THREAD #2 SwaRon FF 'Ill always need you'

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Arshak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Swayamonly
Are usne next update on page 14 mane uski link pm kar di hai yaar... N that too twice...:P:P I thought k usne update kiya so without looking, cmmnt res kar diya tha...hahaha

Actually mujhe abi bhi samjh nahi aa raha hain! 😕 😛

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Arshak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: marauder
Superb update. Loved how you described Sharon's anxiety and fear. Beautfully penned emotion. Waiting for the next update.

thnks man! :)😊

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Poonam

@Swayamonly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Rofl... Sorry Arshak...:P taking all my words back...:P I guess I need sleep nw.. I read Swayamd3 instead of swaron_d3...:P:P par kya karu swayam n swaron ko alag dekh hi sakti...:P:P

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Monica..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

arshak wen r u gonna update,..??

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abhilasha_dream

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Anesha was an indiot, so was happy that u made Swayam realize her worth but y did u make Rey selfish, he is not 😭

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Arshak

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

CHAPTER 28

anesha leaves from there.. and sharon was Angry for the fact that hw cum swayam dates a girl like her.. and all this while swayam was hearing to their convo's and mainly whatever sharon spoke up! And his fist held tighter to each other but he couldn't move more.. and sharon was left standing over there staring at him and his state.. and of the fact that no one really cares bout him.. not even his best friend rey.. or his girlfriend anesha.. but.. his dance partner does.. !
she sighs in disgust of the situation.. sharon goes near to him and again sits near the hospital table and stares at swayam the whole while.. and swayam was very upset on the fact dat he really has no one.. and every1 was fighting wid each other to build up an image in college to be wid him.. and a classic eg. Was anesha and rey! Swayam couldnt bare muj of it! He drops a tear on the right side of his eyes.. and sharon wasnt aware of it.. she laid her head down near swayam in the hospital bed and drifted herself off to sleep and so did swayam..
----In the evening around 5----
sharon's eyes started blinking and she woke once her vision was clear.. she sat upright in the seat still staring and smiling at swayam sleeping.. she suddenly notices a stained tear on the right cheek of swayam's and wiped it widin a second.. swayam too woke by the sense of her touch in him.. swayam looked right into sharon's eyes.. and dey locked their eyes widin each othr. Swayam touches her hand which was rubbing his cheeks to remove the tear and he then smiles at her.. sharon was carried away by his touch.. she felt like she was on cloud 9! And she smiled back and broke the silence between them.
sh :- "Swayam.. as long as i breathe.. i will never allow u to drop a tear.." (smiles)
swayam was melted by her words and he shuts his eyes.. and smiles.. and lets out another tear in happiness dat he realized dat der was someone who cared of him.. someone who wud be there wid him.. someone who does lve him as swayam shikawat the dazzler but as swayam... the normal human..
someone who cares of him.. and not his money and popularity or cuteness..
someone who will always be der for him..
sharon immediately rubs the tear b4 it dropped down.. and swayam was again speechless about her..
sharon now removes her hand and again breaks the silence!
sh :- "Swayam.. yu havent ate anything or drank anything.. hold on.. i'll be right back.."
sw :- "Nahi... sharon.. listen sharon..." (before he could finish..sharon left from the ICU and went out.. swayam was left there sitting upright in his hospital bed and smiling..folding his arms in front of his chest and waiting to see more of sharon's love..)
sw :- (innervoice) :- "I tink im realizing dat who is she really to me.."
sharon enters after 25 mins.. exactly.. and saw swayam reading a book.. wid his spectacles on.. and sincerely straining his eyes to read it...
sharon approached towards him.. swayam didnt notice some1 entering... Sharon came even more closer wid a Spoon and a bowl (filled wid oats) carrying it with both her hands.. and swayam was still not aware of who was in.. sharon spoke up..
sh :- "Swayam.. listen.. have sumtin.. u havent ate for very long!"
swayam now looks right into her and keeps his book aside and removes his spectacles and again sits upright and replies
sw :- "sharon.. did yu have anything?"
sharon doesnt answer that as she didnt care less bout it.. and wid d spoon stirs the oats and takes a spoonful of oats in the spoon and motions towards his mouth on the while she says)
sh :- "Swayam.. open up.. open yur mouth,.. say aaah..aaah.." (she fed him like a baby.. which made swayam laugh a little bit.. and he knew dat sharon didnt have anything from yesterday night)
sw :- "Sharon.. just gimme the bowl for 2 mins.."
sh :- "Why? Oh...ok im sorry i just thought dat yur hands are paining so i'll feed u.."
sw :- "No nuthing lyk dat.. i..i.. just gimme the bowl.."
sh :- "Uhm... ok!" (hands over the bowl and wonders how is he gona eat it all up)
swayam stirs the oats again.. and takes a spoonful of oats and dis tym he motioned to sharon's mouth instead of his.. sharon was shell- shocked on this behavior of swayam.. and he approaches even more closer to her mouth nw.. and says)
sw :- "Sharon.. now my turn... Open up! Say aaah.."
sharon adoring his cuteness.. Opens her mouth and ate the oats fed by him.. and she giggles off..
and
sw :- "Haaan... Very Good! Good girl.."
(sharon was laughing by his compliment.. and she den grabbed the bowl and starting feeding him the whole while.. swayam enjoyed eating oats wid her.. and was smiling in each and every spoon she fed him.. sharon admired the way he ate the oats and it was the last spoon)
sh :- "Swayam.. now this is the last spoon.. chalo ab open up.. the rocket is gonna finally lift up to swayam's mouth... (She waved her hands around swayam's face as if hypnotizing him.. and motioned to his mouth after she finished her dialogue.. and swayam opened up greedily.. and)
sh :- "Der Verry gud..." (laughs.. and seeing sharon laughing.. swayam couldnt contrl he started laughing along wid her.. after swallowing the chunk and der was a bit stain of oats below his lips carved in a manner of covering the whole side of the chin.. sharon noticed it on the while laughing and wipes it off.. and licks em.. she felt lyk as if dey wer already married.. )
swayam Again shocked by this expression.. and he felt 10,000 jolts of shock all over his body frm the top tip of his hair to the underground skin cell of his long toe when she touched him.. )
sw :- "Sharon.. did yu eat anything?"
sh :- "uhm... swayam.. i gtg just 2 mins.." (she gets up from the seat and tends to leave but swayam's hurt hand caught a tight hold of her wrist and she was den stopped by him)
sw:-" Answer me and den i will leave u.."
sh :- "No... i havent ate anything till now!"
swayam shuts his eyes in pain and sorrow of her.. and was distracted by that and left her hands.. and sharon widout turning back left the room... swayam was in sorrow and disgust and most of all regrets... on why the hell did she not eat her food till now?
sharon rushes out of the ICU room and was in tears and she was now on running.. she tripped over the nurse wich cured swayam.. and the nurse was about to fall.. but sharon grabs a hold of her.. and )
sh :- "Im...im.. srry..." (the nurse notices sharon's tears and now again wonders wats wrong..)
nu :- "Miss.. rai prakash.. i think der will be a Problem wid swayam.."
sharon all again in panics and stress and is nervous and on the bottom line she breathes heavier and wid a questioned face asked the nurse back..
sh :- "Wha...whats the problem now?"
nu :- "Im afraid dat on the accident progress swayam has lost a hell of a blood and needs more of B+ blood if he needs to survive longer den dis.."
sh :- "B+ ? my blood is B+.. is it possible if i donate my blood for him?"
nu :- "Sure.. as far as it can cure him and if yur ok wid it.."
sh :- "Yes yes im fine wid it.. lets start.."
--- in the same operation room of swayam's.. sharon's body ws placed in the hospital bed and enterred the ICU which shocked swayam.. and he wonders wats rong wid her now..? sharon's eyes were shut.. and the nurses pleaded for swayam to sleep and lay down.. and will tell wats going on later to him---
swayam and sharon were on the oppositely adjacent to each other.. wid both their eyes shut.. and d the Donation of blood progress starts..
the progress ended at 7 in the evening.. The ICU room outside ws filled wid swayam and sharon's parents and friends worrying.. excluding anesha... and this tym rey was also der.. Freaking worried bout swayam and a huge sorry to rey. He was biting his nail.. until it ended..
the nurse came out and said the operation has been succeeded and swayam and sharon are both fine now..
every1 were relieved on listening to this.. they all took a huge sigh of breathe.. and let them both rest over there in the room and decided not to disturb..
---IN THE ICU ROOM---
swayam slowly opens his eyes.. and blinks until his vision was clear and so did sharon.. swayam was confused on what actually happened right now.. and took a sudden glance at someone in the left of his hospital bed and saw sharon laying in the bed like an angel.. but why was she injected by some injections and connected to it was a bulb like structure container wid blood on top of her hospital bed.. and was worried and den sharon opened up completely and had a glimpse of swayam's state.. he was even worse den sharon.. sharon was worried about him.. but she gave him a cute smile..
sh:- "Feeling better?"
sw :- "Actually better den hw i was!"
sw :- (sighs and breaks the silence after a while) :- "Sharon.. wat is going on? Wat is all dis?"
sh :- "Uhmm.. the blood donation progress was going on.."
sw :- "The wat??"
sh :- "The blood donation progress.. i donated some of my blood to u.."
sw :- "What but why??" (confused)
sh :- "becz if i didnt.. den it wud've been firstly difficult for uu to survive.. and if i call ur parents.. it'll take maximum 2-3 hours to reach here.. and no one was der to donate blood for u.. and i never felt it a crime to donate my blood to make u live.. even though if it is for the fact tht i hv to die.."
sw :- "Sssh!.. stop saying that.."
sh :-"But.."
sw :- "Yu will never die.. as long as i live i will always save u.. u do not realize wat a big thing you have done for me.."
sh :- "I felt it small.."
sw :- "Maybe fr u.. but not me.." (smiles)
sharon was melted and smiles back..

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sorry if small..

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Poonam

@Swayamonly

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Res
unres
omg... So cute... N adoorable too that Sharon donated him blood...:) She really loves him alot.. Bt I guess pyar aisa hotahi hai..:) Swayam too feed her..:) awww...
bt at d same time, I felt bad for Swayam that there's none for him who truely cares for him without any expectations... Bt thankfully he realised that's he has Sharon...:)

Edited by Swayamonly - 13 years ago

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Jum

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

UNRES!
omg dis was reallly beautiful Loved it!
and btw.. Sharon is Madly in love wid him.. and she proved dat she cares alottt fr him.. ! 😳 awww! 😊 really adorable...
WISH YU CONTINUED! 😡 !!
and i HATE THAT shivam!!

Aww.. sharon feeding Swayam... really Beautifulll 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

PM SOOON.. AND DEMAND? 😲

Edited by jumrulzz - 13 years ago