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bluetaj

@bluetaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

That was heart wrenching. Well written.

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Shay

@shay1990

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

This was such a brilliant read!

In reality, it should be like this because realistically he really needs to realize and repent for everything he's actually done to her.

Fantastic

Hats off to you 👏

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

omg this honestly made me cry so much. I know arnav would never do this, but shows that arnav could do something to the extent that he'd lose khushi without even knowing it.

brilliantly written

xxx

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

U have written it beautifully but I wonder when Khushi will feel like this or will she ever feel like this? Why does she have to play the court jester all the time?

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Mahi Khan

@-EndlessSmile-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Awwhh gal!!it really made me cry!!it was BEAUTIFULL!!and was BEAUTIFULLY written! Arnav really did a mistake oh sorry not Arnav ASR did mistake!!Poor Khushi!!our Sankadevi!! =(
thankx for de pm!update ASAP!

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Always a pleasure to read your work. ..
Thanks for the pm . . .
😊

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Shaz

@Barunkidewani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

wow dear amazing story 👏
felt bad for khushi though...😭
plz continue soon...

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KSG_luv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Wow this was just wonderful!!! 😃

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Paramjit

@Paramjit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Aww I felt sad for poor Khushi, Arnav does never learn. Money can't buy love and definately a wife. He maybe sucessful bringing her home with hook and crook but he has lost her. Her soul very scared. Arnav will need to heal her for all the pain he has caused her. Thanks for the update it was great, and thank you for pm. Please update soon.

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Teesha

@Teesha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

You write beautifully, whether its post venting your thoughts on the episodes, OS or FF's.

Just got done reading P1.

I enjoyed reading the beautiful piece. Thanks for the PM.

Need I mention, it was too sad 😭 My eyes teared up and I could hear a crack in my heart. The poor girl has been through so much and the sufferings just don't end.

R for P2.

Ok I literally cried for this one, my hand was over my mouth literally...😒 That was way too sad for me...

Hope you write another one & make him suffer😆 I sound evil but I want payback😉

Edited by Teesha - 13 years ago