriage etc everything was very interesting and sajan telephone conversation was beautifully written sam calling gunjan again on mobile asking about her fav color n telling her she could call him anytime n asking if she was fine n if she was still afraid all this showed samrats love towards gunjan beautifull tele convo....Loved every scene of sajan dinner n gunjan ...and as they say a child may try his/her best 2 hide his feelings from a mother but a mom always knows what her child is upto ..same was With Dai Maa.. samrat tried his best 2 hide where he was n his feelings but as a mother who knows her child well dai Maa knew immediately sam was making excuses n not telling truth she could easily see sam changed behavior she could see the sam as he was when his mother was alive sam who was naughty cute happy n who used 2 make excuses 2 hide his mischief...this glimpses of that old sam made Dai Maa very happy as she wished n wanted the same samrat n his happiness n smile back n when she realized that may be the cause 4 this change was Gunjan the angel she was waiting 4 this made her more happy ...But 1 question is will Dai maa be able 2 unite Sajan n bring gunjan in sam life?😕😕...I must DAI Maa is very sharp n intelligent mother who knows sam very well n samrat tries his best 2 hide his feelings but he can never hide anything from her ...And the excuses sam made was very interesting 1st meeting at far place 😆then Traffic at 12-30 am n 1:30 am 😆😆...this was very funny n when dai maa asked iss waqt kahan traffic mil gaya sam 2 hide where he was made another excuse😆...and then was lost in dreamy state imagining about gunjan n smiled n went 2 his room ..what a cute scene......U know when sam in gunjan place said 2 himself Kasey log hain yahan itni jaldi Soo Jatey hain abhi sirf 12:15 hain I said 2 myself sam u sleep at 10 sharp😆.what a cute scene n interesting thoughts of samrat..and pictures u put in between scenes eg--while sam was eating kheer n sam calling gunjan each pic u put during this n every scene blended beautifully with the scenes..This was a very beautiful and rocking update ..I enjoyed reading it a lottt...U showed each characters thoughts emotions beautifully ...very well written S3J...👏...
and I am reading part 40 now n will reply soon after reading...
and also Will reply 2 all remaining parts in MBYPH n APHG soon one by one......update soon n S3j Plss Do Pm me whenever u update ur both ff...

Love your good friend
Gunjan😊😊...



Thanx GUNJAN for your reply on Part 39.Feeling nice to read your all sweet words after a long break... V R happy to read that some SaJan memories were rekindled by this update.

Love changes everyone and SAMRAT is no exception. He tries to control his temper, but is not successful most of the time. However, it is GUNJAN's simple nature and her silence that ensures he apologize for his mistakes. And then is seen the SAMRAT that was killed when his mother passed away. What will make a mother figure like Dai Maa happy than seeing
SAMRAT like he once was??

SAMRAT is also getting possessive about GUNJAN now. And it is this possessiveness that is written here in the form of concern. GUNJAN's mesmerizing beauty is what has attracted SAMRAT to her. Now, he is slowly getting to know the real GUNJAN and getting even deeply involved in her.

For a person who received no love, his happiness is justified when he finds out that the 'Kheer' was prepared just for him... a feeling of being wanted is a big thing for someone who has been made to feel unwanted for his whole life.


V'll be waiting to read the comments on the remaining updates.
😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Shreya30456

congrates for starting new thread n teaser is awesome update the part soon



Thanks Shreya.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: fend

congrats for the new thread🥳u guys rock👏 the teaser is awesome very interesting 😳cont soon n thanks for the pm



Thanks Rukma. We will be updating shortly.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sukklover

dear...😃
4 keep PMing me dear..😊..
n me not comment ...actually my net crused down .😭..
but now me cheack all updates ...me just dear..😛.
4 ur hard work.👏..
the job up dear..👏..





keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama
NOTE: ME'LL NOT COMMENT OR VISIT THEM ..WHO NEVER BE ON MINE..ME ONLY ABLE TO THEM WHO ALWAYS WITH ME



Thank You, Tama.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: starasdf

Thanks for the PM.

Sorry haven't been commenting for a while, that's my bad.
Been reading the updates and great job on them :).
Cont. Soon
Star⭐️



Thank You for liking the updates so far. Will be updating soon.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
nyc...when ever u update...plxxx pm...add me in ur pm list..

love
tia
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER



Thanx GUNJAN for your reply on Part 39.Feeling nice to read your all sweet words after a long break... V R happy to read that some SaJan memories were rekindled by this update.

Love changes everyone and SAMRAT is no exception. He tries to control his temper, but is not successful most of the time. However, it is GUNJAN's simple nature and her silence that ensures he apologize for his mistakes. And then is seen the SAMRAT that was killed when his mother passed away. What will make a mother figure like Dai Maa happy than seeing
SAMRAT like he once was??

SAMRAT is also getting possessive about GUNJAN now. And it is this possessiveness that is written here in the form of concern. GUNJAN's mesmerizing beauty is what has attracted SAMRAT to her. Now, he is slowly getting to know the real GUNJAN and getting even deeply involved in her.

For a person who received no love, his happiness is justified when he finds out that the 'Kheer' was prepared just for him... a feeling of being wanted is a big thing for someone who has been made to feel unwanted for his whole life.


V'll be waiting to read the comments on the remaining updates.
😳


@S3J...Sohamswati Sonia joseph thanks 4 replying...🤗...I am loving this new samrat very much ...this in love sam..this possessive sam...I agree with U all Love changes everyone and 4 a person who received no love ...a feeling of being wanted of being loved is indeed a big thing...I am very excited 2 know what will happen next ...

I am not at home at the moment...I am in Mumbai ..my cousins wedding was fixed suddenly so I had 2 come 2 mumbai 4 her reception...and ...then I went 4 holiday with my parents and 2 shirdi also...so that is why I have not been able 2 reply on remaining updates till now...I am still in mumbai but will be back by this month Sept end ..I will start replying on all remaining updates on MBYPH n APHG after I come back home...Sorry 4 keeping u all waiting n Sorry 4 late replies😳...

@ Joseph S3J Thanks 4 Pm n 4 sending Link of latest update of FF APHG...Will start replying soon there also ...and S3J whenever u update Your FF MBYPH n APHG ...pls do pm me ...

AND

HAPPY GANESH CHATHURTI 2 all of you S3J...🤗...May Ganpati Bappa Bless u all always and may all your wishes be fulfilled...

Love Gunjan😊😊...
Edited by 1gunjan7 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Marinajan

nyc...when ever u update...plxxx pm...add me in ur pm list..


love
tia




Thank You Tia. We will surly PM you when we update next and will also add you to the PM list.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7


@S3J...Sohamswati Sonia joseph thanks 4 replying...🤗...I am loving this new samrat very much ...this in love sam..this possessive sam...I agree with U all Love changes everyone and 4 a person who received no love ...a feeling of being wanted of being loved is indeed a big thing...I am very excited 2 know what will happen next ...

I am not at home at the moment...I am in Mumbai ..my cousins wedding was fixed suddenly so I had 2 come 2 mumbai 4 her reception...and ...then I went 4 holiday with my parents and 2 shirdi also...so that is why I have not been able 2 reply on remaining updates till now...I am still in mumbai but will be back by this month Sept end ..I will start replying on all remaining updates on MBYPH n APHG after I come back home...Sorry 4 keeping u all waiting n Sorry 4 late replies😳...

@ Joseph S3J Thanks 4 Pm n 4 sending Link of latest update of FF APHG...Will start replying soon there also ...and S3J whenever u update Your FF MBYPH n APHG ...pls do pm me ...

AND

HAPPY GANESH CHATHURTI 2 all of you S3J...🤗...May Ganpati Bappa Bless u all always and may all your wishes be fulfilled...

Love Gunjan😊😊...



Thank you gunjan for replying here. And please do not say sorry as we understand that our readers have priorities. Do take your time to reply. We will be waiting to read the detailed feedback.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70


Hi Friendz !!

Finally back with a New update, the 1st update on this Thread. Thanking all our readers who bear with us as V have been late in posting the update. V apologize for the same.😳


V thank our readers, who drop appreciating comments for us, taking the time out of their busy schedules, only so we are encouraged to write better, and also to those readers who hit the LIKE tab to indicate that they have liked our writing...😳


MoNayaLover96 (Nila), -CreativeSoul- (Tanzeel), 1gunjan7 (Gunjan), abhi_arshilover, luv_AnYaSGKaSh (Maisha), Coolioqueen (Aishi), ..Amira.. (Amira), -BurningDesire- (Ayesha), --Kinjal--, HSFA (Fatima), ronojoy_ria (Ria), sky05, arzzo (Arzoo),
pakpearl (Fauzia), monaya4eva (Gayatri), aashizin (Aashi), Shreya30456, Archismita (Smita), additive_monaya (Priyanka), fend (Rukma), SM-317 (Shreya), sukklover (Tama), starasdf, Swaatii (Swati), Anjali_12 (Anjali), -Antu-_-Aslan- (Antara), Marinajan (Tia).



mukitzz, MoNaYaRoX, 358674, --SweetFarwii--, monaya_MS, Riasa, ..Ekta.. (Ekta), Mitaly.. (Mitaly), tanisha997 (Tanisha), ammykhan, miriam2, --softyy-- (Neefa)..



With lots of Love,

S3J



*Texture Credit : aashizin {Aashi}
Edited by SIZZZLER - 13 years ago

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