Do Deewane-( rajeev aamna)-PART18-PG63 - Page 45

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

summi dear cont soon...

hey deepa sweetheart welcome 2 my ff and will surely cont in 5 mins...luv summi xxx😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey wat happnd dr......

wer r u?..................................................😲

update soon....
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sooo sorry 4 being late dear..i was bzy with things at work n then my joint ff with my friend Kashish but am updating now dnt worry😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

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O my jannu di main pehli bar FF pe aayi to main ne aapki story read karna start kiya aur ab main ne all parts read kar liye 😳 aur main kia bataon aap ko ke mujhe kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai aisa lag raha tha story padh kar ke main RA ko bohat kareeb se dekh rahi hoon 😊 main ne har part ko sirf read hi nahi kiya di balke imagine bhi kiya 😉 aur jab aamna raj ke ghar gayi thi aur wahan jo howa us scene ko imagine kar ke to mujhe neend hi nahi aayi uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuffffffffffffff kia scene tha 😆 😆 😆 realy di aap ne sach mein bohat acha likha hai 👏👏👏 fan to main aapki pehle se thi aur ab AC bhi ho gayi hoon 🤗 cont soon jannu di 😃

hey nehu jaanu!!! gr88 2 see ure comments here!!!!....i am glad ke tumko meri ff pasand aayi......mera yahin maksath tha ke you can feel close 2 RA aur agar aisa hua tho samjho mera kaam hogaya.....aur mein khud ko detail likhne se rok nahin sakti so im glad u were able 2 imagine it.....😆i'm glad u liekd the part where Aamna was at Rajeev's house...tumhari neend uda di maine uske liye no sorry😆😆😆...aur no thanx jaan 4 being my AC😆abhi cont karti hoon...luv u mwah!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Do Deewane Part 18

The shooting continues till the evening...They were ahead of schedule and finished the shooting earlier than expected...It was now 7pm and they were packing up...

Anil: Guys kyunki shooting jaldi khatam hogayi hum kyun na aaj hi Mumbai laut jaaen?Hum raat ke 11 baje thak asaani se pohanch jaaenge...

Rajeev: Anil actually mujhe aur Aamna ko rukna hoga...Woh kal jis hotel mein hum thehre hain woh apni 50th Anniversary celebrate kar rahe hain tho unhone humse request kiya ke hum unki party attend karen...

Anil: Tho theek hai aisa karte hain hum chale jaate hain aur tum aur Aamna kal laut aana...Waise bhi tum apni gaari leke aaye ho aur ab shooting pe do din baad hi aana hai tum dono ko...

Aamna: Theek hai hum log kal raat thak pohanch jaaenge...

Anil: Ok tho hum nikalte hain...Have fun guys...Bye

Rajeev & Aamna: Bye...

Anil leaves with the rest of the crew leaving Rajeev and Aamna...They both finish packing there things and leave...They were sat in the car...

Rajeev: Aamna tum hotel mein khaana chahogi ke baahar resteraunt mein chalen...

Aamna: Hmmm resteraunt! Thori outing bhi hojayegi...

He just smiles..

Rajeev: Theek hai pehle hotel chalte hain fresh hone ke liye,uske baad hum jaaenge..

Aamna: OK...

Rajeev continues to drive and they reach the hotel after sometime...Both go to their rooms to get ready...After sometime Aamna gets ready and was waiting for Rajeev to come but he still wasn't here...She waited for another 15 minutes but he still didn't come so she decided to see where he is...She went and knocked on his door when he opened it holding onto his shirt...

Rajeev: Aamna tum?...

Aamna: Mein kabse tumhara wait kar rahi hoon...Kahan reh gaye thay?Aur yeh kya tum ab thak tayaar nahin huay?.

Rajeev: Woh....Tum andar aao...

He moves aside and she comes inside...

Aamna: Haan ab batao kya baat hai...

Rajeev: Woh actually mein change kar raha tha lekin meri shirt pe pata nahin yeh daag kaise agaya..

Aamna: Itni si baat..Tum doosri pehen lo na..


Rajeev: Lekin aur kaunsi pehnun?..In Jeans ke saath yahin shirt li thi...

Aamna: Rajeev tum bhi na...Rukko mein dekhti hoon..

She went upto his cupboard and started searching through it looking for a shirt..He just stood there and smiled watching her...Finally she found a shirt and brought it to him...

Aamna: Rajeev...In jeans ke saath yeh shirt achi lagegi...Tum isse pehen lo..Ab chalo jaldi se yeh shirt utaro aur yeh pehen lo..

Rajeev: Yahan...

Aamna: Yahan nahin tho aur kahan...Mujhe pata hai agar tumhe washroom bhej diya tho tum 15 minute lagadoge..Ab Rajeev jaldi karo na dair horahi hai...

Rajeev: Lekin Aamna...

Aamna: Uff...

She went upto him and untied the buttons he had already fastened...He just stood there watching her whilst she was busy opening the buttons...

Aamna: Tumse aik kaam nahin hota...Ab chalo yeh button tho hogaye,ab shirt utaro aur yeh waali pehno...

She picks up the shirt and holds it in front of him but he was lost in her and he didn't realise..

Aamna: Rajeev!..Kya hua?

He removed his shirt and then moved his hand forward to hold the shirt when he ended up holding her hand...As he held her hand,she felt a current flowing through her body and lifted her eyes to look at him...They just stood there looking at each other...It seemed as though they were lost in a different world altogether...After some moments she lowered her gaze...

Aamna: Rajeev....Woh...Hume dair horahi hai...

He just smiled and let go of her hand taking the shirt from her...She took the other shirt from him using it as an excuse to look away...She walked in the opposite direction,placing the shirt on his bed and stayed facing that way...He wore the other shirt and walked up behind her...He went closer to her ear and whispered..

Rajeev: Thanks for the shirt...

He moved back and she looked at him and a smile appeared on her face...

Aamna: Your welcome...Ab chalen?

Rajeev: Haan chalo...

He smiled and then picked up the keys and they both left from there...

After half an hour they reached a nearby resteraunt which was a very cosy place...You got the feeling you were at home...The whole place was lit with candles and the lights were dim...The atmosphere was beautiful..As soon as they walked in a smile appeared on Aamna's face and she looked at Rajeev..

Aamna: Thanks Rajeev...

Rajeev: Thanks kis liye Aamna?

Aamna: Mujhe itni khoobsoorat jagah laane ke liye...Yahan ka atmosphere kitna acha haina...

Rajeev: Your welcome Aamna...Aur yahan ka mahaul tumhare aane se khoobsoorat banna hai...

She just blushes and looks away...He smiles at her reaction...Then they book a table and the waiter leads them to a table situated in the corner near the window...They sat down and ordered the food...There was light snow fall outside and she was just watching the snow and smiling....When she slowly moved her eyes towards him and saw him staring...She just smiled and turned her head towards him..He quickly moved his eyes and started looking everywhere but her and she slightly giggled and then started watching the snow fall again...He then finally broke the silence..

Rajeev: Aamna...

Aamna: Hmmm...

Rajeev: Kahan khoyi ho tum?

Aamna: Kahin pe bhi tho nahin...Aise hi dekh rahi thi...Yeh halki si snow fall kitni khoobsoorat lagti haina...

He turns to look at the snow and then her...He just smiled at her innocence...

Rajeev: Waakay mein..Bohat khoobsoorat lagti hai...Tumhe barf pasand hai?

Aamna: Bohat zyada...Jaante ho bachpan mein jab bhi barf hoti thi tho hum sab dost milke bahar enjoy karte thay..Kitna mazza aata tha bachpan mein...

Rajeev: Maine bachpan mein tho nahin kiya kyunki Jaipur mein kabhi barf nahin hoti par haan college mein jab hum dost kuch din ke liye ghoomnay jaate thay tho hum kaafi enjoy karte thay barf mein...Mujhe bhi bohat pasand hai...

Aamna: Pata hai Rajeev...Jab maine tumse pehli baar baat ki thi tho tumhare attitude se mujhe lagga ke hum dono bohat alag hain...Shayad total opposites...Par ab jab mein tumhe din ba din aur jaan ne laggi hoon tho aisa lagta hai jaise hum kabhi alag thay hi nahin...Aisi kitni baatein hain hum dono ki jo aik si hain aur humari pasand napasand bhi bohat milti hai...

Rajeev: Jis Rajeev se tum pehli baar milli thi woh Rajeev koi aur tha...Aur ab jo Rajeev tum dekh rahi ho,woh mein humesha se tha...Bas waqt aur haalaath ne mujhe badal diya tha...Lekin ab jabse tum meri zindagi mein ayi ho tho woh purana Rajeev phirse zinda hogaya...Thanks Aamna...Tumne dosti ka haath bharake mere akelepan ko door kardiya...

Aamna: Rajeev tum humesha issi baat pe kyun mujhse thanks kehte ho?...
Maine
kaha na..Yeh sab karke maine tumpe koi ehsaan nahin kiya hai...Aaj tumhe is tarah dekh ke mein bohat khush hoon aur mujhe tum mein aik aisa dost milgaya jispe mein band aankhon se yakeen karsakti hoon...Thanks tho mujhe tumhe kehna chahiye...Aur akelapan tumhara nahin balke mera door hua hai tumhare jaisa dost paakar...

He just looks at her with a lot of admiration and he could see the care for him in her eyes...Both continued to look at each other when the waiter arrived with the food...They both looked towards the waiter and then each other from the corner of their eyes and smiled..The waiter placed the food on the table and left..

Both just looked at the food and were waiting for the other to start when Aamna finally spoke..

Aamna: Rajeev dekh kya rahe ho...tum shuru karo na...

Rajeev: nahin pehle tum...ladies first hota haina...

She just smiles and then picks his plate up and starts to fill it up for him and he just looks at her smiling...After filling it she places it infront of him with a smile...

Aamna: lo maine
shuruaat kardi ab tum khao...

Rajeev: aik minute ...

He picks up her plate and starts to fill it up whilst looking up at her and she was just looking at him and smiling...After filling her plate he placed it infront of her...

Rajeev: ab hum milke shuru karsakte hain...

Aamna: so sweet of you Rajeev...

He smiles at her and then both start eating whilst talking casually...After sometime the waiter comes back...

Waiter: aap ko kissi cheez ki zaroorat tho nahin...

Rajeev: nahin hum theek hain...thanks...

Waiter: OK...agar aapko kuch chahiye hoga tho mujhe bula lijiyega..

He was about to go when Aamna stopped him...

Aamna: ek minute...hum dessert ka order de dete hain...Rajeev tum kya loge?

Rajeev: nahin i'm ok...tum order karlo...

Aamna: Rajeev tum bhi lelo na...mein akele khaun tho acha nahin lagega...

He just smiles at her...

Rajeev: theek hai...tum mere liye order kardo...

Aamna: hmmm ok aaj ice-cream khaate hain..

Rajeev: ice-cream?...woh bhi is mausam mein...galla kharab hojayega...aur Aamna abhi abhi tho tum theek hui ho...

Aamna: Rajeev tum mama ki tarah ho bilkul..woh bhi aise hi daant thi hain...par ab mein theek hoon...please mujhe ice-cream khaani hai...please...

She was literally begging him and he finally gave up...

Rajeev: acha theek hai...agar tumhara itna mann horaha hai tho kha lenge...

She gets totally excited like a small child would on getting ice- cream..

Aamna: thank you...thank you...thank you so much Rajeev...

Rajeev: bas bas itne thanks kaafi hain...ab batao kaunsa flavour pasand hai tumhe?

Aamna: hmmm tender coconut!...aur tumhe?

Rajeev: mujhe butterscotch...

Aamna: great...waise tho maine kabhi taste nahin kiya but i'm sure agar tumhe pasand hai tho zaroor acha hoga...Ok so can you please get us one butterscotch and one tender coconut ice-cream please...

The waiter leaves after taking their order and they just sit waiting for the dessert...after 10 minutes their ice-creams arrived and the waiter placed them infront of them and left...Aamna had a big smile on her face seeing the ice-cream...both had two scoops each and without any further delay she took a big spoonful of ice-cream and put it in her mouth and she was enjoying it so much which was obvious by her expressions and sounds...

Aamna: hmmmm....bohat achi hai....mmmm

This stopped him eating...he had just about eaten half a scoop and she was starting her second one...she was so lost in eating that she didn't even realise he was staring at her whilst holding onto his spoon...she was enjoying just like a young kid would do...her expressions were making his smile grow wider and he just watched her eat...after sometime she had finished and picked up her tissue to wipe her face...she got out her lipstick from her purse and reapplied it when she noticed him staring at her...she looked down at his ice-cream and then smiled whilst putting her lipstick back on...

Aamna: Rajeev...

bringing him back to his senses...

Rajeev: ermmmm...haan kya baat hai...

He started looking around and she just smiled...

Aamna: tumne apni ice-cream kyun nahin khatam ki?..sirf aadha scoop khaya tumne...

He looks down at his ice-cream...

Rajeev: oh....haan mein bas kha hi raha tha...

He continues to look down and starts to eat and she was just waiting for him and watching him eat...he seemed to be enjoying it but not as much as she enjoyed hers...when he had finished one scoop...

Aamna: Rajeev...kaisi hai?

Rajeev: hmmm...bohat achi...

Aamna: kya mein taste karsakti hoon?..

Rajeev: yeah sure why not..

He places the ice-cream infront of her......so it is easier for her to eat...she picks up her spoon and takes it near the ice-cream when it slips from her hand and falls on the ground...she bends down and picks it up and looks at it...she then looked at him...

Aamna: woh neechay gir gayi...koi baat nahin aur mangwa leti hoon...

She was about to call the waiter when he passed her his spoon...

Rajeev: its ok Aamna tum meri lelo...

Aamna: are you sure?

Rajeev: ofcourse!...ab lo isse pakro...

She smiles and takes the spoon..

Aamna: thanks Rajeev..

Rajeev: your most welcome...

She takes a spoonful and eats it...she didn't react or say anything,she just kept the ice-cream in her mouth for sometime,exploring the flavour when her eyes grew bigger and she looked up at him...

Rajeev: kya hua....achi nahin laggi?

When she swallowed the ice-cream and finally spoke up...

Aamna: Rajeev....yeh ice-cream ka flavour...bohat hi acha hai...its so nice seriously!...tumhari choice bohat achi hai...

Rajeev: haan woh tho hai...tabhi tho tumse dosti ki hai..

She just smiles and then eats another spoonful...then another...and another...and another when without realising she finished the whole scoop and he was just looking at her surprised whilst she was eating...when she finished she looked down at the plate and then Rajeev who was giggling slightly...she was lost for words

Aamna: Rajeev....woh....mein...

Rajeev: Aamna tum shayad taste karne waali thi...

Aamna: haan....woh...pata hi nahin chala...i'm really sorry Rajeev...mein abhi tumhare liye aur mangwati hoon...

Rajeev: nahin iski koi zaroorat nahin...mera pet bhar gaya hai...aur sorry kehne ki koi zaroorat nahin...mujhe zyada khushi hui hai ke tumne kha li kyunki tumhe enjoy karte dekh ke mujhe aisa lag raha tha jaise maine
khayi hai...

Aamna just smiles at him when he calls the waiter for the bill..After paying the bill,they both left from the resteraunt...they went to the car and he opened the passenger side door for her...she sat in with a smile and then after closing the door he went and sat on his side and drove off towards the hotel....there was still light snow fall and she was sat their lost completely in the snow...she opened the window and put her hand out to feel the soft snow settle on her hands...a smile appeared on her face...at the same time he was continuously glancing at her whilst driving,carrying a smile on his face...after sometime she started to feel cold and decided to turn the window up...she moved her hand to wind it up but as her hand was frozen she couldn't turn it up...he looked at her and then parked the car on the side...she just looked at him and her hand was still on the winder...he was looking into her eyes whilst he bent forward and placed his hand on hers...she felt a shiver run down her spine as his warm hand
touched her hand...he slowly moved her hand and closed the window with a smile...he moved back and turned on the heater...

Rajeev: ab theek hai?

Aamna: haan ab bilkul theek hai...thanks..

Rajeev: tumhe sardi tho nahin lag rahi na?

Aamna: nahin ab theek hai...

Rajeev: OK...

She just passes him a smile and he continues to drive again...After some time they reach the hotel and he parked the car...

Rajeev: lo...hotel bhi agaya...

Aamna: thank you so much Rajeev...

Rajeev: thank you kis liye?

Aamna: is khoobsoorat shaam ke liye...i really had a great time...

Rajeev: Aamna tum mujhe isliye thanks keh rahi ho...ab iski kya zaroorat hai...believe me mujhe khud bohat mazza aaya...infact mein jab bhi tumhare saath hota hoon tho zindagi khoobsoorat lagti hai aur mein har pal ko khoob enjoy karta hoon..

Aamna: aur mera bhi kuch yahin haal hai...

He just smiles at her...

Rajeev: ab andar chalen?...tumhe thand bhi laggi thi na...

Aamna: haan...par abhi andar ja rahe hain tho i'll be ok...

Rajeev: theek hai...chalo..

They both went inside the hotel and after saying goodnight,they went to their rooms...Aamna went inside and locked the door...she took her nightie from the cupboard and went into the washroom to get changed...after sometime she heard a knock on the door...she came out of the washroom tying her hair back and picked up her gown and wore it..she went and opened the door...she saw the waiter stood there with a mug of coffee...she looked at him confused...

Waiter: Mam...aapki coffee...

Waiter: par maine
tho koi coffee nahin mangayi...shayad kissi aur ne ki hogi...

Waiter: ji hume tho yahin room ka bataya tha...kissi aadmi ne call karke kaha tha ke aapke kamre mein coffee deke aani hai...

Aamna thinks for a moment and then realises it must be Rajeev who ordered it for him...she smiled and took the tray from him..

Aamna: thanks...

Waiter: your welcome Mam...goodnight..

The waiter leaves from their and she closes the door with a smile...she placed the tray on the table and took the coffee mug to her bed...she got into the bed and covered herself in the warm blanket and took a sip of the coffee...she closed her eyes as the hot coffee ran down her throat...she was feeling much better now...she finished the coffee and was feeling fine now and she had warmed up...she put the mug aside and held the pillow in her hands and was thinking about all the great moments she spent with Rajeev today...a smile appeared on her face...after sometime she came out of her thoughts and looked at her watch...it was 10pm...she wasn't feeling tired so decided to watch some tv...she turned on the tv and started changing channels when she suddenly put the remote down and sat up watching the tv with excitement...a horror film was on and she just sat and started watching it...she hid herself under the blanket and was glancing at the
screen..when she felt scared she would hide herself under the covers..after some time she started to feel really scared and didn't know what to do..She thought for a moment and then picked up her mobile and called someone....Rajeev was in his room...he had got changed and was sat on his bed thinking about Aamna and smiling...her thoughts had been running around his head since he got back in the room...he was still lost in his thoughts when his mobile rang...he picked it up and saw Aamna's name flashing on the screen...a smile appeared on his face and he answered the call...

Aamna: hello Rajeev...

Rajeev: hi Aamna...kya bat hai tum is waqt?...sab theek tho haina?..

Aamna: haan...woh...nahin...mera matlab hai kya tum mere kamre mein aa sakte ho?

Rajeev: abhi?

Aamna: haan please agar tum abhi aajao tho...

Rajeev: theek hai mein bas do minute mein aya...

Aamna: thanks...

He cuts the call and then gets up and wears his slippers...he locked his door and went next door,knocking on Aamna's door...Aamna heard the knock and jumped as she was still really scared...then she realised it must be Rajeev so she got out of bed ...she went upto the door and slowly opened it...she saw Rajeev stood infront of her and just hugged him really tightly....he was surprised at her move and equally confused thinking what happened to her...he slowly wrapped his arms around her and held her to his side,walking in and closing the door...she was still holding onto him when he spoke...

Rajeev: Aamna kya baat hai...tum is tarah achanak...

Aamna: woh...Rajeev actually horror film laggi hai...usse dekh ke mein darr gayi thi aur samajh mein nahin araha tha ke kya karun,isliye tumhd phone karke yahan bulaya...

Rajeev: lekin Aamna agar tum itna hi darti ho horror film se tho dekhne ki zaroorat kya thi?

Aamna: kyunki mujhe horror films bohat pasand hain isliye...

Rajeev: par abhi taho tumne kaha ke tumhe darr lagta hai...

Aamna: haan darr tho lagta hai...itna ke dekhne ke baad mein akele so bhi nahin sakti...par phir bhi mujhe dekhne mein bohat mazza aata hai...

Rajeev just laughs slightly whilst looking at her.....

Aamna: Rajeev tum has kyun rahe ho?

Rajeev: sorry...woh actually main pehli baar sun raha hoon ke koi horror film se darta hai aur usse dekhna pasand bhi kart hai...aksar logon ko darr lagta hai tho woh nahin dekhte par tum alag ho..

Aamna: ab agar tumhara mazaak udana khatam hogaya ho tho kya hum woh movie dekh sakte hain?

Rajeev: Aamna tumhe abhi bhi woh movie dekhni hai?

Aamna: haan please Rajeev chalo na...

Before he could say anything,she drags him to the bed and sits down watching the film whilst holding her pillow...when she sees him still stood next to the bed...

Aamna: kya hua Rajeev...tum kharre kyum ho?

Rajeev: nahin...aise hi...mein baithne waala tha...

He sits down on the bed beside her and just looks at her with a smile...she sees him looking and turns towards him...he quickly moves his head and looks at tv screen...she just smiles and passes him her pillow...

Aamna: yeh rakh lo...

He turns towards her with a smile..

Rajeev: thanks Aamna...

He just takes the pillow and places it in his lap whilst she grabs another one from the back...they were both watching the movie and Aamna was really getting scared when a really scary part came...Aamna closed her eyes and tightly held onto his hand whilst breathing heavily...he just looked at his hand in surprise and then at her...a smile slowly appeared on his face..He gently took his hand from under hers and placed it on her hand holding onto it...she slowly opened her eyes and looked into his eyes which showed concern for her...she just continued to look into her eyes...both were lost in each other when they were disturbed by the woman screaming in the horror movie....they both looked towards the screen and then each other...Aamna just smiled at him and he was smiling back at her when she realised his hand was still on hers...she lowered her gaze and looked towards their hands when he looks down and realises his hand was still on hers...he just
lifted his hand and they began to watch the movie again....Almost an hour had now passed and Aamna and Rajeev were both engrossed in watching the film...within this hour Aamna would ocasionally hold her face in her hands when a scary part came or hide herself under the blanket...and Rajeev was just enjoying her reactions with a smile and then again get back to watching the film...she had not reacted for the past 20 minutes but Rajeev decided not to look her way just incase she noticed it...after 5 minutes he felt something settle on his shoulder...he turned towards the right and saw Aamna had fallen asleep and he realised her head must have tilted in his direction...when some strands of her hair came forward and fell on her face...she slightly moved her head as she was feeling uncomfortable,he just smiled and moved his hand towards her face,slowly placing the strands behind her ear...she just smiled in her sleep and he stayed in that position for sometime and kept staring at her intently,watching her sleep so
peacefully gave him a sense of relief and satisfaction...he just wanted to sit there all night,watching her sleep carrying a beautiful smile on her face...he came out of his thoughts as she moved her head slightly...he picked the remote and switched the tv off...he then slowly moved his hands towards hers which were resting on the pillow she was carrying and he gently took out the pillow from underneath and placed it behind her on the bed...he then slowly made her rest her head on the bedpost and helped her lie down on the bed so she would be more comfortable...he then covered her with a blanket and gently ran his hand over her forehead with a smile...he turned off her lamp on the side of her bed and then went towards the door to go to his room..he was about to open the handle when he turned and looked back at her...he came back towards her and picked up a pillow and took it towards the sofa..he placed the pillow on the sofa and lied down and after
giving her one last glance,he fell a sleep carrying a sweet smile...
It was now 2.30 am
in the morning and Rajeev and Aamna were fast asleep..when suddenly Aamna started to sweat and she was shaking in bed whilst moving her head from right to left and left to right continuously..she seemed so afraid and tears started flowing from her eyes..she just sat up in bed with a scream..this woke Rajeev up and he quickly got up running towards her and then he sat down infront of her..

Rajeev: kya hua Aamna!...tum theek tho ho!..

She was just sat there breathing really heavily and not reacting when he placed his hand on her shoulder and shaked her a little bit..

Rajeev: Aamna kuch tho kaho!...kya hua tumhe?...tum theek ho na...

When she looked up at him and then just hugged him really tight whilst tears were flowing from her eyes...he wrapped his arms around her to give her the comfort she needed at that time...he gently ran his fingers in her hair to calm her down...she just closed her eyes whilst still holding onto him...he then asked in a gentle tone...

Rajeev: kya hua Aamna?...tumne koi burra sapna dekha...

She gently nodded her head whilst holding onto him...then she finally spoke in a shaky tone...

Aamna: woh...woh actually aisa...aisa kabhi kabhi hota hai agar...agar mein horror film dekhun tho...tabhi mein akele so nahin paati...

Rajeev: mein jaanta hoon tumhe darr lagta hai...tabhi mein yahin ruk gaya
tha...aur acha hi hua warna agar mein na hota tho najane tum kya karti...khair ab tum theek ho na...

Aamna: hmmm...ab mein theek hoon...thanks Rajeev...

She slowly lets go of him and then just looks at him for a moment when there eyes met...both just continued to look at each other when she realised and lowered her gaze and he then looked away...both were embarassed to look at one another and didn't know what to say,when Rajeev spoke...

Rajeev: woh...tum baitho mein woh...tumhare liye pani laata hoon...

He was about to get up when she held on to his hand...

Aamna: nahin Rajeev please kahin math jao..mujhe darr lagraha hai..

He just looked at her...

Rajeev: Aamna mein yahin hoon...paani woh saamne table pe parra hai...mein kahin nahin jaunga...

Aamna: nahin Rajeev please mujhe chor ke math jao...mujhe paani nahin peena...

He sits back down whilst looking at her...he holds her hand into his...

Rajeev: theek hai agar tumhe nahin peena tho mein nahin launga...aur na hi tumhe chor ke kahin jaunga...ab raat bohat hogayi hai...tum so jao...

Aamna: Rajeev tum yahin ho na?

Rajeev: haan mein yahin hoon...chalo tum araam se sojao ab...

He lets go of her hand and helps her to lie down...he covers her with a blanket and then sits beside her...she just looked towards him and he gently placed his hand on her forehead making her close her eyes and then he gently massaged her forehead to put her to sleep...after sometime she fell asleep and turned towards him holding onto his arm...he just smiled at her and then after sometime he also fell asleep whilst sitting beside her...

ok finally i am posting the enxt part....soo sorry 2 keep u all waiting...i will try n cont on a regular basis nw...as most of you know i'm writing Aashna with Kashish so its difficult 2 do both...thanx 4 ure unconditional love and support though...luv u all mwah xxx😳

Edited by kashishdabest - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
summi sweetheart welcome back..................the update was very cute and lovely...............RA chemistry is too beautiful.......................Raj takes care of her very much and is too concerned for her............very beautiful pair............hope u will be able to update atleast once in a wk or so and do continue aashna with the usual basis once in3 days.............cont soon dear............
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Posted: 16 years ago

woww amazing part di itne dino ke baad kiya lakin hume pura phal diya intezar ka amazing update.......... sabhi scene awesome the woh shirt select karne wala then restu wala halki halki snow horahi thi wow so romantic then ice cream wala was very very cute aamna rajeev ki iecream test karte karte khaa gai lakin its was very cute n sweet..........and then woh horoor film wala mindblowing horrror film se dar bhi lagta hai aur dekhni bhi hai very nice lakin acha hai dekhti nahi toh rajeev kaise aata......superb update ek dam butterscotch ki tarah....update soon..luv aarti......

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hey summi i'm so happy that u continue it. no thanks buddy...very beautiful part , aaj Raj Aamna ki phir yaad aa gye i'm missing them alot...pata nahi phir kab saath main dekhay gain...anyway i just love it , horror movies part was so funny, kasay wo blanket main chup kar movie dekhti hay i always used to do like that heheeeee...rajeev is so sweet....waiting for next part.............
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update!😉 it was very cute!
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Posted: 16 years ago
It was a sweet part wid so much ice-cream.....hehe. I actually luved the restaurant scene of Rajeev-Aamna when she was eating almost all the ice-cream leaving him just to stare at her. that was such a cute scene.
But the best scene was the horror movie scene. It was actually funny to knw Aamna luvs watching horror films but she is also sacred n even cant sleep alone. But this thing was actually gud 4 RA.
Throughout the whole scene Rajeev was so adorable. He also stayed in her room knwing she cant sleep alone coz of fear. That was indeed cho chweet.
Anyways, I'm glad dat u at least continued. U can take ur tym but do give us such sweet sweet UDs whenever u continue. And thnx 4 the PM also.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey grt prt
can't wait wen they will confess their luv 4 each other
pls cont soon and try to put more romantic scene b/w the both
thank u for pm
waiting eagerly
cont soon

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