Do Deewane-( rajeev aamna)-PART18-PG63 - Page 6

Originally posted by: saara 1

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First takraar n den pyaar 😳

Summi to gud....even i can imagine rajeev-aamna....in da rain esp.... 😳 to gud.....

Keep it going..... 😃 😉 😳

--DON--*love ur story* 😳 👏

saara jaanu thanx sooooo much. yep ure right, pyar ki shuruaath nafrat se hoti hai aur dekho un dono ki nafrat kaise pyar mein badal gayi. lekin woh abhi thak dosti ka label lagaa kar ghoomthay hain. aisi dosti ko ban kardena chahiye😆 haan the rain sequesnce was my favourite kyunki jahan baarish wahan jodi, aur jahan jodi wahan thora sa pyar, kyun😉

Originally posted by: group_1223

summi ....wowwww its awsum....gud job.....jus read da whole thing now....keep it up

hey fiza, thanx soooo much sweetheart😉

Originally posted by: sun_423

summi first of all i'am really very very sorry for the late comments......... 😭
aur ab teri story ki baat wah wah wah kya likha hain yaar ek dum zabardast.. 👏 in scenes pe tho main mar jaun mit jaun......they are simply soooooooooooo damnnnnnnnn sweetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt............... 😳 plz agli part jaldi se post karna main wait karoongi........... 😃

hey surya jaanu don't say sorry its ok. aur waise bhi hum jodi fans intezaar karne ke aadi hain, we hav waited 4 2 years 4 jodi 2 confess there love😆. inshallah i will post the next part 2morrow. thanx soo much 4 liking myfan fiction, tum itni achi writer ho aur mujhe cmpliment kar rahi ho, isse acha aur kya ho sakta hai mere liye. soo sweet, luv u

summi continue q nahi ki story......... 😭 😭

summi dear ab chalo jaldi se continue kar do me waiting very eagerly for the next part... 😊 😛 😃 waise mujhe khushi hain ki tumhe meri story achchi lagthi hain........ 😊

hey summi dear .......well done yaar.....super hai part 222 👏

yeh barish wal part excelent hai......sahi kaha ke humari jodi ki kahani mein barish na hoo yeh kasie ho sakta hai...... 😉 😉 😉

i love the part jahn woh ek doosrey ke aankhoon mein kho jate hain....... 😉 😉

jaldi se agla part......likh dalo......best of luck

DO DEEWANE-PART 3



Aamna apne ghar pohanchthi hai aur darwaza kholti hai. Her mum hears the door and calls her. She goes into the lounge where he mum is sitting.

Mum: aamna beta, aaj itni dair kyun hogayi?

Aamna: Woh…bearish…mera matlab hai bearish ki wajah se raasthay bohat busy thay.

Mum: Acha. waise tum tho bheeg gayi ho. Aur yeh coat kiska hai

Aamna: ermmm…. Sujal ka…, mein bheeg rahi thi tho..usne..usne mujhe de diya. Mumma mein abhi aati hoon, change kar lun, bohat bheeg gayi hoon.

She leaves the room and enters her bedroom. She looks at the coat and touches it. Uske chehray par aik muskuraahat aajaathi hai. Who soch rahi thi ke jaise usne Rajeev ke bare mein socha tha who itna bhi burra nahin tha, kam se kam who larkion ki izzat tho karta hai. Who kuch dair apne khayaalon mein gum thi aur phir she decides to get changed.

Wahan Rajeev ghar pohanchtha hai aur chatri ko band karta hai. Who jakar kapray badaltha hai aur jab who baahar aata hai thou ski nazar chathri par parti hai. He goes back in time and remembers wen aamna gave him the umberella. He smiles once again.

Aglay din jabwoh dono sets pe aathay hain tho aamna Rajeev ko uska coat aur Rajeev aamna ko uki chathri lauta dete hain.

Aamna: who… kal ke liye thanx. Maine aapka coat dry clean karwadiya hai.

Rajeev:Its ok kashish, Yeh lo tumhara chaatha.

Aamna was stuned, who aaj bhi usse kashish bulla raha hai, she thought things were ok between them now. She thought, iska naam tho mr attitude hona chahiye tha.

Its time for the shooting. They were about to shoot the first rain dance which is after the lift incident. Rajeev baar baar complain kar raha tha ke aise nahin aisa hona chahiye . darasal usse kal raath ke incident ki yaad aarahi thi. Aamna was getting very irritated.

Aamna: aapko kya problem hai, jaise script writer ne likha hai aapka kaam hai ke aap waise hi scene Karen. Aur koi complain karta hai kya.

Rajeev:excuse me, maine aap ki raye maangi hai kya, aap hoti kaun hain yeh sab kehne ke liye.

Aamna (really angry) You know what, you are so full of attitude. You shouldn't even be around people.

Rajeev: Look who's talking. Waise bhi mujhe tumse koi behass nahin karni. Jaa kar apna kaam karo

Aamna was furious. They decided to pack up for the day and shoot the scene 2morrow.

The next day they did not talk to each other apart from doing there scenes and that is all. Aglay kuch mahainay aise hi guzar rahe thay. Aik din who aik scene kar rahe thay aur Rajeev aamna ko tang karma chahtha tha. Jab bhi aamna muskuraaye hekept on saying someone has a beautiful smile. Aamna ko ghussa aagaya.

Aamna: can you stop it, mein yahaan scene karne ko koshish kar rahi hoon. Agar tumne aik aur baar kaha na tho dekh lena.

He said it one more time and that's it aamna was so annoyed, she was soo annoyed ke she didn't smile for 3 days. He felt bad and after 3 days he went upto aamna

Rajeev: dekho kashish… I'm really sorry, please ab tho tum smile karo.

She couldn't help but smile, she was surprised he said sorry to her. Rajeev smiled wen he saw her smile, he didn't know wot was happening to him, kyun usne aamna ko aise kaha, kyun usse burra lagga, kyun uski hassi dekhe binna uska din adhoora tha, theen din ke baad usse itna sukoon mill raha tha.

Is nokh jhok mein mahinay beeth gaye thay. It was 10th of july andchay din baad aamna ki birthday thi. Usne sab cast aur crew ko invite kiya siwaye Rajeev ke. He had left home earlier lekin sachi baath tho yeh thi ke she didn't know how to ask him to come. Phir she gathered all her courage and decided to call him. Uske paas Rajeev ka number nahin ta so she asked a member of the crew. She called him.

Aamna: hello, kya tum sujal bol rahe ho

Rajeev:haan….aap kaun

Aamna: mein aamna

Rajeev:haan bolo

Aamna:Woh 16 July ko meri birthday hai… tho mein tumhe invite karna chahthi thi. Wahaan sub honge tum bhi aana.

Rajeev:Ok, thanx 4 inviting me. Don't worry mein zaroor aunga.

Aamna: ok, bye

Rajeev:bye

Aamna hairaan thi ke Rajeev ne haan kehdi. Who soch rahi thi ke kuch to garbar hai. Then she thought jo hoga dekha jaayega.

hey farhina thank u soo much. i've posted the next part so do read it

Hey surya u are a great writer, keep it up and thanx 4 liking mine 😉

hehe jaanu now wat to say u rocks 👏 and story ka to poocho mat kya story hai awsome mindblowing fantastic 👏 janu i cant stop imaginging the scene i thought main past main chali gayi hoon aur raj aur aamna ko dekh rahi hoon 😳

hey shruti that si enough 4 me, u enjoyed it soo i am happy. yeo i am trying my best ke in this fan fic u can relive the moments of our jodi and i can live them too