More Than This - Part 3 pg5

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...part one...



Nadia's POV

"Zayn!", Perrie exclaimed as her boyfriend exited through the gates of the stadium, struggling through the gigantic, horridly excited crowd.


Zayn flashed out a bright smile as soon as he spotted the two of us.


Usually, we would wait backstage, but today Perrie decided to have 'a girls day out' while the boys did what they did best. Concerts weren't appealing to us anymore...we've had a heck lot of it.


Zayn came to us, planted a peck on Perrie's lips, giving yet another hot and sizzling headline to the paparazzi and Sugarscape. I was sure Tumblr girls would come up with yet another hypothesis of the way they kissed. Freak was what I called them.


I just stood and stare, somehow, somewhere feeling a stark of emptiness within me. It hurt; the void engulfing inside hurt.


I could've been there.


I could've been Perrie.


If only I hadn't been stupid.


No, I wasn't jealous of the popularity 'Zerrie' had gained. It was the two of them together that hurt.


I loved Zayn.


I knew him way before Perrie did. Ever since we were four. I didn't even realize when the friendship made its way towards love. But probably I wasn't destined to be with him.


My life's story was as plain and banal as any other teen's whose love remained unrequited. Nonetheless, it was still excruciatingly painful; painful enough to keep me awake each and every night, crying over the mistake of concealing my feelings.


Albeit of the fact that I felt bad, I still didn't regret it. Sacrificing my love for someone as sweet as Perrie, who would've probably done the exact same thing as I had done if she had known things ,was somehow consoling to me.


***


"Nadia?", Zayn chuckled as he waved his hand in front my face, making an effort to snap me out of my thoughts.


"Lost in thoughts again, eh? What do you think about all the time? In love?", he asked raising an eyebrow.


Tell me about it idiot, I thought.


"Well no. I was just thinking how you morons missed a great day", I said trying to lighten the mood of the conversation.


"Nadia, it was a girls day out, remember?", Perrie said rectifying my little mistake.


"Right."


"Where are the others, Zayn?", I asked tilting my head for a better view while searching for the boys.


"They're coming around.", Zayn replied.


As if on cue, Niall hopped over to join us. The others followed him from behind.


"Hey Naddie!", Niall gleefully greeted me putting his arm around my shoulder.


"Hey Nialler! How did the concert go? Gosh I just said 'hey nialler', now I feel like those twitter girls.", I said.


"DO NOT SPEAK ILL OF MY TWITTER LADIES! They are the love of my life.", Niall added with a wink.


"Staying outta it, bud!", I said waving both my hands in my defence.


Niall always cheered me up, no matter what. Even when I was burning inside, he made me feel better; I'd find solace. He'd always have my back; always.


"Nad, love if I'm louder would see me?", Louis sang, trying to initiate a conversation.


"That line, for your kind information, doesn't even make sense, Louis!", I replied.


Harry continued, " Would you lay down, in my arms and rescue me?"


"Shut up perv! I'm not thirty two yet, moron!"


"Oooh that was deep", Liam added with a wink.


"And that's the reason I love daddy direction", I said with a huge grin.


"Call Danielle, and report her of this at once. She has every right to know what is being done with her boyfriend", Nialler said with a feigned seriousness.


"Cut the drama, leprechaun! No one's raping Liam!", I ordered.


I loved this. The whole relationship we shared. One direction was probably one of the best things that happened to me. Girls would probably kill to have this, but I was actually blessed with it. I had what was a dream to every directioner. I so wished every directioner could meet the boys atleast once, because everyone deserved to know how genuinely amazing they were.


Although I cried for losing Zayn, I also realized what I had.


These 5 boys. I adored each and every one of them.


***


Perrie and Zayn decided to spend some quality time together; Liam and Louis wanted to meet Danielle and Eleanor, and Nialler decided to head home since he wasn't feeling too well.


"Harry, don't you have plans?", I asked.


"Well no babe. Wanna hangout?", He asked with the brightest smile ever.


"Aren't you like the least bit tired? If someone made me do a concert like that, I would probably not have a single ounce of energy left in me!", I said.


"Gosh I'm used to it! And we don't have anything after the concert today, no meet and greet, no after parties, so no I ain't tired.", Harry said.


"But I am."


"WHAT?!"


"Yeah! I was out with Perrie the entire day!"


"Well then, let's just go your place", Harry changed the plan.


"So you are just gonna cling, annoying orange!", I laughed.


"Yep love!"


"Let's get going then", I smiled back.


________

Errm...yeah I'm writing 1D stuff again. This will be much shorter, I'm hoping. I was bursting with ideas, and decided to write another piece. It'll be a short story, maybe 3-4 chapters.

Leave your comments, tell me if ya'll liked it. Won't continue if I don't get a good response.



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ChaiBiskoot thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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o twixu.. wer do i start .. 😕
the whole thing .. i was sucked into the story.. like literaly .. into it 🤗
ur brilliant ..with writing.. and yes..it gets better each day.. it truly does..
the relationships that bloomed..the fellings.. it was so so natural.. brilliant ..!
aww.. u love zayn so much.. one day he is gonna come around nadii .. im sure 😉 and the dialogues.. girl u got it right there !
and if u discontinue this SS.. i swear i wont tok to u 😈
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It soo gud...I just luv it
It was perfect
Pls pls pls pls... continue!!!!!!!!!!!
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Originally posted by: Purple_Lady

o twixu.. wer do i start .. 😕

the whole thing .. i was sucked into the story.. like literaly .. into it 🤗
ur brilliant ..with writing.. and yes..it gets better each day.. it truly does..
the relationships that bloomed..the fellings.. it was so so natural.. brilliant ..!
aww.. u love zayn so much.. one day he is gonna come around nadii .. im sure 😉 and the dialogues.. girl u got it right there !
and if u discontinue this SS.. i swear i wont tok to u 😈



Really? Itna accha laga?😆
I was actually feeling like a bloated fish while writing this...was done with Iftar, almost asleep with the lappy in front of me...wrote this just to keep myself awake😆
Nope, I've typed 2 more chappies last night, so no question of discontinuing!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: elena01

It soo gud...I just luv it

It was perfect
Pls pls pls pls... continue!!!!!!!!!!!



Sure I will. And I'm glad you liked it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: paintthetown



Really? Itna accha laga?😆
I was actually feeling like a bloated fish while writing this...was done with Iftar, almost asleep with the lappy in front of me...wrote this just to keep myself awake😆
Nope, I've typed 2 more chappies last night, so no question of discontinuing!😉

wot? u have the next two chapters written? 😲 time to pester twixu 😉
i still dont believe..toone Perrie pe Ss likha 🤣
i love ur works always.. they take me in a diff world altogether.. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Purple_Lady

wot? u have the next two chapters written? 😲 time to pester twixu 😉
i still dont believe..toone Perrie pe Ss likha 🤣
i love ur works always.. they take me in a diff world altogether.. 😳



I'm fast!😉 Actually I sorta liked how this came out, and then I was dying to write the next chapter. So last night I was writing them just before Sehri, and my mum was giving me death glares for being up till 3 at night with lappy🤣

I'm over with hating Perrie. It's Zayn's life...if he's happy with Perrie, I'm no one to judge😆
They can get married, have kids, have the most happy life ever! <3 Makes him happy, makes me happy too!

And I love you Purps❤️ You are my only hope when my stories die with the lack of reviews🤣
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God, Perrie?! mann, i just read the name and i didnt wanna read, buttt, i did and i love the story, i feel like Nadia LMAOO! but as per Perrie in the story, god ive so many reasons for having such a strong dislike lol !! But continue soon babe, love the story !!! (:
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Originally posted by: eshaaax3.

God, Perrie?! mann, i just read the name and i didnt wanna read, buttt, i did and i love the story, i feel like Nadia LMAOO! but as per Perrie in the story, god ive so many reasons for having such a strong dislike lol !! But continue soon babe, love the story !!! (:



Haha...I used to be a hater too😆

I feel like Nadia too😛 Thank you for liking it!❤️
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Originally posted by: -Murphy369-

Brilliant chapter love 🤗



Was expecting a lamba wala comment like Nehu's...but yeh bhi chalega🤣
Thank you Sanch! ❤️

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