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Posted: 19 years ago
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DO DEEWANE-PART 4

Part 4

It was the 16th of July, aamna subah uththi hai aur jab who naha kar baahar aati hai she sits infront of the mirror on her dressing table . She notices an envelope on her table. Jb who usse kholthi hai tho she sees a beautiful card saying "happy birthday to a wonderful daughter". She was all smiles and extremely happy. Who neechay jaathi hai aur apni mumma ko gallay lagati hai. She kisses her cheek.

Aamna: Mumma thank u soo much, the card is beautiful.

Mumma:Your welcome beta, I'm glad you liked it.

Her mum gives her a little square box and says

Mumma: yeh lo tumhara birthday gift.

Aamna: wow mere liye, kya hai is mein. Waise aapne mujhe bohat kuch diya hai mumma, is ki kya zaroorat thi.

Aamna: beta jitna maine tumhe diya hai usse kahin zyada pyar tumne mujhe diya hai aur wasie bhi aaj tumhari birthday hai. Acha ab kholo isse

Aamna opens the box and finds a beautiful silver ring with a diamond. Uska chehra khil raha tha, she was very fond of diamonds and this was her best gift ever. She kissed her mum again and sed thanx 2 her.

Today Aamna took a day off so she can spend some time with her mum on her birthday as her mum was very special for her. They talked a lot, and then aamna took her shopping. When they return home they eat together.

Aamna: Mumma maine aik party rakhi hai sab co stars aur doston ke liye, mein tayaar hone jaa rahi hoon.

Mumma: ok beta, jao aur enjoy karo, lekin beta jaldi laut aana.

Aamna: Mumma aap fikar math kijiye mein bohat jald laut aaungi ok. Love you mom.

Aamna gets changed into a beautiful white dress. Who bilkul parri ki tarah lag rahi thi who aainay mein dekhti hai whilst doing her make up, and all of a sudden she sees Rajeev smiling in the mirror whilst looking at her. She is shocked. She turns around and whispers.

Aamna: Tum yahan kya…….

All of a sudden he disappears. She was shocked, she was thinking to herself why she imagined Rajeev there, what was happening to her. She decided to forget that incident and she leaves for the party.

Aamna reaches the venue and everyone wishes her a happy birthday. Lekin uska focus kahin aur tha, uski nazrein kisis uar ko dhoond rahi thi. Sab logon ko dance floor par dj bulata hai, aamna was looking very down, all of a sudden someone turns her around and puts his hand out for a dance, it was none other than Rajeev, aamna looks at him dreamingly and gives him her hand, he leads her to the dance floor.

Song:

Aa paas aa,
aa paas aa sanam,
AAa paas aa
Aa paas aa sanam,
Saha na jaye doorion ka gham,
tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam.
Tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam.
Aa paas aa, aa paas aa sanam.
(Rajeev pulls aamna towards him, they are completely lost in each other)

Kal ki kisko khabar hai,
Bas is lamhay ko mujhay tho hai jeena,
Tera kaisa asar hai, tere bina tho lagge dil kahin na.
Kal ki kisko khabar hai,
Bas is lamhay ko mujhay tho hai jeena,
Tera kaisa asar hai, tere bina tho lagge dil kahin na.

Na khwaishon pe kar koi sitam,
Tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam.
Tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam

Rajeev turns her around and holds her waist, aamna gets a weird feeling on his every touch)


Mein hoon, tanhaiyaan hain,
Khwaabon ki rangeen parchaiyan hain,
Tu hai, madhoshiyan hain,
Khaamoshin mein bhi sarghoshian hain.
Na thod pyar ka haseen bharam.
Tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam.
Tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam.
(Rajeev holds aamna's hand enclosing there fingers with each other)

Aa paas aa,
aa paas aa sanam,
Aa paas aa
Aa paas aa sanam,
Saha na jaye doorion ka gham,
tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam.
Tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam, tujhe hai kasam.

All of a suddenrajeev disappears, he wasn't even ther, what was aamna thinking of, it was her imagination and nothing else. She felt him very near her even though he wasn't there. She waited for him impatiently, her eyes were fixed on theentrance. 2 hours had passed but there was no sign of Rajeev. Aamna was getting very angry lekin woh pareshaan bhi thI. Then she heard someone talking behind her.

Aamna;arre yaar Rajeev nahin nazar aa raha, baaki sab yahin hain.

Director:haan who aaj aaya tha aur theen dinon ki chutti lit hi, he is going to goa for a break.

Aamna was shocked, usse yakeen nahin hi raha tha ke Rajeev aisa bhi kar sakta hai, she was disgusted. She realised now why he was saying really nicely that he will be here. Who to dosti ka haath bhrana chahti thi lekin Rajeev ne apna haath nahin diya, who usse nahin samajh paaya.

Edited by kashishdabest - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
👏 👏 👏 ..woooow....great awwww....becahri amna..hhahaha..lol...reh gayi 😛 ...me waiting for the doosti..hehe 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93
hehe jaan bechari aamna 😃 raj nahi aaya na very bad 😭 but i know iskey baad kya hua tha 😉 and i m waiting for that part khoob dadwana raj ko 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: rajeev1

👏 👏 👏 ..woooow....great awwww....becahri amna..hhahaha..lol...reh gayi 😛 ...me waiting for the doosti..hehe 😉

😆i know yaar bechaari, i can't believe rajeev never went wen she invited him, lekin no probz, baad mein aap sab kahenge bechara rajeev, usse khoob daante gi aamna. well i wanted 2 make it more romantic so i added in that imaginery dance😉dosti coming in next part inshallah

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

hehe jaan bechari aamna 😃 raj nahi aaya na very bad 😭 but i know iskey baad kya hua tha 😉 and i m waiting for that part khoob dadwana raj ko 😛

haan jaan sahi kaha, we all know what happens next lekin u just hav 2 wait 4 the next part and see what aamna is gonna say 2 him😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey jyothi thanx 4 the claps, i hope u enjoyed it😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
Ohhh...tooo bad!! Rajeev ne acha nahi kiyaa...feeel sorry for Aamna!! Ab hoga kya...jaa kar uske saaath fight karegii aur kya..aur phir pukii DOSTI !!
😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: sara_16

Ohhh...tooo bad!! Rajeev ne acha nahi kiyaa...feeel sorry for Aamna!! Ab hoga kya...jaa kar uske saaath fight karegii aur kya..aur phir pukii DOSTI !!
😆

😆sarayahin to problem hai wen u base it on a true story evry jodi fan knows wot happens next lekin i am trying yaar 2 add in some extra spice and romance.😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awesome di.......extremely superb 👏 .....and that song is one of my favs 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey swappu thanx yaar, yes i love that song too, i was listening 2 it whilst writing do deewane and i thought i hav 2 put this in, it seemed perfect 4 the situation. 😉

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