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Beena

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Posted: 12 years ago

#981

just started reading your ff it is really interesting, a completely different concept cant wait to read more :)

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#982

Just found the mention of it by sj_arhi
I have just read Chapter-1 as of now.. Its really interesting.. Now heading off to read further😊

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#983

You have developed the characters beautifully.. The slow growing relation between Arnav & Khushi makes me happy that after so many months of troubles there is hope for their bright future.
Indira as a woman is layered, giving all to her relationship getting not much in return except for nice in-laws. Living in such a marriage is not easy. she is hanging on hopes too.
Amma happy that at least one of her son's marriage life is finally looking up.
I am loving what I have read so far and I'm sure it's only going to be better..😊

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aquagal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#984

I have completed this thread.. Now heading on to next

You have written amazingly, given space & time to every character to develop..

I must say I hate Viren the most.. I would like to know why KBV denied Suraj for Khushi's marriage...

Well the last part was so realistic that any married girl could relate to..

You are an amazing writer😊

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aanchal_c

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Posted: 12 years ago

#985

never read it but now want to

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Amanda D'Souza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#986

@Kalyaani: Nyc story n nyc thread!!!!

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luvbug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#987

i just started reading this story ... im on chap 10 n im thoroughly enjoying reading it :)

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#988

I've just finished chapter 15... Amazing updates till now..the story is building up heat slowly...I can feel something big happening in the near future...something which will have a massive impact on all the Raizada family members...All the characters r in place..each playing a significant role...just fabulous...

I know how creepy it is to get such an expensive gift anonymously and the sender going thru so much trouble to wipe out any link which will lead to him...genuine piece of art u have written so far dear...

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#989

Wow, I just finished thread 1... Amazing story so far...it reminded me so much of the movie Rajneeti...what the political family will not do to get their goals...

Anjali is a real pest in this...I didn't like her weak character in the show, and I don't like her overbearing character in here...poor Krishna...what and all he has to go thru with her...

I wonder what KBV is planning to do to Viren..he definitely needs to be taught a lesson and not spared at all for abusing Khushi and Indira...

Bhavana may have been a very good mother to khushi, unfortunately not so good a mother in law...she should've taken Viren to task and reprimanded him properly for being disrespectful towards her daughters in law...but she proved to be a weakling in this regard...I like Indira...strong personality traits she is exhibiting inspire of having marital problems...

I'm glad Arnav and Khushi's relationship has mended to a certain extent...though the hesitancy is still present...

I'm eager to read ahead now...