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Beautiful_King

@Beautiful_King

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Heiii guyzz...haan pata hai saare haath main joote chappal tamatar aur pata nhi kya kya lekar baithe hoge ki bas ye aaye aur hum ise maare...pata nhi kitne time pehle concept diya tha aur ab jaake CS de rahi hai iski toh...But guyz kya karoon main bhi miss kar rhi thi lekin ye clg free hi nhi chodta hai...but abhi main CS de rhi hoon...toh mujhe forgive kar do...haan haan bak bak band kar rhi hoon...are baba ja rhi hoon...ab neeche toh aao...huh sirf mujhe hi daat te hain...ab pado bhi...

Kria : a sweet, bubly, had to be strong girl who is critically outspoken...n hard to understand for some people...she's carrying an acrimonious truth with her. kria is only 19

Rey : A pungent stern guy of age 21...who runs a huge dance acedamy and along with which he's a successful buisness tycoon...and the hottest bachelor of mumbai.Loves his sis and Grandma the most.

Sharon : A cute quiet girl but if needed she can be one of the most sturdy fighters against any1 for her and her life kria...her sister's life...she had got this way of living life to the fullest attitude from kria's experiences and motivation. sharon is only 18. (sharon and kria are cousins...sharon is kria's dad's bro's daughter)

Riya : a sweet foody girl, who lives every moment of her life to the fullest and is kria's best friend and takes sharon as her beloved younger sister...very caring and helpfull.

Neha: A 19 year old girl whose completing her higher studies in Canada and is in relationship with Vicky and is heart of rey.

Vicky : a wonderful fun loving 21years old guy and rey's best friend understands rey like no1 else can.deeply madly loves neha.

Mr.Sharma : riya's father and kria's dad's best friend.

Guyzz baaki sabke CS unki entries pe hi milega...

n haan next post main prologue hai don't forget to read that too.

Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago

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Beautiful_King

@Beautiful_King

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Aah!!! It certainly was a terribally tiring day for her for him for both of them. The very first day of her job...oh!! how unpredictable it was nonetheless she shouted on her own boss being unknown that she was working for him. And even more racked up state was that he was no less in taking his all revenges may that be for today or for all the past small short incidents. How those immiscible situations were hanging her around between the outrageously tiring and new to her works. But she was certainly not as easy as other materialistic girls he had seen...she worked more than her soo really stern boss cud have ever thought. She broke every dynamic strategy of his for irritating her and take his revenge. He was amazed by the strength of this girl but he had a glued opinion about the girls that the girls are no less a materialistic doll who just come into lives of such rich well known guyzz just for their money and once they're satisfied of money or the guy is introduced with loss these girls just leave them behind and start hunting for another donkey. [Narrator-But had he knew every step that destiny takes, no i guess he had alot more to see.]The whole day had he been ordering like he's ordering a robot and she proved him to be one with each completing task with a lot of clarity and perfection. The clock struck 9 and time passed within blink of eyes. He as soon as saw the time he asked her to come in to his cabin and asked her to leave right away as it was really late he even offered her lift but it was her KRIA...high-headed self dependent girl who needs no help atleast not from her khadoos boss.She left the ofice denying his proposal leaving behind a furious REY, no1 had ever dared to show attitude to him but kria did cuz she is not like other drooling crazy girl whom she even have in the office itself, but the only thing rey knew was she showed attitude to him which was next to unbearable for him and within fraction of seconds his expression took a different track leaving the anger aside his face took up the expression of an evil smile while a plan was arising in his mind. There kria reached home and found sharon and riya sitiing at the dining table with food waiting for her, this got tears in kria's eyes and as soon as sharon saw her she ran and pulled her in and said di aap agaye itna late kyon acha chodo khana khate hain phir sona bhi hai na n they had their food and left for grabbing their dreams after a hell tiring day.

chalo guyzz CS aur Prologue to hogaya ab main bhaging jaisa bhi hai comment and like plzz and haan bhulna mat accha response nhi mila toh aage nhi likhoongi bas yahin rok doongi...hehehe hamesha rude but kena padta hai samjha karo...accha ab isse pehle ki maaro main chali...bye baadme milti hoon...

Edited by sachiarsha - 13 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

awesome dear ...

i loved it to core...

ahh...

im loving it...

dnt forget to pm me...

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Beautiful_King

@Beautiful_King

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: deetha
awesome dear ...

i loved it to core...

ahh...

im loving it...

dnt forget to pm me...

Awwieee...thnk u deetha 😳 n my pleasure to pm u 😃

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Hetal

@hetu29

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Awesum Intro, CS and prologue...
Luved it...
Pls pm me the next part.. Hav sent u buddy req...

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

awwssuuummm yaarrr...

i m loving it...

it's gng to be fun ...

nd pm me whn u update...

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Amazing prologue n CS
loved it
jaldi update karna

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Wow. . . .
Superb intro+c.s. . . .
Realy lovd it. . . .
Awsome. . . . . .
Superb. . . . . . . .
Lovd this kriya's bold nature. . . . .
Plz plz plz pm me wen u update nxt. . . .
Egarly waitng 4 d nxt update. . . . . .
Update soon. . , . . . .

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

loved it...

lekin mereko pm nhi mila...

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Beautiful_King

@Beautiful_King

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: hetalt29
Awesum Intro, CS and prologue...
Luved it...
Pls pm me the next part.. Hav sent u buddy req...

thnk u soo much hetal...i wrote on first page na plzz add my pm ID srry for inconvenience...n i surely wud pm u but do add the pm id that is devilspm...thnx for liking it once again 😳