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Posted: 13 years ago
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Archuuu...writing an ss??..*faints*

Great start..can totally imagine arnav going gaga over our khushi..

Continue soon..looking forward to this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting... continue soon =D\


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice archu..congrats for ur first ss..keep writing


thanks a lot dibs dear🤗
i m very happy to see ur comments 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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]Archuuu...writing an ss??..*faints*

Great start..can totally imagine arnav going gaga over our khushi..

Continue soon..looking forward to this



Thanks a lot shalu !!🤗
what to do? shal😃
u faint😆😆
i m totally gaga with this couple😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: archanakamaraj

hey archana I must say that was a great start.. 😃
totally loved it.. 😊
arnav must have swooned seeing khushi in red.. 😳
continue soon looking forward to arhi dance 😊


Thanks a lot dear aaliya🤗
i very happy n glad dear aaliya😛


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Its really awesome... Please do write... An dplease make me your friend... :) Im sending you my req... Pls add me also... Happy Friendship Day
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting... continue soon =D\


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Thanks a lot dear😊
with my glad..😃😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Next part !!😛 😊party in the night !!😍

part 2 : 😊

So..it was a golden n greeny evening !!..The party starts.Everybody laughs n smiles at each other. Akash n payal stares at each other.Payal asked akash am i look better in this suits?? Akash said u looks nice payal.Anjali smiles a lot n very happy to see his brother's married life. Arnav comes to anjali n asked her di ..R u happy ?"But as usual anjali said "chotey " i m very happy".Khushi stands alone seperately she feels awkward n it seems she is not happy with a people dressed there..becoz its new for kkgsr.She just see n put glimpes around herself whether she is ok or not.Khushi feels that she don't want to makes a act or drama in this party..Being his hubby's sucess party.she doesn't want to do that..Becoz she loves him a lot .Gradually everybody had a drink.a glass of wine.

Butsome how anjali was not happy in one side thinking abt his hubby.But she cheer up herself for sake of his chotey.she goes on thinking abt speding abt ehr days with his hubby.both arnav n anjali glanced at each other.Arnav had some tears in his eyesit seems both wer emotional..well he understand his di's situation.Payal comes towards khushi n said her.khushi u looks beautiful today..Khushi said jeji "i m nervous jeji".. y u r nervous khushi.."

Payal said that i m too but akash clears my nervous"..then khushi blabbers herself..Khushi that i m unluckiest person in world .There jijaji helped her chechi"but for me this laad governor bhi na..won't help me ever..even i m always trouble for myself..wearing this dress..oh..DM..im uncomfortable...Plz help me..like that blah.herself."

Arnav comes towards khushi and said what u r speaking urself ? Khushi stares at him .It was quite really funny to watch them.

Nothing Mr.Raizada "then y u r becoming each time halfminded ??? Khushi said who i m ? Arnav said yeah its u !!..

Khushi barked at arnav ..And she also yells saying that's y becoz i m become ur wife "..Ahh..ha.ha"

Arnav gets anger n he just shut up khushi !!.he himself said What the ?? Unbelievable " What a pagal girl" she is ??

On otherside payal n khushi" shared some beautiful moments abt their time in maternal home"

Khushi shouted n laughed n enjoyed a time with payal..on otherside arnav glances at her watching her cute activites n smiling himself"


Anrav's close deligates wer also present there..Arnav comes towards khushi n asked her to come along with him..First she denies a lot..again arnav het upset n he just grabbed her n moves.Then he introduced his cute wife to everybody.HIs collegues n big business boss asked him that she is ur wife.In b/w khushi opended her mouth n said that i m Mrs.Raizada..Just they give their hands but she is traditional n said" namastey " to everybody..those big b's asked arnav ur wife to too good n traditional n respectful to everybody..U r very lucky Mr.Raizada..He whispers himself..even he loves her so much becoz of not only with this n her many qualites makes hin fall in love."

Let we start the party..dances rocks the floor of raizadas..each couple dances like a heaven" there r many rocking songs n the dancers wer rocked the steps n floors
whole raiazadas wer enjoyed a party..Slightly. many friends collegues makes payash to make dance..i m rofling..like a hell.

For a change akash asked payal to join with her to dance ..payal refuses..For the firsttime..he grabber n starts to dance" What
s happening !! here"..Arnav noticed payash 's dance n it seems it doesn't affects him a lot..

They danced very well everybody clapped for payash performance..Next it oneside arnav stares at khushi ..yet again she too stared"..

Arnav's close business friends had a great plan..They asked the announcers to name arnav n khushi.." Arnav got shocked himself but it seems he was very happy to perform with his wife.Immediately kkgsr got shocked n she was very nervous.The light focussed on arnav n khushi".Arnav moves towards her.Khushi feels restless.As usual her "dhak-dhak" goes on high degree..She can't control herself..Inch ny inch arnav steps towards her.Yes he comes closer n just he gave his hand to her but she was standing like a statue..Everybody eyes on them.Khushi looked trun n round.But she can't escape "

Arnav " to Khushi..Come on khushi" but khushi..what happen to u ? arnavji? to me he laughed again ..its a question to u" ?
ha..ha;;
I can't dance with u arnavji..Arnav shocked.He got angry n what happen to u ? damn it..Don't insult me infront of evrybody" Come on damn it"
dance wiht me khushi " no..kyun..aapke saath mein dance karoon ???..just he confused once again

later he asked her finally..But she doesn't give up.So.Mr.Raizada goes very near to her n makes her a slip with his legs."Khushi just to slip but arnav picked her n just he hold her on his arms..it was too romantic.Then he gave her a cook smile n smirk..Arnav tells to her how kkgsr its it fine for u in my arms..whole members cheered them up for dancing.after that khushi lost in his sight..

His eyes wer so powerful that they had a great eye lock..bgm starts it as very pleasant n soft song..raabta...arnav n khushi starts their moves it was very graceful n meaningful with full of love.affection. hate. pain and mixed emotions.Arnav n khushi performed a scintillating moves n gracy dance steps.He just twirled her like a doll..
Arnav loves tosee her in a favourite colour..Each time she makes her to come close..her breathe goes up n down..Arnav looks her with full of loven affection..here she can;t face her eyes towards his eyes..In each turn she remembers a pain in her life..Arnav to khushi ..khushi"just see my eyes..but she asked y arnavji..plz do what i said " she can't face him but she faced him ..she lost herself..those eyes bring a lot of love n affection..Arnav eyes said that " khushi i can live without u " damn it "
Here khushi eyes said"Arnavji even i can't stay without u " He just touched her waist n their performance was wow..

It was too beautiful to watch n awesome dance moves..Arnav mindset says that i don't want to miss u at any cost ..My khushi..her soul cries a lot but they r dancing infront of evrybody"


well..my dear friends.🤗.next part ll b continued later ..just share ur views.my buddies..🤗

With love
Archu 😊
Edited by archanakamaraj - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
yay me first..
it was wonderful just like the previous one... 😊
loved their cute little fights.. 😳
and I could even imagine them dancing.. 😍 😍
great work continue soon 😊
Edited by aaliyahassan - 13 years ago

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